Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more accurate and natural: correct vocabulary (views, not abuse), reduce hesitations, use a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Keep responses within 3–4 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas (for example, because, so). Also check subject–verb agreement and plural forms.

Example: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. I usually take several shots of the same scene because this helps me notice small differences in light and composition. For example, I’ll take pictures at different times of day so I can choose the best one later.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give specific reasons and one brief example. Fix grammar (I like, green(s), rural areas), and use linking words (because, so, therefore). Aim for 2–3 concise sentences.

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because I find the greenery calming and refreshing. For example, I often visit nearby countryside parks to walk and take photos, which helps me relax after a busy week.

Suggestion: Be clear and correct: state your preference in one sentence, correct noun forms (buildings/cities, country, Sydney), and avoid pronoun errors (it has, not he). Provide specific reasons and an example. Use linking words (because, also) and keep it concise.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different landscapes and cultural architecture. For instance, living in Sydney I love views that combine the ocean, nearby mountains, and the vibrant city center, which feel very picturesque to me.

× Yes, I like taking a picture, uh, of different abuse.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

The student used singular 'a picture' and the incorrect noun 'abuse' instead of plural 'pictures' and 'views'. This is a singular/plural issue and a wrong word choice; use the plural 'pictures' when referring generally to taking many images, and 'views' fits the context of scenery. Suggestion: Use the plural form when talking about general habits (taking pictures) and choose the correct noun (views).

× When I take a pic, I take several photos because, uh, these photos makes me notice the differences.

✓ When I take a picture, I take several photos because these photos make me notice the differences.

The subject 'these photos' is plural, so the verb must be plural 'make' not 'makes'. Also 'pic' is informal; use 'picture' for clarity. Suggestion: Ensure verb agrees with plural subjects (photos make).

× I prefer rural areas and because I likes to see the greens which makes me comfortable and relaxed, so I often go to rural studies and enjoy myself there.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I like to see the greenery, which makes me feel comfortable and relaxed, so I often go to rural areas and enjoy myself there.

Multiple issues: 'likes' should be 'like' to match 'I' (third person singular issue relates to subject-verb agreement but here change is simple), 'the greens' is unnatural; use 'greenery' (uncountable), and 'makes' refers to 'greenery' (singular/uncountable) so 'makes' is acceptable but clearer to say 'which makes me feel...'. 'Rural studies' is incorrect for 'rural areas'. Suggestion: Use 'I like' for first person, prefer 'greenery' for general vegetation, and 'rural areas' for places you visit.

× I prefer bills in other country like the Sydney that I'm currently living and because he has ocean and mountain and the city center as well, so it's all are so beautiful to me.

✓ I prefer views in other countries like Sydney, where I'm currently living, because it has the ocean, mountains, and a city center as well, so all of these are very beautiful to me.

Many errors: 'bills' is incorrect noun — should be 'views'; 'other country' should be 'other countries' (or 'another country'); 'the Sydney' is incorrect article use — 'Sydney' needs no 'the'; 'he has' incorrectly uses a pronoun for a city and wrong person — use 'it has'; 'mountain' should be plural 'mountains'; 'it's all are' is ungrammatical — use 'all of these are' or 'they are all'. Suggestion: Use correct nouns ('views'), correct number ('other countries' or 'another country'), no article before proper nouns like 'Sydney', use 'it' for cities, and match plural forms and verb agreement.