Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a complete sentence that directly answers the question, then add one short supporting detail. Avoid single-word replies. For example, say whether you enjoy it and why (e.g., it helps you remember places or express creativity). Keep it natural and concise.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me capture memories and appreciate details I might otherwise miss.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because and also). Avoid confusing or incorrect expressions (e.g., "hospitalized") and keep sentences grammatically correct and concise (max 5 sentences).

Example: I prefer urban views because the architecture and street life offer vibrant colors and interesting scenes. For example, modern buildings, cafes and public art make cityscapes more varied, and I enjoy photographing people going about their daily activities.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear statement of preference, then give specific, well-organized reasons using linking phrases (such as because and moreover). Fix grammar (e.g., "more better" → "better") and avoid repeating the same idea. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because there is no language barrier and travel logistics are simpler. Moreover, knowing the culture and currency makes it easier to explore off-the-beaten-path locations and take more relaxed photos.

× Enjoy.

✓ I enjoy taking pictures.

The original single-word response 'Enjoy.' is a sentence fragment and lacks a subject and a finite verb. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Provide a complete sentence matching the question: include subject 'I' and the full verb phrase 'enjoy taking pictures'. Suggestion: Always include subject and verb to form a complete response, e.g., 'I enjoy taking pictures.'

× Well, I prefer views in urban area because of its beauty, natural vibe, the color, the fresh atmosphere, the people.

✓ Well, I prefer views in urban areas because of their beauty, natural vibe, color, fresh atmosphere, and the people.

Multiple errors: 'urban area' should be plural 'urban areas' to match general preference (ID 1 singular and plural issue) and the possessed noun 'its' refers to 'views' (plural) so should be 'their' (ID 12 incorrect use of pronouns). Also list punctuation and conjunctions improved and 'the color' changed to 'color' for parallelism (ID 13 incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). Suggestion: Use plural forms for general categories and ensure pronoun agreement; keep list items parallel and include 'and' before the final item.

× The people never visited modern cities so they are very hospitalized and well mannered.

✓ The people have never visited modern cities, so they are very hospitable and well-mannered.

Errors: 'never visited' in isolation is acceptable but needs present perfect 'have never visited' to indicate life experience (ID 5 past tense issue vs present perfect—closest allowed type here is present tense issue ID 6, but core error is sentence structure and verb form). 'Hospitalized' is incorrect word choice; 'hospitable' means friendly (ID 13 incorrect use of adjectives). 'Well mannered' should be hyphenated 'well-mannered'. Also add a comma before 'so'. Suggestion: Use 'have never visited' for life experiences and choose the correct adjective 'hospitable' and hyphenate compound adjectives.

× I prefer views in my own country because of no language barrier, easy travel.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because there is no language barrier and travel is easy.

The phrase 'because of no language barrier, easy travel' is ungrammatical and lacks articles/verbs. This involves singular/plural and sentence structure issues (ID 1 and 26). Use 'there is no language barrier' and a full clause 'travel is easy' for clarity. Suggestion: Convert noun phrases into full clauses when explaining reasons.

× I am aware of all the roads, the people, the language, currency.

✓ I am familiar with the roads, the people, the language, and the currency.

'Aware of' is not wrong but 'familiar with' is more natural here. Also parallel list needs 'and' before the last item and consistent articles; adding 'the' before 'currency' improves parallelism (ID 12 incorrect use of pronouns/adjective use). Suggestion: Use parallel structure in lists and more natural collocations like 'familiar with'.

× So travelling in my own country is more better for me than going to foreign for trips.

✓ So travelling in my own country is better for me than going abroad for trips.

Errors: 'more better' is a double comparative; use 'better' alone (ID 25 comparative and superlative errors). 'Going to foreign' is incorrect; use 'going abroad' or 'going to foreign countries' (ID 11 incorrect use of prepositions). Also use consistent spelling 'travelling' or 'traveling'—both acceptable. Suggestion: Use single comparative forms and correct expressions for foreign travel.