Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Use a clearer topic sentence, correct grammar, avoid redundancy, and add one specific detail or example. Aim for 2–4 concise sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, 'and' or 'so').

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me record memories. For example, after a trip I upload photos to social media to share moments with friends and get feedback, which makes the experience feel more meaningful.

Suggestion: Start with a direct statement of preference, then give a clear contrast using linking words (e.g., 'however', 'but'). Fix articles and verbs, and provide a specific example of an urban feature or rural scene.

Example: It depends, but I usually prefer rural views because I enjoy nature. However, if I see an interesting urban landmark, like a unique building or modern bridge, I will photograph it and share it with my friends.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and correct tense and article errors. Explain briefly why with one specific reason or example. Keep it concise and use linking words such as 'because' or 'so'.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because I haven't traveled much abroad and I'm curious about different cultures. For instance, I want to visit Europe to see historical architecture and learn about local traditions.

× Yes, because I think that is a record method and after traveling I always send these photos on social media to get some others likes.

✓ Yes, because I think it is a recording method, and after traveling I always post these photos on social media to get some likes from others.

Wrong or missing articles and word forms: 'that' should be 'it' when referring to a previously mentioned idea; 'a record method' is awkward — use 'a recording method' or better 'a way to record memories'; 'send these photos on social media' is better as 'post these photos on social media'; 'some others likes' should be 'some likes from others' or simply 'some likes'. Suggestion: use correct articles and natural noun phrases and choose appropriate verbs for actions (post vs send).

× Actually that depends.

✓ Actually, that depends.

Missing comma after introductory adverb 'Actually' is punctuation but not in list; however sentence is grammatical. Keep as 'Actually, that depends.' No subject-verb agreement issue; included here to supply minimal correction: add comma after introductory word for natural English rhythm.

× If I have a the curiosity about this facility in urban, I think I will take photo with it and share with my friend.

✓ If I am curious about a facility in the city, I think I will take a photo of it and share it with my friends.

Several preposition and article issues: 'have a the curiosity about' is incorrect — use 'am curious about' or 'have curiosity about'; 'this facility in urban' should be 'a facility in the city' or 'in an urban area'; 'take photo with it' should be 'take a photo of it'; 'share with my friend' needs an object 'share it with my friends' or 'share it with a friend'. Suggestion: use 'curious about', 'a photo of', and correct article usage and pluralize 'friends' if general.

× But I think I always take photos with the rural views because that is really nature and I really enjoy that.

✓ But I usually take photos of rural scenery because it is truly natural and I really enjoy it.

Article and noun choice issues: 'take photos with the rural views' is unnatural — use 'photos of rural scenery' or 'rural views'; 'that is really nature' should be 'it is truly natural' or 'it is nature' and 'I really enjoy that' -> 'I really enjoy it.' Suggestion: use 'of' for the object of the photo, choose 'scenery' or 'views', and use 'it' for pronoun reference.

× Actually I prefer the sceneries in other country because I haven't went out to traveling.

✓ Actually, I prefer the scenery in other countries because I haven't traveled abroad yet.

Multiple tense and number errors: 'sceneries' is uncountable here — use 'scenery' or 'the scenery of other countries'; 'in other country' should be 'in other countries'; 'I haven't went out to traveling' is ungrammatical: after 'haven't' use past participle 'gone' or use 'haven't traveled' and 'abroad' instead of 'went out to traveling'. Suggestion: use present perfect 'haven't traveled' or 'haven't gone abroad' and correct noun number.

× So I want to went abroad to and try to different countries culture and understand more history about other countries.

✓ So I want to go abroad and experience the cultures of different countries and learn more about their histories.

Incorrect verb tense and form: 'want to went' should be 'want to go' (infinitive after 'want'); 'try to different countries culture' is wrong — use 'experience the cultures of different countries' or 'try different countries' cultures'; 'understand more history about other countries' should be 'learn more about their histories'. Suggestion: use infinitive after 'want', use 'experience' for cultural exposure, and 'learn about' for acquiring historical knowledge.