Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and word order (e.g., "After classes I often...", not "when I finish my whole day school class"). Avoid repetition and filler words.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, after my classes I often walk back to my dormitory and take pictures of the blue sky and nearby trees because the light is nice in the late afternoon.

Suggestion: Give a direct preference or say you have no strong preference, then support it with clear reasons and linking words. Remove hesitations (umm, uh) and finish your thought. Use comparative language correctly (e.g., "more relaxing", "more opportunities").

Example: I don't have a strong preference, but I tend to like rural views more because life there feels more relaxing and you have more opportunities to enjoy nature. However, urban areas offer lively streets and interesting architecture, which I also appreciate.

Suggestion: Answer directly and organize your idea: state your current preference, give a clear reason, and include a future condition if relevant. Avoid repetition and fix grammar (e.g., "I haven't traveled around my whole country"). Use linking phrases like "because", "however", and "in the future".

Example: At the moment I prefer landscapes in my own country because I haven't traveled everywhere here yet and there are many places I want to see. However, in the future, after I have explored my country, I would like to visit other countries to see different scenery.

× Yes, I really like taking pictures of different views I meet in my daily life.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures of the different views I encounter in my daily life.

The original has awkward structure and a verb choice issue. 'Meet' is used incorrectly with 'views'; use 'encounter' or 'see'. Also add 'the' to refer to specific views seen in daily life. Improve word choice and sentence flow.

× For example when I finish my whole day school class I just to go back to my dormitory and only way I will take some nice picture of the blue sky and maybe the natural world.

✓ For example, after I finish a whole day of classes I just go back to my dormitory, and on the way I often take some nice pictures of the blue sky and the natural surroundings.

Multiple issues: word order and unnecessary infinitive 'to' after 'just'; article use ('a whole day of classes'); 'only way' should be 'on the way'; plural 'pictures' preferred; 'natural world' better as 'natural surroundings'. Punctuation added for clarity.

× Well, I don't have a specific one to really love to live in.

✓ Well, I don't have a specific one that I really prefer to live in.

The original uses unclear pronoun 'one' and awkward infinitive 'to really love to live in'. Replace with 'that I really prefer to live in' for clarity and correct relative clause structure.

× Umm, I think in the rural area may the life well-being may be more relaxing and you can have more chance to, umm, get into the natural world.

✓ I think rural areas may offer a more relaxed lifestyle and give you more opportunities to enjoy nature.

Awkward phrasing 'the life well-being' and repeated 'may'. Use 'rural areas' plural, 'a more relaxed lifestyle', and 'opportunities to enjoy nature' for natural English. Removed filler words.

× But in the urban area you can, uh, enjoying the.

✓ But in urban areas you can enjoy other conveniences and activities.

Incorrect verb form 'enjoying' after auxiliary 'can' — should be base form 'enjoy'. Also incomplete sentence 'the.' Complete the thought by adding plausible contrast 'other conveniences and activities'.

× MMM Now I think I prefer the views and the beautiful landscapes in my own country 'cause I don't just I don't go on the everywhere in my country, but I think I when I finished travel around my own country, I will prefer to the other countries.

✓ Now I think I prefer the views and beautiful landscapes in my own country because I haven't traveled everywhere in it yet; but when I have finished traveling around my country, I will prefer to visit other countries.

Multiple problems: informal filler 'MMM' removed; use 'because' not ''cause' in formal correction; 'I don't just I don't go on the everywhere' is ungrammatical — replace with 'I haven't traveled everywhere in it yet'. Tense and verb forms corrected: 'when I have finished traveling' (present perfect) and 'prefer to visit other countries' clarifies intention. Adjusted articles and verb forms for grammaticality.