Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid awkward phrases and repetition (e.g., “pleasant, pleasant time”). Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me remember special moments. For example, I often photograph sunsets at the beach so I can look back later and relive the calm atmosphere.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence and more specific supporting details. Correct grammar (e.g., “rare for me” → “less common for me”; “make me come” → “appeal to me” or “draw me”). Use linking words like “because” and “for example” and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer rural views because they are less common for me as a city resident and feel more peaceful. For example, I enjoy landscapes with low buildings, small villages and plenty of green fields, which help me relax.

Suggestion: Answer directly and then give specific contrasts. Fix grammar and word choice (e.g., “my countries” → “my country”; “different buildings” → “different architectural styles”). Use a linking word such as “however” or “also” to show contrast and keep it to a couple of sentences.

Example: I like views in both my country and abroad because each offers something different. For example, my country has unique traditional sites like temples and palaces, while other countries often feature modern or distinct architectural styles that I find interesting.

× Yes, I am urged to record the beautiful moment, and in the future when I look at the pictures, I will memorize the pleasant, pleasant time.

✓ Yes, I am eager to record beautiful moments, and in the future when I look at the pictures, I will remember those pleasant times.

The original uses 'urged' incorrectly; 'urged' means being forced by someone, but the intended meaning is wanting or being keen, so 'eager' is correct (adjective). 'Memorize' is used incorrectly for recalling memories; 'remember' is the appropriate verb. Plural and article usage: 'the beautiful moment' should be plural 'beautiful moments' to match general photography activities, and repeating 'pleasant' twice is redundant. Suggestion: use 'eager' for desire and 'remember' for recalling, and match singular/plural consistently.

× I prefer rural areas because I live in the city so the rural areas are more rare for me and also the low buildings, villages and plants make me come.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I live in the city, so rural areas are rarer for me, and the low buildings, villages, and greenery attract me.

Preposition and word choice errors: 'more rare for me' is awkward; use comparative adjective 'rarer' without 'more'. 'Make me come' is unnatural; English uses verbs like 'attract' or 'appeal to' to express that something draws someone. 'Plants' is better as 'greenery' or 'nature' in this context. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: use correct comparative form and verbs that convey attraction (e.g., 'attract', 'appeal to').

× I prefer views both in my country and other countries.

✓ I prefer views both in my country and in other countries.

Parallel prepositional phrases require the preposition 'in' to be repeated for clarity: 'in my country and in other countries'. This avoids ambiguity and improves parallel structure. Suggestion: keep parallel structures by repeating prepositions when listing comparable phrases.

× In my countries there are many traditional old buildings like temples and palaces which are unique in the world and in other countries there are many different buildings.

✓ In my country there are many traditional old buildings, such as temples and palaces, which are unique in the world, and in other countries there are many different kinds of buildings.

'In my countries' is incorrect because the speaker refers to their one country; use singular 'country'. Also add commas and a clearer connector 'such as' for examples. 'Different buildings' is vague; 'different kinds of buildings' is clearer. Suggestion: ensure correct singular/plural for 'country' and use phrases like 'such as' for examples and 'kinds of' when contrasting types.