Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason and a brief contrast. Reduce hesitation and correct verb forms and prepositions.

Example: I prefer typing because it is more convenient and faster for me. For example, I can store and search notes easily on my laptop, which saves time. However, I sometimes handwrite when I need to remember information better, because writing by hand helps me retain details.

Suggestion: Open with a clear statement and give one or two specific reasons. Correct verb forms and article usage, avoid fillers, and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Example: I mostly use a laptop because I study every day and it is portable. I use it for Google Docs and online whiteboards, and its large screen helps me read and edit documents more comfortably than a desktop.

Suggestion: Start with a clear time reference and use correct past tense. Give one concise detail about how you learned and how you practised. Remove filler words and correct pronouns/articles.

Example: I learned to type when I was a child. My father taught me on our home computer so I could make presentations for school, and since then I have practised regularly to improve my typing speed.

Suggestion: Give a clear method with specific examples and use appropriate linking words. Avoid confusing phrasing; explain benefits of each method and correct grammar (e.g., "handwriting" vs "handwrite").

Example: I improve my typing by practising on my laptop, using spell-check and online typing exercises to spot and correct errors. I also handwrite sometimes to strengthen my overall writing skills, although handwritten mistakes are harder to spot automatically.

× In time when digital world is increasingly popular, I prefer to use typing cause it's much more convenient for myself.

✓ At a time when the digital world is becoming increasingly popular, I prefer typing because it's much more convenient for me.

The original has awkward structure and informal 'cause' and incorrect reflexive 'for myself'. Use 'At a time when' or 'As the' to introduce the context, 'becoming increasingly popular' is the correct present progressive expression, 'typing' as a gerund is more natural, 'because' is the formal conjunction, and 'for me' is the correct objective phrase. Improve by using more natural connectors and correct pronoun form. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I don't need to took a lot of things, uh, just in case to write something.

✓ I don't need to take many things, just in case I need to write something.

The modal structure with 'do not' requires the base form 'take', not past 'took'. 'A lot of' is informal; 'many' matches countable 'things'. Reorder 'just in case I need to write something' to make purpose clear. Grammar problem type ID:5

× But however, handwriting is much more comfortable in case to await your knowledge because when you're right by your hand, you memorize information more fast.

✓ However, handwriting is much more comfortable for learning because when you write by hand, you memorize information faster.

Use a single transition ('However') not 'But however'. 'Comfortable for learning' fits meaning; 'await your knowledge' is incorrect. 'Write by hand' is the correct phrase, and 'faster' is the correct comparative adverb. Avoid word-for-word literal translations and choose idiomatic English. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I mostly use laptop 'cause I use it for my studies and, uh, I'm studying literally every day and I use it to writing Google documents, mirror boards or something 'cause even though my laptop have a big screen so I, uh, can uh, see the text more clearly rather than the desktop.

✓ I mostly use a laptop because I use it for my studies; I study almost every day and I use it to write Google Documents, Miro boards, or similar tools, because my laptop has a big screen so I can see the text more clearly than on a desktop.

Replace informal 'cause' with 'because' and fix article 'a laptop'. 'I'll use it to write' needs base verb 'write' not 'writing'. 'Miro' likely name of tool; capitalize. Subject-verb agreement: 'laptop has' not 'have'. Use 'than on a desktop' for comparison. Break into clearer clauses and remove filler words. Grammar problem type ID:16

× When I was child, we have a standard computer and my father teaches me how to write there 'cause I used for my presentations in school and since their time I have a chance to improve my, uh, specific writing on the keyboard.

✓ When I was a child, we had a standard computer and my father taught me how to type because I used it for my school presentations, and since then I have had the chance to improve my typing on the keyboard.

Use article 'a child'. Past time requires past tense: 'we had' and 'my father taught'. 'Type' is more precise than 'write' for keyboard. 'Used it' not 'used for'. 'Since then' is correct phrase, and present perfect 'have had' indicates an experience continuing to now. 'Typing' is the noun form. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Well, when it comes to foreign language, I usually practice on laptop 'cause it helps me to see my mistakes.

✓ Well, when it comes to foreign languages, I usually practice on my laptop because it helps me see my mistakes.

Use plural 'foreign languages' or 'a foreign language' depending on meaning; include article 'my laptop'. Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'helps' — the correct pattern is 'helps me see'. Replace 'cause' with 'because'. Grammar problem type ID:8

× However, I also can write by my hand in case just improve my writing skills.

✓ However, I can also write by hand to improve my writing skills.

Correct word order is 'can also' and idiom is 'write by hand' not 'write by my hand'. Use 'to improve' to express purpose. Simplify structure and position adverbs correctly. Grammar problem type ID:12

× And uh, when I use my handwriting, I don't they're my mistakes are not automatic or correct.

✓ And when I use handwriting, my mistakes are not automatic and are not corrected as quickly.

The original is ungrammatical and unclear. Remove filler 'uh'. 'I don't they're' is incorrect; express the idea clearly: handwriting doesn't automatically correct mistakes and they are not corrected quickly. Use parallel structure and clear verbs. Alternatively: '...my mistakes are not automatically noticed or corrected.' Grammar problem type ID:26