Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 대답이 직접적이지만 어법과 문장구조에서 자연스러움이 부족합니다. 반복을 줄이고 이유를 명확히 제시하세요. 예: 주제문(typing 선호) → 이유(속도, 편리함, 가독성) → 간단한 예시나 상황. 연결어(for example, because, so)를 사용해 문장의 흐름을 매끄럽게 만드세요.

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and neater. For example, when I take notes on my laptop I can organize and edit them easily, so I rarely write by hand unless my hands are sore.

Suggestion: 응답에 혼란스러운 표현과 반복이 있습니다. 장치 설명은 간단명료하게 하고, 불필요한 단어는 제거하세요. 연결어(to use, because)를 사용해 이유와 상황을 정리하면 더 자연스럽습니다.

Example: I type every day on a portable keyboard connected to my iPad Air. Because I often work on the go, I prefer this setup to a desktop for its convenience.

Suggestion: 시제와 문장구조 오류가 있습니다. 과거 시제를 사용하고 경험을 순서대로 간결하게 설명하세요. 기간이나 나이 같은 구체적 세부사항을 추가하면 더 좋습니다.

Example: I learned to type in elementary school when my mother enrolled me in a computer class. During the first few days the instructor taught basic typing techniques and finger placement.

Suggestion: 문장이 어색하고 핵심이 불분명합니다. 개선 방법(연습, 온라인 프로그램, 업무 경험 등)을 구체적으로 제시하고, 이유와 결과를 연결하세요. 과거 경험과 현재 습관을 명확히 구분해 표현하세요.

Example: I improved my typing mainly through regular practice at work. While working in the overseas relations department I had to write many emails to clients, so I typed daily and gradually increased my speed and accuracy.

× Handwriting if I feel some sore in my fingers.

✓ I handwrite only if I feel some soreness in my fingers.

The sentence lacks a main verb and uses 'if' incorrectly to show condition. Use a complete clause with subject and verb: 'I handwrite only if...'. 'Some sore' is ungrammatical; use the noun 'soreness' or an adjective phrase 'a bit sore'. Suggestion: form a full conditional clause and choose the correct noun/adjective form (e.g., 'soreness' or 'a little sore').

× I type on laptop keyboard every day.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day.

The noun phrase needs an article before the singular countable noun 'laptop keyboard'. Use 'a' for non-specific singular items. Suggestion: include the indefinite article 'a' for singular countable nouns ('a laptop keyboard').

× I use iPad Air.

✓ I use an iPad Air.

Countable singular nouns require an article. 'iPad Air' is a specific model but still a singular countable noun; use 'an' before vowel sounds. Suggestion: add the appropriate article ('a' or 'an') before singular nouns ('an iPad Air').

× I put the portable keyboard underneath the iPad.

✓ I put the portable keyboard under the iPad.

Both 'under' and 'underneath' can be correct, but 'under' is more natural here. This is a minor preposition choice issue. Suggestion: prefer 'under' in casual descriptions of position for concise phrasing.

× So I always input some keyboard on my iPad Air.

✓ So I always use the keyboard with my iPad Air.

'Input some keyboard' is ungrammatical: 'input' is a verb that needs an object (data), and 'some keyboard' is not a correct noun phrase. Use 'use the keyboard' or 'type on the keyboard'. Suggestion: say 'use the keyboard' or 'type on the keyboard' to convey using a physical keyboard.

× When I learn how to type on keyboard is uh, elementary school.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard in elementary school.

Tense and structure are wrong. A past event requires past tense 'learned' and the clause should be reordered: 'I learned how to type on a keyboard in elementary school.' Also add article 'a' before 'keyboard'. Suggestion: use past tense for completed past actions and correct word order (subject + past verb + time/place).

× My mom took me to computer institute and they TE taught me how to type on keyboard first few days.

✓ My mom took me to a computer institute, and they taught me how to type on the keyboard during the first few days.

Multiple issues: missing articles ('a computer institute', 'the keyboard'), unnecessary 'TE' token, and preposition/time phrase placement. Use 'during the first few days' to indicate when instruction occurred. Suggestion: include articles for singular nouns, remove stray tokens, and use a clear time expression.

× Definitely in this practice when I was working for overseas society department, I already sent an e-mail to my client.

✓ During my time working in the overseas society department, I often sent emails to my clients.

Tense and adverb usage: mixing 'definitely', 'this practice', and 'already' with past continuous is awkward. Use simple past 'sent' for completed actions and pluralize 'emails' and 'clients' if habitual. 'In this practice' is unclear; 'During my time' is natural. Suggestion: choose consistent past-tense phrasing and clearer adverbs (e.g., 'often').

× So I always type on keyboard to computer.

✓ So I always type on the computer keyboard.

Preposition 'to' is incorrect here and article is missing before 'keyboard'. Use 'type on the computer keyboard' or 'type on the computer'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions ('on') and include articles for singular countable nouns.