Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Réduisez les hésitations et simplifiez la structure. Commencez par une phrase claire, puis donnez un exemple précis et court en évitant les « uh ». Travaillez la fluidité et variez le vocabulaire (p. ex. ‘edit’ → ‘revise’ ou ‘modify’).

Example: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I keep a digital journal on my phone where I can quickly revise entries and search past notes.

Suggestion: Corrigez les erreurs et éliminez les répétitions. Donnez une phrase-thèse claire, puis un détail précis. Évitez les mots répétés (« uh », « portable ») et corrigez l'ordre des mots ("laptop keyboard" sans article inutile).

Example: I usually type on a laptop because it is more convenient and portable than a desktop. For example, I do my homework every morning on my laptop so I can move around the house.

Suggestion: Clarifiez et corrigez la grammaire. Évitez les phrases incomplètes et les expressions confuses. Donnez une chronologie simple: début, méthode, résultat. Travaillez les temps (past simple/perfect) et évitez les erreurs comme « cut myself ».

Example: I didn't learn typing formally. I started using computers as a child and practised a lot doing schoolwork, so my speed gradually improved.

Suggestion: Supprimez les questions inutiles et les hésitations. Donnez une réponse directe avec 2–3 méthodes précises (pratique quotidienne, exercices ciblés, logiciels). Évitez les répétitions (« target target ») et corrigez les noms ("keep a diary").

Example: I practise typing every day to improve speed and accuracy. I write short articles and keep a daily diary, and I also use targeted typing exercises and online programs to train accuracy.

× I usually type on a laptop a keyboard because I find it more, uh, convenient and port portable than uh, desktop.

✓ I usually type on a laptop because I find it more convenient and portable than a desktop.

The sentence has incorrect article placement and extra words. Remove the extra noun 'a keyboard' after 'laptop', and use the article 'a' before 'desktop' for parallel comparison. Also eliminate duplicated and misspelled words ('port portable'). Suggestion: Keep noun phrases compact ("type on a laptop") and use articles consistently in comparisons ("more ... than a desktop").

× Well, I didn't learn to type formally, I cut myself when I start to use computer as a child, so I practice it a lot to do my school work and my speed improved over time and my.

✓ Well, I didn't learn to type formally; I taught myself when I started using a computer as a child, so I practised a lot to do my schoolwork, and my speed improved over time.

Multiple structural and tense errors: use 'taught myself' (not 'cut myself'), past tense 'started' instead of 'start', include article 'a' before 'computer', 'practised' past tense to match 'didn't learn', compound sentence needs proper punctuation and conjunctions. Remove trailing 'and my'. Suggestion: Break into clear clauses and keep past tense consistent when describing past events. Note: 'practised' can be spelled 'practiced' in American English.

× Will I practice every day to improve my typing? So I usually write articles and keep diary to build speed and accuracy.

✓ I practise every day to improve my typing. I usually write articles and keep a diary to build speed and accuracy.

The question form 'Will I practice' is incorrect for a habitual action; use simple present 'I practise' for routines. Also 'keep diary' needs the indefinite article 'a'. Use present simple for habitual activities. Suggestion: Use present simple for routines and include articles with countable nouns.

× Uh, for example, I uh, I usually do target target exercise to uh, adapt to the keyboard.

✓ For example, I usually do targeted exercises to get used to the keyboard.

Avoid repetition 'target target' and use the adjective 'targeted' with plural 'exercises' or 'typing exercises'. 'Adapt to the keyboard' is grammatically possible but 'get used to the keyboard' is more natural. Suggestion: Use precise adjective forms and pluralize countable nouns when appropriate.