Part 1
Examiner
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Candidate
Actually, seldom. I prefer to watch views by my eyes.
Examiner
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Candidate
Of course rural areas. I like mountains, lakes, farming LA farming field and farming paths. I prefer natural. Natural scenery.
Examiner
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Candidate
It's difficult to compare for me, just I prefer nature views, whatever in my country or in other countries.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Score: 62.0Suggestion: 回答要更完整、自然并使用连接词。可先直接回应问题,再给出原因和简短例子。注意句子数量不要超过五句,避免口语化缩略并使用更丰富词汇。
Example: Not really — I seldom take photos of views because I prefer to enjoy the scenery with my own eyes. For example, when I visit a lake or mountain, I focus on the atmosphere and sounds rather than taking pictures, so the moment feels more relaxing and memorable.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Score: 58.0Suggestion: 回答要更有条理,使用连接词列出具体偏好并给出原因和一两个细节例子,避免重复和口误。将零碎短句合并成自然流畅的回答。
Example: I definitely prefer rural views because I enjoy natural landscapes such as mountains, lakes and farmland. The quiet paths and open fields help me relax, and I love seeing seasonal changes like rice paddies turning green in spring.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答应更直接并使用连接词说明理由。可以先给出立场,然后比较或解释原因,并举一两个具体例子来支持你的观点。保持句子自然通顺。
Example: I don't really mind whether the scenery is at home or abroad; what matters to me is natural beauty. For instance, a peaceful mountain trail in my country is as appealing to me as a lakeside view abroad, as long as it offers fresh air and tranquility.
× Actually, seldom. I prefer to watch views by my eyes.
✓ Actually, seldom. I prefer to look at views with my own eyes.
问题类型接近“句子结构错误”和“副词位置/用法”。原句中“seldom”单独使用可接受,但下一句中用“watch views by my eyes”不地道且语法不正确:英语中通常用动词“look at”或“see”表示“看”,而不是“watch”后接“views”;并且短语“by my eyes”应改为“with my own eyes”或直接省略。建议使用固定搭配“look at views with my own eyes”。(建议多背常用动词短语,如 look at, see, watch 的用法区别)
× Of course rural areas. I like mountains, lakes, farming LA farming field and farming paths. I prefer natural. Natural scenery.
✓ Of course, rural areas. I like mountains, lakes, farming fields and farm paths. I prefer natural scenery.
问题类型涉及名词/形容词使用及冠词/词序(归为“错误使用形容词或名词”和“文章/词形错误”)。原句缺少逗号应为“Of course, rural areas.”,“farming LA farming field”疑为笔误,应为“farming fields”;“farming paths”不自然,改为“farm paths”或“rural paths”。“I prefer natural. Natural scenery.” 表达重复且不完整,应合并为“I prefer natural scenery.”。建议注意名词复数形式及固定搭配,避免重复碎片句。
× It's difficult to compare for me, just I prefer nature views, whatever in my country or in other countries.
✓ It's difficult for me to compare; I just prefer natural views, whether in my country or in other countries.
问题类型为“句子结构错误”及“连词/词序使用问题”。原句“It’s difficult to compare for me”中介词短语位置不自然,常用结构为“difficult for me to do something”。“just I prefer”词序错误,应为“I just prefer”。“whatever in my country or in other countries”用词不当,常用连接词是“whether... or...”。因此改为“It’s difficult for me to compare; I just prefer natural views, whether in my country or in other countries.”建议学习并记忆常见固定句型(difficult for sb to do, whether...or...),注意副词位置(just)放在主语之后。