Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fragmented words like “Ever,” and limit to maximum 3–4 short sentences. Add a specific detail (when/where you take photos) and a linking word to connect ideas. Also use slightly more varied vocabulary (e.g., “landscapes,” “cityscapes,” “aesthetic compositions”).

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph cityscapes and the sky because I like clean lines and interesting light. I usually take photos in the early morning when the light looks most aesthetic.

Suggestion: Clarify your meaning and correct word choice and grammar. Avoid contradictions (you said ‘urban’ but then listed mountains and trees). Use a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words (e.g., “because,” “for example”). Keep sentences complete. Replace incorrect words (abuse → areas?) and fix articles.

Example: I prefer rural views because I enjoy mountains, trees and wide skies. For example, when I visit the countryside I feel calm and relaxed, and the natural scenery makes better photos.

Suggestion: Make sentences grammatically correct and precise. Start with a direct topic sentence (state preference or say you’re unsure), then explain with specific reasons and a linking word (e.g., “however,” “because”). Correct verb forms and pronouns (I have not been to other countries). Avoid broad generalizations without examples.

Example: I haven’t traveled much, so I’m not sure, but I imagine views in other countries would be more varied. For instance, other countries might offer different landscapes and architectural styles, which would be interesting to explore and photograph.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views. Ever.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

The word 'Ever' is out of context and creates a sentence fragment; it does not fit here. Remove it to make a grammatically correct present-tense statement. Suggestion: omit extraneous words that do not add meaning.

× In fact, as you can see in my photos, all of them are usually photos of the sky, buildings, architecture, because I like taking photos that I find pleasing and aesthetic.

✓ In fact, as you can see in my photos, most of them are pictures of the sky, buildings, and architecture because I like taking images that I find pleasing and aesthetic.

Awkward phrasing and redundancy: 'all of them are usually photos' is contradictory and unidiomatic. Use 'most of them are pictures' for clarity, and use parallel items with commas and 'and'. Also 'photos' repeated is redundant; vary vocabulary. Maintain present tense.

× I think I prefer abuse in urban areas, especially mountains, the sky, trees, anything greens or the sceneries because it.

✓ I think I prefer urban areas, especially places with mountains, the sky, trees, greenery, or scenic views because they are calming.

The original used 'abuse' (wrong word), 'anything greens' (incorrect form), and an incomplete clause 'because it.' Replace 'abuse' with 'urban areas' or omit; use 'greenery' or 'green things' and 'scenic views'. Complete the reason clause and use plural subject agreement 'they are calming.' This addresses sentence structure and word choice; ensure subject-verb agreement and complete clauses.

× The views in urban areas add a the calming sensation.

✓ The views in urban areas provide a calming sensation.

Contains article error 'a the' and awkward verb 'add' with 'calming sensation.' Use 'provide' or 'create' and correct articles. Ensure correct collocation: 'provide a calming sensation.'

× Even though I. Have not go with a different country, I think their views are much more beautiful than my country because there is a lot to see, a lot to explore in other countries.

✓ Even though I have not been to another country, I think other countries' views are much more beautiful than those in my country because there is a lot to see and explore abroad.

Multiple errors: 'I. Have' has incorrect punctuation and capitalization; 'have not go' mixes present perfect with base verb instead of past participle—should be 'have not been' or 'have not gone' but 'been to' is idiomatic. 'Their views' is unclear; use 'other countries' views' or 'those in my country' for comparison. 'A lot to see, a lot to explore' is repetitive; combine with 'and'. Use correct possessive form 'other countries' views' or rephrase. Maintain present perfect where appropriate and fix sentence structure.