Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb tenses, avoid repetition, and add one specific detail (what kind of views or camera/app you use). Use one linking phrase to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy taking photos of different views. I usually use my phone to capture landscapes and cityscapes, and I often review them when I have free time because looking at those images helps me to relax and remember pleasant moments.

Suggestion: Clarify your preference and fix grammar. Give a clear topic sentence stating which you prefer, then support it with specific examples and a linking word (e.g., however, while, whereas). Keep it under five sentences.

Example: I prefer rural views because I love photographing nature, such as gardens, flowers and fields. However, I also enjoy urban scenes, especially modern buildings and city skylines, when I want a more dramatic or structured composition.

Suggestion: Be accurate and avoid absolute statements. Start with a clear preference, give reasons with specific examples, correct vocabulary and grammar, and avoid saying your country lacks all scenery. Use one linking phrase to contrast.

Example: I prefer views in other countries sometimes, mainly because I enjoy exploring landscapes that are different from those at home. For example, Canada’s large lakes and mountain ranges offer scenery that I don’t often see in my region of India, so I find it refreshing to photograph those places.

× I absolutely love taking pictures, it helps me to remind that view in my mind.

✓ I absolutely love taking pictures; it helps me remember that view in my mind.

The phrase 'remind that view' is incorrect because 'remind' requires an object and is not followed by the meaning intended. Use the verb 'remember' to express recalling a memory. Also, join two independent clauses correctly with a semicolon or conjunction.

× So I always took picture in my phone and sometime whenever I have free time I always check my phone and start watching those pictures.

✓ So I always take pictures on my phone and sometimes whenever I have free time I check my phone and start looking at those pictures.

'took picture' is wrong: use present habitual 'take pictures' (plural) for repeated action. Use plural 'pictures', 'on my phone' is the correct preposition, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' adverb, and 'watching' is odd for photos; 'looking at' or 'viewing' is better.

× It helps me stay relaxed.

✓ It helps me stay relaxed.

This sentence is correct in present tense; no grammatical correction needed. Included for completeness.

× Well, I prefer use in urban areas ever as well as in a rural areas, whereas in villages I prefer to take pictures of gardens, flowers and farms.

✓ Well, I prefer urban areas as well as rural areas; in villages I prefer to take pictures of gardens, flowers, and farms.

The original has several issues: 'prefer use' is incorrect—use 'prefer' + noun or gerund without 'use'. 'ever' is misplaced and unnecessary. 'a rural areas' mixes article and plural; use 'rural areas' or 'a rural area'. Also simplify sentence structure and fix comma usage.

× To be honest, I prefer watching views in another country because I belong to India.

✓ To be honest, I prefer viewing scenery in other countries because I am from India.

'Watching views' is unnatural; use 'viewing scenery' or 'seeing the sights'. 'Another country' should be plural 'other countries' to match general preference. 'I belong to India' is incorrect; use 'I am from India' or 'I belong to India' is not idiomatic.

× There is no such view like gardens or mountains or rivers.

✓ There are no views like gardens, mountains, or rivers.

Subject-verb agreement and noun form: 'There is' with plural 'views' is wrong—use 'There are'. 'No such view like' is awkward; better: 'no views like' or 'nothing like'. Also use commas between list items.

× However, in Canada there are many beats and lakes.

✓ However, in Canada there are many beaches and lakes.

'beats' is a misspelling/wrong word for 'beaches' or possibly 'bays'. Context suggests 'beaches'. Correct the word to 'beaches' to match intended meaning.