Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Reduce small grammar mistakes and redundancy, keep answers concise (max 5 sentences), and use clear linking words. Correct subject-verb agreement and combine short sentences for fluency. Add one specific example of a scene you photographed to make content more vivid.

Example: Yes, I love photographing different views because it helps preserve memories. For example, last year I photographed a sunset over a mountain lake, and the warm light made the scene unforgettable. As I grew older, I stopped worrying about storage and started enjoying how photos capture moments for me.

Suggestion: Fix grammatical errors (subject-verb agreement) and vary vocabulary slightly. Use a linking word to contrast city and rural features, and give a specific detail or short example to support your preference.

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because, unlike the noisy and chaotic city, the countryside is peaceful and relaxing. For instance, a nearby farm with rolling fields and fresh air helps me unwind after a busy week.

Suggestion: Improve grammar (agreement: 'who love' → 'who loves') and avoid repetition of 'new'. Add a brief reason or a concrete example of a country or landscape you want to visit to make the answer more specific.

Example: I'm satisfied with the views at home, but I would love to visit other countries to experience different landscapes and cultures. For example, I'd like to see the fjords in Norway because their dramatic cliffs and clear water offer a completely different perspective.

× That are hard to forget.

✓ Those are hard to forget.

The demonstrative pronoun 'That' is singular while 'are' requires a plural subject. Use the plural demonstrative 'Those' to match the plural verb 'are' and plural noun implied; alternatively change verb to singular. Suggestion: replace 'That are' with 'Those are' when referring to multiple memories or moments.

× Rural areas feels peaceful and relaxing to me with fresh air and greenery that help me keep my mind calm.

✓ Rural areas feel peaceful and relaxing to me, with fresh air and greenery that help me keep my mind calm.

Subject 'Rural areas' is plural, so the verb must be plural: 'feel' not 'feels'. Also add a comma after the clause for clarity. Ensure subject-verb agreement when the subject is plural.

× It is exciting to see new places and new perspectives because I am the type of person who love to explore new things.

✓ It is exciting to see new places and new perspectives because I am the type of person who loves to explore new things.

The relative clause refers to 'person' which is singular, so the verb must be third person singular 'loves' not 'love'. Use correct verb form to match singular subject in relative clauses.