Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), fix grammar (use 'than' not 'rather'), and give one specific reason with a brief example. Keep it under 4 sentences.

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's much faster and easier to read. For example, when I write reports for work I can finish them quickly and colleagues can read them without struggling to decipher my handwriting.

Suggestion: Provide a direct topic sentence and support it with one clear reason and a brief personal detail. Remove informal phrases and correct grammar (e.g., 'I type on my laptop every day' and 'it's easier for me to use a laptop because...').

Example: I type on my laptop every day because it's portable and convenient. For instance, I can work on assignments both at home and in the library without moving files between computers.

Suggestion: Answer with a clear time frame and coherent details. Avoid fragmented sentences and unclear phrases. State when you learned, describe briefly how (games, practice, coursework), and give a specific time or age reference.

Example: I learned to type when I was a child, mainly by playing computer games and practising at school. Later, during college I improved my speed by typing many essays and assignments.

Suggestion: Give a clear, structured answer: start with the main method (regular practice), add specific techniques (online tests, typing software, accuracy focus), and give an example routine. Avoid hesitation and vague phrases.

Example: I improve my typing by practising every day for 15–20 minutes using online typing tests to build speed and accuracy. I also focus on proper finger placement and occasionally use timed exercises to track progress.

× I've always preferred uh typing rather handwriting because typing is quite efficient and time saving when you compare it to the handwriting.

✓ I've always preferred typing to handwriting because typing is quite efficient and time-saving when you compare it to handwriting.

Use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A rather B'. 'Time-saving' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective before a noun. 'The handwriting' is unnecessary; use 'handwriting' generally. Suggestion: Use the structure 'prefer A to B' and hyphenate compound adjectives before nouns.

× A lot of people do not understand my handwriting, it's quite difficult to make up the words.

✓ A lot of people do not understand my handwriting; it's quite difficult to read my words.

'Make up the words' is incorrect here; you mean 'read' or 'decipher' handwriting. Also replace the comma splice with a semicolon or split into two sentences. Suggestion: Use 'read' or 'decipher' for handwriting and avoid comma splices.

× So I prefer typing way better than handwriting.

✓ So I much prefer typing to handwriting.

'Prefer ... way better than' is informal and ungrammatical. Use 'prefer A to B' and 'much' to indicate degree. Suggestion: Use 'prefer A to B' and 'much' or 'far' for emphasis.

× Hi, type on my laptop every single day.

✓ Hi, I type on my laptop every single day.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I'. Insert subject to form a complete sentence. Suggestion: Always include the subject in declarative sentences.

× I'm always start to glue to my screen, so you can expect me to type in my laptop.

✓ I always end up glued to my screen, so you can expect me to type on my laptop.

'I'm always start to glue to my screen' is ungrammatical. Use 'end up glued to' to express habitual result. Also use the correct preposition 'on' with 'laptop' not 'in'. Suggestion: Use natural English collocations like 'end up glued to' and prepositions 'on the laptop' or 'on my laptop'.

× And yeah, it's quite easier for me to use laptop rather than a desktop because laptop is convenient for you to carry everywhere.

✓ And yeah, it's much easier for me to use a laptop rather than a desktop because a laptop is convenient to carry everywhere.

Use the article 'a' with singular countable nouns ('a laptop', 'a desktop'). 'Quite easier' is awkward; use 'much easier'. 'For you to carry' is better as 'to carry' in general. Suggestion: Use articles with singular countable nouns and natural adverbs like 'much'.

× I think I learned how to type using osmosis.

✓ I think I learned how to type by osmosis.

Use the preposition 'by' with 'osmosis' to indicate the means. Tense is acceptable. Suggestion: Use 'by osmosis' for the idiom meaning learning without formal instruction.

× So as a kid you. I really play a lot of busy games, so you can expect me to type really fast using the keyboard, but and I typed a lot of assignments and essays during the college times and that's how my.

✓ As a kid, I played a lot of typing games, so I learned to type quickly on the keyboard. I also typed many assignments and essays during college, and that's how I improved.

Multiple issues: incorrect pronoun 'you', wrong tense and wording ('play' -> 'played'), awkward phrase 'busy games', incomplete clauses and sentence fragments. Rewrite to clear past-tense narrative and logical sequence. Suggestion: Use past tense for past habits, replace unclear words with precise terms ('typing games'), and complete sentences.

× We just have to practice on daily basis.

✓ We just have to practice on a daily basis.

The phrase requires the article 'a' before 'daily basis'. Suggestion: Use 'on a daily basis' or 'daily'.

× If you're consistent in using, uh, you're a consistent use using your laptop ability, you can just, uh, get it or maybe type typing test things if they work, I don't know.

✓ If you use your laptop consistently, you can improve, or you can try typing tests to practice.

Original sentence has pronoun and noun phrase confusion ('you're a consistent use using your laptop ability') and redundancy. Simplify to clear conditional: 'If you use X consistently, you can Y'. Also 'type typing test things' is ungrammatical; use 'typing tests'. Suggestion: Keep conditionals simple and use standard collocations like 'typing tests' and 'use consistently'.