Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fragments, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct minor grammar and word-choice errors (e.g., 'the beautiful. Things' → 'the beauty of things').

Example: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking pictures whenever I travel because it helps me capture different perspectives and the beauty of my surroundings. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset and close-ups of flowers to remember details.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer first (urban, rural, or both), then add a specific reason and an example with a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'for example'). Avoid repeating the same idea twice.

Example: I prefer both urban and rural views because each offers different photo opportunities. For example, urban areas give interesting architecture and street life, whereas rural areas offer peaceful landscapes and natural light.

Suggestion: Answer directly and avoid hesitations. State your current situation clearly, then add a conditional sentence with a reason and an example. Remove filler phrases like 'you know' and repeated 'I would'.

Example: I prefer views in my own country at the moment because I haven't traveled abroad yet. If I had the chance to visit other countries, I would photograph different landscapes and cultural scenes to compare styles and colors.

× I love to see a different perspective and also the beautiful. Things around and whatever that you could imagine.

✓ I love to see different perspectives and also the beautiful things around and whatever you can imagine.

The sentence has incorrect segmentation and word forms. 'a different perspective' is fine but 'the beautiful. Things around' mistakenly splits the noun phrase and misuses the definite article and punctuation. Change to plural 'different perspectives' to match general liking, remove the erroneous period, use 'beautiful things' as a single noun phrase, and replace 'could imagine' with 'can imagine' to sound natural in present tense.

× Well, to be honest, I haven't gone out of the country.

✓ Well, to be honest, I haven't been out of the country.

'Haven't gone out of the country' is not strictly wrong but 'haven't been out of the country' is the more natural present perfect expression for experience. The present perfect with 'been' is commonly used to talk about whether someone has ever visited a place.

× So I would answer that I like the views in my own country for now, but if I would have a chance, I would, you know, I would take pictures and also differentiate the view.

✓ So I would answer that I like the views in my own country for now, but if I had the chance, I would, you know, take pictures and compare the views.

Conditionals require correct verb forms. In a hypothetical present/future conditional, use 'if I had' (second conditional) rather than 'if I would have'. Also 'differentiate the view' is awkward here; 'compare the views' or 'differentiate between the views' is clearer. Remove the repeated 'I would' for conciseness.

× Of course, I actually like taking pictures whenever I go.

✓ Of course, I actually like taking pictures whenever I go somewhere.

The verb phrase is fine, but 'whenever I go' is incomplete without an object or destination. Adding 'somewhere' or 'somewhere I go' clarifies the meaning and maintains the gerund 'taking'.

× Well, I prefer both because whenever I see a good looking scenery I would take pictures of it.

✓ Well, I prefer both because whenever I see a good-looking scene I take pictures of it.

'Good looking' should be hyphenated as the compound adjective 'good-looking' before a noun. 'Scenery' is an uncountable noun; use 'scene' or 'view' for a countable instance. Use simple present 'I take' to express habitual action rather than 'I would take'.

× Everything that looks beautiful or amazing to me, I would grab my phone or a camera and take pictures of it.

✓ Whenever something looks beautiful or amazing to me, I grab my phone or a camera and take pictures of it.

The original mixes structures and uses 'Everything that looks...' with an inappropriate comma and 'I would grab' which is unnecessary for habitual action. Use 'Whenever something looks...' and present simple 'I grab' to state a habitual reaction. Also keep 'take pictures of it' to refer to the thing.