Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more fluent and grammatically correct, remove fillers (uh, like), and give a concise reason plus one specific example. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words for coherence.

Example: I prefer typing because I use my laptop and phone every day for work and to communicate with friends and family. Therefore, typing is more convenient and faster for me. For example, I can quickly reply to emails and messages while commuting or between tasks.

Suggestion: Reduce hesitation and repetition, use a clear topic sentence and link to specific duties to support your answer. Use varied vocabulary (e.g., compose, edit, correspond) and avoid short fragmented sentences.

Example: Yes, I type on my laptop every day because I work as a journalist. I regularly compose articles, edit materials, and correspond with editors and sources by email. Consequently, a laptop keyboard is essential and very convenient for my daily tasks.

Suggestion: Express the time clearly and correct grammatical errors (e.g., 'fast and accurately'). Remove filler words and provide a brief supporting detail about how you learned, using linking words.

Example: I learned to type when I started my job about three years ago. My coworker helped me practice proper techniques, so I gradually became faster and more accurate through daily use and feedback.

Suggestion: Be more precise and use correct adverbs (e.g., 'more quickly and accurately'). Mention specific practice methods and results, and link ideas with connectors like 'for example' or 'in addition'.

Example: I improve my typing by practicing every day, which has made me more quickly and accurate. In addition, I use online typing platforms and games such as FastTyping to build speed and monitor my progress, which has helped me reduce errors.

× I prefer to type because I use my laptop and phone every day uh for my work and is like communication with my friends and family so it's like easy way to use.

✓ I prefer to type because I use my laptop and phone every day for my work and for communicating with my friends and family, so it's an easy way to use them.

The sentence uses 'is like communication' which is incorrect pronoun/reference and structure. Replace with 'for communicating' (gerund) and add explicit object 'them' to refer to laptop and phone. Also add articles and conjunctions for clarity.

× Yes, I type on my laptop every day as I work as a journalist. It's the, uh, part of my work. I write articles, uh, edit like materials and send messages, emails. So working on a laptop with typing is so convenient for me.

✓ Yes, I type on my laptop every day because I work as a journalist. It's part of my work. I write articles, edit materials, and send messages and emails. So working on a laptop and typing is very convenient for me.

Remove unnecessary article 'the' before 'part of my work'. Use 'because' for reason. 'Edit like materials' is incorrect; use 'edit materials'. Use parallel structure with commas and 'and'. 'So convenient' is improved to 'very convenient'.

× At the beginning of my work almost, uh, three years ago, I I learned how to type fast and accurate and my coworker helped me with it.

✓ At the beginning of my work, almost three years ago, I learned how to type quickly and accurately, and my coworker helped me with it.

Use past tense 'learned' is correct but 'fast and accurate' should be adverbs 'quickly and accurately'. Remove duplicate 'I'. Place commas for clarity.

× I try to type every day and a regular like practice makes my uh, typing more fast and accurate.

✓ I try to type every day, and regular practice makes my typing faster and more accurate.

Use adjective/adverb forms correctly: 'more fast' is incorrect; use comparative 'faster'. Remove filler 'like' and add comma. 'Regular practice' is noun phrase; no article needed.

× Uh, Furthermore, I practice on the Internet uh, with the games and platforms like uh, fast type and it helped me a lot.

✓ Furthermore, I practice on the Internet with games and platforms like Fast Typing, and they have helped me a lot.

Use 'on the Internet' is fine but 'with the games' should be 'with games'. Capitalize or name platform correctly; use plural subject 'they' agree with 'games and platforms' and present perfect 'have helped' to link past help to present result.