Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with examples. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and remove duplicate words.

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and easier to edit. For example, I type my emails and school assignments, which saves time and lets me correct mistakes quickly.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use a clear topic sentence (desktop or laptop) and provide concise reasons with linking words. Fix grammar and unnatural expressions (e.g., 'I type 1 laptop').

Example: I use a laptop every day because I do my school assignments and work on it. Also, it is easy to edit and share files with friends, which helps me practice and improve my typing skills.

Suggestion: Give a clear time reference and avoid redundancy. Use one or two supporting details (where and how) and correct awkward phrasing like 'continue my that typing speed'.

Example: I learned to type in primary school during computer classes, where we practiced typing and played typing games. I still practice every day to maintain and improve my speed.

Suggestion: Organize your answer: start with the main method, then add specific examples. Remove hesitations and repetitive phrases. Use better linking words (for example, because, so) and correct grammar.

Example: I improve my typing mainly through daily practice. In addition, my job in computer engineering requires a lot of typing, and I also edit documents and share files with colleagues, which helps me get faster and more accurate.

× I prefer typing mainly because it's much faster and more convenient than writing by hand.

✓ I prefer typing mainly because it is much faster and more convenient than writing by hand.

Replace the contraction 'it's' with 'it is' is optional; however the sentence is acceptable. The original contained no pronoun error but later sentences do; include this as no change needed except optional formality. Suggestion: use 'it is' in formal speaking.

× I usually type emails and assignments assignments which saves my time and make the editing easy.

✓ I usually type emails and assignments, which saves me time and makes editing easy.

There was a duplicated word 'assignments assignments'. 'Which' introduces a non-restrictive clause and needs a comma. Subject 'which' refers to typing, treated as singular so verb should be 'saves', and 'make' must agree with singular subject so use 'makes'. Also use 'me time' rather than 'my time' in this context and omit 'the' before 'editing' for natural phrasing.

× Good typing skills helps you in good job and for studying.

✓ Good typing skills help you in getting a good job and for studying.

The subject 'Good typing skills' is plural, so the verb should be 'help' not 'helps'. Also use 'getting a good job' for natural expression. Suggest adding 'for' before 'studying' is acceptable but 'and for studying' or 'and in studying' both work; 'in getting a good job' alternative.

× Yes, definitely. I type 1 laptop every single day because usually I do my school assignment and also work by using the laptop.

✓ Yes, definitely. I use a laptop every single day because I usually do my school assignments and also work using the laptop.

'Type 1 laptop' is incorrect — use 'use a laptop'. 'I do my school assignment' needs plural 'assignments'. Verb choice 'use' is appropriate. Remove unnecessary 'by' before 'using'.

× Moreover, uh, if I want to edit or share my files with my friends, I prefer laptop and because it makes the editing easy and also improve my typing skills which is very much important in the future for any type of the work.

✓ Moreover, if I want to edit or share my files with my friends, I prefer a laptop because it makes editing easy and also improves my typing skills, which are very important for future work.

Remove filler 'uh'. Use 'a laptop' with article. Do not use both 'and' and 'because' together; choose 'because'. 'Makes editing easy' omits 'the'. Verb agreement: 'improves' for singular subject 'it'. 'Which are very important' refers to 'typing skills' (plural), so use 'are'. Simplify 'for any type of the work' to 'for future work'.

× Well, I learned my typing skill on the keyboard back in primary school where we have computer classes in which we practice typing skills and also by playing games.

✓ Well, I learned typing on the keyboard back in primary school, where we had computer classes in which we practiced typing skills and also played games.

The main clause is past, so verbs in the subordinate clause should be past tense: 'had', 'practiced', 'played'. 'Learned my typing skill' is awkward; use 'learned typing'.

× And nowadays I practice every single day to continue my that typing speed and also improve the level of my typing speed.

✓ Nowadays I practice every single day to maintain and improve my typing speed.

Avoid starting with 'And'. 'Continue my that typing speed' is ungrammatical; use 'maintain'. 'Improve the level of my typing speed' is redundant; simplify to 'improve my typing speed'.

× Well I every day I practice my typing skills.

✓ Well, I practice my typing skills every day.

Word order is incorrect: place adverbial 'every day' after the verb phrase or at end. Remove duplicate 'I' and add commas as needed.

× Moreover I have a job in computer engineering field so the job is based on the typing.

✓ Moreover, I have a job in the computer engineering field, so the job is based on typing.

Add definite article 'the' before 'computer engineering field'. 'Based on the typing' is awkward; use 'based on typing' or 'requires typing'. Add commas for clause separation.

× So it is it already improve my typing skills as well as I do my assignments on computer or desktop and moreover I edit my documents, share with my friends so it improve my skills automatically.

✓ So it has already improved my typing skills, as I do my assignments on a computer or desktop. Moreover, I edit my documents and share them with my friends, so it improves my skills automatically.

Use present perfect 'has already improved' to link past action with present effect. Remove duplicate 'it'. Use articles 'a computer'. For parallel verbs use 'edit and share them'. Subject-verb agreement: 'it improves' (singular subject 'this activity' or 'it'). Add commas and split long run-on sentence into two for clarity.