Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
Well, it's depend on person choice. Everyone was not so good in writing. But I prefer handwriting at the place of typing because I'm very slow at typing.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
Well, on the everyday basis I type on keyboard because it feels much easier for me to type and concentrate on my topic when I'm typing and fulfill my task at 9:00.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
I learn it after my secondary education. I completed my secondary education after that I was focused on typing on keyboard and it was much useful skills in today's modern era and it may help me in different tasks.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
Well, there are not such many ways to improve my writing, but I prefer to do more and more practice. I do a lot of practice of typing on my laptop and after that I was become a good typer.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Correct verb forms and articles (e.g. "It depends on personal preference", "not everyone is good at handwriting"). Keep to 2–3 sentences and avoid contradictory statements.
Example: I prefer handwriting to typing because I feel more comfortable and focused when I write by hand. For example, taking notes with a pen helps me remember ideas better and I don't get distracted by notifications on my computer.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 62.0Suggestion: Be specific about which device you use and organize the answer: state the device, then give a clear reason with linking words. Correct phrasing (e.g. "on a daily basis", "I type on a laptop keyboard"). Avoid unnecessary time details unless relevant.
Example: Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because it is portable and convenient. For instance, I can work from different rooms and I find it easier to concentrate on my tasks when I use my laptop.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 58.0Suggestion: Use correct past tense and be concise. Begin with a clear time reference (e.g. "After secondary school"), then give a specific detail or example of how and why you learned to type. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.
Example: I learned to type after finishing secondary school because I wanted to improve my computer skills. As a result, typing quickly has helped me complete assignments and apply for jobs more easily.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: Answer directly and give a specific method with frequency and result. Use correct vocabulary ("typing" not "writing" for keyboard skills) and correct tenses. Use a linking word like "by" or "so" to show cause and effect. Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.
Example: I improve my typing by practising regularly on my laptop using online typing exercises. By practising for 20–30 minutes a day, I gradually increased my speed and made fewer errors.
× Well, it's depend on person choice.
✓ Well, it depends on a person's choice.
Use present simple for habitual or general statements and add third person singular -s; also include article and possessive: 'a person's choice'. Suggestion: Use 'depends' for he/she/it and include 'a' before 'person' and apostrophe for possession.
× Everyone was not so good in writing.
✓ Not everyone is good at writing.
'Everyone' is singular and takes singular verb 'is'; use negative word order 'Not everyone' or 'Everyone is not' (less natural). Also use preposition 'at' with 'good'. Suggestion: Use 'Not everyone is good at writing.'
× But I prefer handwriting at the place of typing because I'm very slow at typing.
✓ But I prefer handwriting to typing because I'm very slow at typing.
Use the correct comparison structure 'prefer X to Y' rather than 'at the place of'. Keep consistent present tense. Suggestion: Say 'prefer handwriting to typing'.
× Well, on the everyday basis I type on keyboard because it feels much easier for me to type and concentrate on my topic when I'm typing and fulfill my task at 9:00.
✓ Well, on a daily basis I type on a keyboard because it feels much easier for me to type and concentrate on my work when I type, and I finish my tasks at 9:00.
Use 'on a daily basis' instead of 'on the everyday basis'; include article 'a' before 'keyboard'; use simple present 'I type' for habitual actions instead of continuous; 'topic' is better as 'work' and 'fulfill my task' is awkward—use 'finish my tasks'. Suggestion: Use consistent simple present for routines and correct collocations: 'on a daily basis', 'a keyboard', 'finish my tasks'.
× I learn it after my secondary education.
✓ I learned it after my secondary education.
Use past simple 'learned' to describe a completed action in the past. Suggestion: Use past tense when referring to past events.
× I completed my secondary education after that I was focused on typing on keyboard and it was much useful skills in today's modern era and it may help me in different tasks.
✓ I completed my secondary education. After that, I focused on typing on a keyboard. It was a very useful skill in today's modern era and it helped me with different tasks.
Split into sentences for clarity. Use simple past 'focused' and 'helped' for past events; 'skill' should be singular and countable with article 'a'; add 'a' before 'keyboard'; 'may' changed to 'helped' to match past timeframe. Suggestion: Use clear sentence boundaries, correct verb tense consistency, and proper articles.
× Well, there are not such many ways to improve my writing, but I prefer to do more and more practice.
✓ Well, there are not that many ways to improve my typing, but I prefer to practice more and more.
Use 'not that many' instead of 'not such many'; 'writing' vs 'typing'—context prefers 'typing'; 'do more and more practice' is unidiomatic—use 'practice more and more' or 'practice a lot'. Suggestion: Use natural quantifier 'that many' and the verb 'practice' with adverbs.
× I do a lot of practice of typing on my laptop and after that I was become a good typer.
✓ I practice typing a lot on my laptop, and after that I became a good typist.
Use simple present 'practice' for habitual action. 'Was become' is incorrect; use simple past 'became' for the result of past practice. 'Typer' is less natural; use 'typist'. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent and use correct past form 'became' and noun 'typist'.