Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 문법과 발음에서 오류가 많고, 문장이 자연스럽지 않습니다. 먼저 'handwriting'와 'typing'을 정확히 구분하여 단어를 정확히 발음하고 사용하세요. 주제문(topic sentence)을 명확히 말한 뒤, 이유를 두세 문장으로 간결하게 연결어(예: because, so, therefore)를 사용해 구체적인 이유와 예를 제시하세요. 불필요한 중복(umm, repetitive phrases)을 줄이고 문장 길이를 3~4문장으로 유지하세요.

Example: I prefer handwriting because it feels easier on my eyes. For example, when I write notes by hand, I remember information better because the act of writing helps me process it. Therefore I usually take hand-written notes during study sessions.

Suggestion: 답변이 의도는 전달되지만 문장이 어색하고 불필요한 반복(umm)이 많습니다. 먼저 명확한 주제문으로 시작하고, 'during lectures'처럼 시간 표현을 정확히 사용하세요. 또한 두 가지 사실(타이핑, 필기 연습)을 연결할 때는 연결어(and, but, so)를 이용해 논리적으로 연결하고 구체적인 빈도(예: every day, usually)를 명시하세요.

Example: Yes, I type on my laptop every day during lectures to take notes. However, lately I have been practicing handwriting as well because I want to improve my exam performance. As a result, I also write one essay each day to strengthen my writing skills.

Suggestion: 내용은 적절하지만 문장 연결과 문법 오류가 있습니다('on my typing. Place is quite fast' 등). 연도나 나이를 말할 때는 간결하게 표현하고, 결과(현재 속도)를 설명할 때는 정확한 문장 구조를 사용하세요. 연결어(so, therefore, as a result)를 자연스럽게 사용하고 불필요한 단어는 제거하세요.

Example: I learned to type when I was ten after my parents gave me a laptop for my birthday. My mother encouraged me to practice regularly, so now my typing speed is quite fast.

Suggestion: 의사를 전달하려는 의도는 있으나 문법과 단어 선택이 매우 부정확합니다. 'practiced every day' 같은 과거 표현과 현재 방법을 구분하여 말하세요. 구체적인 방법(예: online typing apps, daily timed exercises, practicing with texts)과 빈도를 명확히 제시하면 좋습니다. 또한 모호한 표현('write cushions')는 피하고 정확한 어휘를 사용하세요.

Example: I improve my typing by using an online typing practice app every day. I do timed exercises and practice by typing song lyrics or short articles to build speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handy liking because it is more comfortable for my eyes umm.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it is more comfortable for my eyes.

The student used 'handy liking' which is not a correct phrase; 'handwriting' (noun) is the intended term. Also 'more comfortable for my eyes' is acceptable. Suggestion: use the correct noun 'handwriting' and avoid filler words like 'umm'.

× Also when I study umm I wrote things to memorize because is it more. Easy to memorize.

✓ Also, when I study I write things to memorize because it is easier to remember.

The original mixes past tense 'wrote' with present general habit and has word order problems ('is it more. Easy to memorize'). Use present simple 'write' for habitual actions and correct adjective/adverb form 'easier' and verb 'remember'. Remove fillers and fix sentence punctuation.

× Yes, I do. Umm. Umm during lecture umm I type on my laptop to make class note umm also these days umm I'm preferring for the eyes exam so I practice writing part too.

✓ Yes, I do. During lectures I type on my laptop to take class notes; also these days I prefer handwriting for my eyes, so I practice the writing part too.

Use plural 'lectures' for habitual events, 'take class notes' is the correct collocation, and 'prefer' (not 'I'm preferring') because stative verbs use simple present. 'For the eyes exam' is unclear; assumed meaning 'better for my eyes' so corrected accordingly.

× So I write essay every day.

✓ So I write essays every day.

Use plural 'essays' when referring to a habitual action of writing more than one essay. Present simple is correct for habits; change 'essay' to 'essays' for natural English.

× Well, when I was 10 years old, my parents gave me a laptop as a birthday gift. So my mom let me practice typing on my laptop.

✓ Well, when I was 10 years old, my parents gave me a laptop as a birthday gift, so my mom let me practice typing on it.

The original is mostly correct but repeating 'my laptop' is redundant; use pronoun 'it'. Maintain past tense 'gave' and 'let'.

× So on my typing. Place is quite fast.

✓ So my typing speed became quite fast.

Original fragment 'on my typing. Place is quite fast.' is ungrammatical. Likely intended 'my typing speed is quite fast' or past 'became quite fast'. Use 'typing speed' as the noun phrase and correct verb 'became' or 'is' depending on intended time; here past context -> 'became'.

× Umm as I mentioned earlier, when I was 10 years old my mom is told a typing practice application in my laptop.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, when I was 10 years old my mom installed a typing practice application on my laptop.

'is told' is incorrect passive and tense; the intended meaning is 'installed'. Use past tense 'installed' and preposition 'on' for software placed on a device.

× So I protected every day and I'm type umm type famous song lyrics or? Write cushions.

✓ So I practiced every day and I type famous song lyrics or write compositions.

'Protected' is a wrong word; should be 'practiced' (past) then consistent present 'I practice' or 'I type'. Also 'I'm type' is incorrect; use 'I type'. 'Write cushions' is likely 'write compositions' or 'write notes'; corrected to 'write compositions'. Ensure verbs are correct forms and maintain parallel structure.