Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g. "watch skies" and "take picture capturing"). Use correct verb forms and articles.

Example: Yes, I enjoy photographing landscapes, especially mountain scenes. For example, I often take photos at sunrise and sunset because the light is dramatic, and I keep the best shots on my phone as memories.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference or balance statement, use linking words for contrast, and correct small grammar issues (e.g. "various variety" is redundant). Keep to two or three sentences maximum and provide a brief specific example.

Example: I like both, but I prefer rural areas for relaxation and cities for energy. For instance, I enjoy city architecture when I visit museums, whereas on vacation I stay in the countryside to enjoy quiet fields and fresh air.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and fix grammar (remove duplicate "I"), choose one clear idea: preference for home-country views or foreign views. Provide concise supporting reasons with specific examples and correct word order (e.g. "mountains near my house").

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I can easily visit nearby mountains, parks and museums. For example, I often watch the sunset from a hill close to my home and try local street food afterwards.

× Yes, I love taking pictures of landscapes and sometimes the scenery of mountains.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of landscapes and sometimes of mountain scenery.

The phrase 'the scenery of mountains' is awkward; use the noun phrase 'mountain scenery' or 'scenery of mountains'. Also include 'of' after 'sometimes' to parallel 'taking pictures of landscapes'. This improves naturalness and noun usage.

× I regularly take photos in the morning and in the evening sunsets and along with that I love to watch skies and take picture capturing in my device and make it fond memories.

✓ I regularly take photos in the morning and at sunset, and I also love to watch the sky and capture pictures on my device to make fond memories.

Multiple issues: 'in the evening sunsets' is incorrect — use 'at sunset'. 'Along with that' is wordy; 'I also' is clearer. 'Watch skies' should be 'watch the sky' (singular with definite article). 'Take picture capturing in my device' is ungrammatical; use 'capture pictures on my device'. 'Make it fond memories' should be 'to make fond memories'. These changes fix verb forms and prepositions and improve sentence structure.

× I like both urban and rural areas.

✓ I like both urban and rural areas.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. Included here to show no error of adjective use.

× In the city I enjoy the bustling streets and various variety of architecture, while the countryside I appreciate the peaceful natural scenery and open spaces.

✓ In the city, I enjoy the bustling streets and the variety of architecture, while in the countryside I appreciate the peaceful natural scenery and open spaces.

'Various variety of architecture' is redundant; use 'the variety of architecture' or 'various architectural styles'. Also add 'in' before 'the countryside' for parallel structure and comma after introductory clause. These corrections improve clarity and adjective use.

× Along with that, I love to go and stay there for a while on my vacations also to enjoy the views.

✓ I also love to stay there for a while during my vacations to enjoy the views.

'Along with that' is unnecessary. 'Go and stay there' is wordy; 'stay there' suffices. Use 'during my vacations' instead of 'on my vacations'. Place 'also' appropriately. These changes fix sentence structure and preposition use.

× I I prefer views of my own country where I can go out and enjoy the views of sunset and many variety of museums and parks over there.

✓ I prefer the views of my own country, where I can go out and enjoy the sunsets and the variety of museums and parks there.

Double 'I' is a typo. 'Views of sunset' should be 'sunsets' plural or 'the sunset' with article. 'Many variety' is incorrect; use 'the variety' or 'many kinds of'. 'Over there' is informal and redundant; 'there' suffices. Also add comma before the relative clause for clarity.

× And along with that I also enjoy the street food and the variety of different types of places like mountains are just near my houses.

✓ I also enjoy the street food and the variety of places, such as the nearby mountains close to my home.

'And along with that' is redundant. 'Variety of different types of places' is wordy; 'variety of places' is enough. 'Like mountains are just near my houses' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'such as the nearby mountains close to my home'. Use singular 'home' rather than 'houses' when referring to where you live. These changes fix preposition use and sentence structure.