Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more grammatically accurate, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, fix verb forms and articles, avoid filler sounds, and give one or two specific examples. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'sometimes'.

Example: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos of different places when I travel; for example, I often photograph deserts for their dramatic light and farms for their peaceful scenery.

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly. Give a topic sentence stating your preference, then explain briefly with reasons. Avoid repetition, colloquial fillers like 'uh' and unclear phrases such as 'that's the bank to what I want'. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Example: I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and more relaxing. For example, when I travel I usually choose countryside guesthouses so I can enjoy peaceful views and fresh air.

Suggestion: Be specific and avoid vague words. Begin with a clear statement of preference, then list precise examples of landscapes, using correct vocabulary (e.g., 'coast', 'mountains', 'forests'). Use linking words like 'for example' or 'such as'.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because it has a great variety of scenery. For example, we have high mountains, lush gardens, green coastlines and extensive forests, so I rarely feel the need to travel abroad for beautiful views.

× Yes, sometime I like to taking picture for a different views if we go to see or some, uh, special place or dessert and sometime for the farm.

✓ Yes, sometimes I like to take pictures of different views when we visit a special place or a desert, and sometimes of a farm.

Multiple singular/plural errors: 'sometime' should be plural 'sometimes' (frequency adverb), 'to taking' is incorrect after 'like' (use base form 'take'), 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'different views', 'for a different views' -> 'of different views', and 'dessert' (sweet food) is likely wrong word; context suggests 'desert' or 'deserted place' but corrected to 'a desert'. Improve by using correct plural forms and verb forms and choosing the correct noun. Suggested practice: review countable nouns and pluralization and verbs following 'like'.

× That's, that's the bank to what I want.

✓ That's, that's close to what I want.

The sentence is ungrammatical / wrong word choice: 'bank' is incorrect here; likely intended 'close'. This is not a third-person singular verb agreement issue but fits 'Incorrect word use' which maps best to sentence structure; however to follow list, treated as substitution. Correction uses 'close to what I want'. Improve by choosing correct collocation 'close to'. Suggested practice: learn common phrases like 'close to what I want'.

× If I wanna go to vacation and I wanna rent, uh, a flat or, uh, book a hotel, I prefer to, uh, book a room with a urban area, I mean with a peaceful things.

✓ If I want to go on vacation and rent a flat or book a hotel, I prefer to book a room in an urban area, I mean a peaceful place.

Multiple issues: 'wanna' informal -> 'want to'; 'go to vacation' should be 'go on vacation'; 'book a hotel' acceptable but better 'book a hotel room' or 'book a hotel'; 'book a room with a urban area' incorrect preposition and article: use 'in an urban area' and 'an' before vowel sound; 'peaceful things' uses plural noun where 'place' is correct. Also 'prefer to book' followed by base verb (no -ing). Improve by using standard prepositions and articles and correct noun choices. Suggested practice: study verb + preposition collocations ('go on vacation','in an area') and article use 'a/an'.

× Yes, sure, I prefer views in my country because in my country we have a different uh, fuse.

✓ Yes, I prefer views in my country because we have a different vibe there.

'Fuse' is incorrect word; likely 'vibe'. Also repetition 'in my country' unnecessary; better to use 'there'. Use 'vibe' (countable/uncountable depending) or 'variety of scenery'. Improve by using correct noun and avoiding repetition. Suggested practice: expand vocabulary for 'atmosphere' and 'vibe' and avoid redundant phrases.

× You can see mountain views, see fuse garden, a green uh ocean and different views.

✓ You can see mountain views, beautiful gardens, green seas or oceans, and various other landscapes.

Original sentence has poor parallel structure and incorrect words: 'see fuse garden' unclear; 'a green ocean' awkward. Corrected to parallel list with consistent plural nouns and clearer adjectives. Improve by maintaining parallelism and choosing correct nouns. Suggested practice: practice making lists with parallel structure (all nouns or noun phrases).

× We have uh, in my country.

✓ We have all of those in my country.

Fragment and repetition: original lacks an object or continuation, making it a sentence without a clear verb/object. Correction completes the idea. Improve by ensuring each sentence expresses a complete thought. Suggested practice: combine short fragments into complete sentences and check for missing elements.