Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は内容が伝わるが、文法と語順の誤り、冗長さが目立ちます。まず主題文を明確にし、過去形・現在形の混同を避け、不要な繰り返し（"take picture"の重複など）を省きましょう。具体的には短くて直接的な主題文（I enjoy beautiful views.）を置き、その後に理由や習慣を一文で補足します。接続詞（because, so, when）を使って文のつながりを明確にし、英語らしい語順で話す練習をしてください。発音練習で"enjoy"と動詞の形の使い分け（enjoy vs enjoying）にも注意してください。

Example: I enjoy beautiful views, but I don't often take photos of them because I'm not very good at photography. When I go sightseeing, my friend usually takes the pictures instead.

Suggestion: 主張は明確だが、文法と表現の選び方に改善が必要です。まず単数・複数や前置詞（in rural areas, areas with nature）を正しく使い、時制や形容詞の順序を整えましょう。理由を述べる際は接続詞（because, since）で結び、内容を具体化するために例や対比（e.g. busy streets vs quiet fields）を一文で加えるとよいです。また“fed up with rebuilding”は意味が不明瞭なので、“tired of the noise and constant development”など具体的な表現に置き換えてください。

Example: I prefer views in rural areas, especially natural landscapes. Since I was born and raised in Tokyo, I'm tired of the noise and constant development in the city, so I enjoy the peace and open space of the countryside.

Suggestion: 主旨は伝わるが、繰り返し（especially, especially）や不自然な比較表現（prefer a view in my country more than the view in other countries）を避け、より自然な比較構文（I prefer views in my own country to those abroad）を使いましょう。具体例を加えて説得力を高めるとよいです（例えば、どのような伝統的建築や風景が好きか）。また文を短く区切って論理を明確にし、接続語（because, however）で理由と対照をはっきり示してください。

Example: I prefer views in my own country to those abroad because I was born and raised in Japan. In rural Japan, I can see traditional architecture and landscapes that remind me of my childhood, which I don't usually find in Tokyo.

× I do enjoying the view, beautiful view, but actually I don't like taking the take picture of the views 'cause I'm not really good at taking a photo.

✓ I do enjoy the views; they are beautiful, but actually I don't like taking pictures of views because I'm not really good at photography.

Use of 'do enjoying' is incorrect: after auxiliary 'do' use the base form 'enjoy'. 'Enjoying' would be correct without 'do' (I enjoy). Also use plural 'views' to match context and 'taking pictures' instead of 'taking the take picture'. Replace informal 'cause' with 'because' in formal correction and 'taking a photo' generalised to 'photography' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'I enjoy' or 'I do enjoy' + base verb, and ensure correct noun pluralization.

× Whenever I go for sightseeing, my friend took take photo instead of me.

✓ Whenever I go sightseeing, my friend takes photos instead of me.

The original mixes present habitual context ('Whenever I go') with past tense 'took'. For habitual actions use present simple: 'my friend takes photos'. Also 'go for sightseeing' is non-idiomatic; use 'go sightseeing'. Remove duplicate 'take'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent for habitual routines and use correct verb forms.

× Nowadays I prefer view in rural area, especially area with which in nature.

✓ Nowadays I prefer views in rural areas, especially areas that are close to nature.

Use plural 'views' and 'rural areas' for general preference. Phrase 'area with which in nature' is ungrammatical; use relative clause 'areas that are close to nature' or 'areas with natural surroundings'. Suggestion: pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally and use clear relative clauses.

× I was born and raised in Tokyo so I'm fed up with rebuilding their like cutting edge architectures so I'm more preferred to enjoy nature.

✓ I was born and raised in Tokyo, so I'm fed up with the constant rebuilding and the cutting-edge architecture; I prefer to enjoy nature.

Original uses 'their' incorrectly (no clear antecedent) and 'more preferred' is wrong — 'prefer' is the correct verb. 'Cutting edge architectures' is awkward; use 'cutting-edge architecture' or 'modern buildings'. Also restructure sentence to use commas and conjunctions properly. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for present preference, avoid unnecessary comparative 'more', and use correct noun forms.

× I prefer a view in my country more than the view in other countries 'cause I was born and raised in Japan and especially, especially in Tokyo.

✓ I prefer the views in my country to those in other countries because I was born and raised in Japan, especially in Tokyo.

Use definite article 'the' for specific set of views and compare with plural 'those' for views in other countries. 'Prefer X more than Y' is less natural than 'prefer X to Y'. Also remove duplicated 'especially'. Suggestion: use 'prefer A to B' and match number (plural) when referring generally.

× And in Tokyo there's no such a traditional architecture. But if I go to countryside, I can enjoy traditional.

✓ In Tokyo there is little traditional architecture, but if I go to the countryside I can enjoy traditional buildings and scenery.

Original 'there's no such a traditional architecture' is ungrammatical; say 'little traditional architecture' or 'not much traditional architecture'. 'Go to countryside' needs the article 'the'. 'Enjoy traditional' is incomplete; specify 'traditional buildings and scenery'. Suggestion: use correct articles and complete noun phrases to clarify meaning.