Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cümle yapısını ve zaman uyumunu düzeltin; gereksiz tekrarları azaltın ve destekleyici ayrıntılar ekleyin. Örneğin, "I like taking pictures of different views" ana fikrini belirttikten sonra neden hoşunuza gittiğini bir veya iki kısa cümle ile açıklayın (duygu, anı, kompozisyon gibi). Ayrıca fiil formlarına dikkat edin (örneğin 'they relax me' değil 'they relax me' doğru; 'I like to taking' yerine 'I like taking' kullanılmalı). Bağlaçlarla akışı iyileştirin (because, so, which) ve cümle sayısını 3–4 cümleyle sınırlayın.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they make me feel calm and happy. For example, seaside scenes remind me of peaceful holidays and help me relax. I also like trying different compositions to capture the mood of a place.

Suggestion: Cümleniz uzun ve tekrarlara sahip; daha kısa, net bir ana fikir ve spesifik destekleyici nedenler verin. Örneğin, "I prefer urban views" deyip ardından iki kısa neden ekleyin (enerji, çeşitlilik, architecture). Ayrıca dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin (örneğin 'the life is going on' yerine 'life is going on', 'everyone has special' yerine 'everyone is unique'). Bağlaçlar kullanarak mantıksal bağlantı kurun ve cümle sayısını 2–3 ile sınırlandırın.

Example: I prefer urban views because the city feels lively and full of activity. For example, I enjoy watching people in cafes and the mix of old and modern buildings that create interesting scenes.

Suggestion: Cevabınızı daha doğal ve düzenli hale getirin: kısa bir ana cümleyle (I like both) başlayın, ardından her iki seçeneğe dair birer kısa ve spesifik neden verin (ait olma hissi, farklı kültürler ve manzaralar). Tekrarlardan kaçının ve dilbilgisini düzeltin ('it belongs to me' yerine 'they are familiar to me' veya 'they belong to me' gibi daha doğal ifadeler; gereksiz 'and and' tekrarını kaldırın).

Example: I like both views because each offers something different. In my country I feel a strong connection to familiar landscapes, while views abroad are exciting because they show different cultures and scenery.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I like seeing other kinds of seasides and I like to taking pictures of them because they make me happy and they relaxed me.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I like seeing other kinds of seaside scenes and I like taking pictures of them because they make me happy and they relax me.

The phrase 'to taking' is incorrect: after verbs like 'like' we use the gerund (verb + -ing) or the infinitive, but not 'to' plus gerund. Use 'like taking' or 'like to take'. Also 'seasides' is uncommon; 'seaside scenes' or 'seaside' is better. 'They relaxed me' uses past tense 'relaxed' while the meaning requires present tense; change to 'relax me' to match present habitual action. Suggestion: Use consistent verb forms after 'like' (e.g., 'like taking' or 'like to take') and keep present tense for habitual facts (use 'relax', not 'relaxed').

× I prefer the views of urban areas because the vivid atmosphere makes me feel like the life is going on and and the fact that the life goes on make me realize that everyone has life and everyone has special.

✓ I prefer the views of urban areas because the vivid atmosphere makes me feel like life is going on, and the fact that life goes on makes me realize that everyone has a life and everyone is special.

Problems include unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'life' which is unnatural here; use 'life' or 'a life'. Subject-verb agreement: 'the fact that life goes on make me' should be 'makes me'. 'Everyone has special' is missing a noun or adjective form; use 'everyone is special' or 'everyone has something special'. Also remove duplicated 'and'. Suggestion: Omit 'the' when speaking about life in general, ensure subject-verb agreement ('fact... makes'), and use complete adjective or noun phrases ('is special' or 'has something special').

× I prefer both of them because I can't choose one of them. For example, in my country the views are so good and the fact that it belongs to me makes me really happy and and it comes to other countries and they are also good and vivid.

✓ I prefer both because I can't choose between them. For example, in my country the views are so good and the fact that they belong to me makes me really happy, and when I go to other countries the views are also good and vivid.

Issues: 'both of them' is okay but 'prefer both' is more natural with 'between them'. 'choose one of them' is awkward; use 'choose between them'. 'the fact that it belongs to me' uses 'it' singular for plural 'views' and incorrect verb; change to 'they belong'. Also 'and it comes to other countries' is unclear and ungrammatical; likely intended 'when I go to other countries'. Ensure pronoun agreement ('views' -> 'they') and correct verb forms. Suggestion: Use correct pronoun agreement (plural 'they' for 'views'), natural prepositions ('choose between'), and clarify clauses about traveling ('when I go to other countries').