Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and reduce repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid hesitations and repeated words.

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because it makes editing much easier, and inserting or rearranging sentences is quick. However, I find that I sometimes remember information better when I handwrite notes.

Suggestion: Give a direct, structured answer: state which device you use, explain why with clear reasons, and avoid fillers and broken sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar (e.g., 'every day' and 'every class').

Example: Yes, I type on a laptop every day because I take many notes and complete assignments digitally. Writing everything by hand would be too slow and tiring, so using a laptop saves time and prevents strain.

Suggestion: Answer with a clear time reference and one or two specific details about how you learned. Reduce repetition and correct phrasing (e.g., 'in high school I took a computer class'). Use linking words like 'then' or 'after that'.

Example: I started learning to type as a child, but my typing skills improved significantly in high school when I took a computer class. In that course we practiced typing regularly, which helped me become faster and more accurate.

Suggestion: Give a concise description of your practice routine and mention specific methods or resources. Use linking words to show sequence or reason, and avoid repetition and trailing sentences.

Example: I improved my typing by practicing daily with free online typing programs in high school. I completed timed exercises and fun drills, which kept the practice interesting and helped me increase both speed and accuracy.

× For each option there's pros and cons, but if I had to choose pick one I would say typing because if you made a make a mistake on on typing you can easily easily delete the letters.

✓ For each option there are pros and cons, but if I had to pick one I would say typing because if you make a mistake when typing you can easily delete the letters.

Error type 22 (Article errors) and 1 (Singular/plural) and 26 (Sentence structure): 'there's' is a contraction of 'there is' and should be 'there are' to agree with plural 'pros and cons'. 'If I had to choose pick one' is redundant; use 'if I had to pick one'. 'made a make a mistake on on typing' contains repetition and wrong verb forms; use 'make a mistake when typing'. Also remove duplicated words 'on on' and 'easily easily'.

× If you want to insert some sentences, it is also easy.

✓ If you want to insert some sentences, it is also easy to do.

Error type 12: The sentence lacks a clear verb phrase completing 'it is also easy'; add 'to do' for clarity and grammatical completeness.

× But you cannot remember what you write if you type the letter.

✓ But you cannot remember what you wrote if you type it.

Error type 12 and 5 (Past tense issue): The reference to past memory requires past tense 'wrote'. 'the letter' is too specific; use 'it' or 'what you typed' for pronoun reference.

× Absolutely yes. I am a university student and I use my laptop for my homework and every classes.

✓ Absolutely yes. I am a university student and I use my laptop for my homework and every class.

Error type 2 and 1 (Singular/plural): 'every classes' is incorrect; 'every' requires singular noun 'class'. Use 'every class'.

× It's important for me because if if I handwrite everything what I learned from the class, my hand must be. Must gonna be die.

✓ It's important for me because if I handwrite everything I learned from class, my hand would hurt.

Error type 12 and 26 (Sentence structure): Remove duplicate 'if'. 'everything what I learned' should be 'everything I learned' (no 'what'). 'my hand must be. Must gonna be die' is ungrammatical and informal; replace with 'my hand would hurt' to convey meaning correctly and grammatically.

× So yeah, there were some. So I thank for the development of technology.

✓ So yeah, there were some. So I am thankful for the development of technology.

Error type 22 and 13 (incorrect adjective/adverb): 'I thank for' is incorrect collocation; use 'I am thankful for' or 'I thank' followed by an object. Also ensure verb 'am' for correct present state.

× Since I was a child, I tried to acquire the skills of typing, but it great it greatly improved.

✓ Since I was a child, I have tried to acquire typing skills, and they have greatly improved.

Error type 6 and 5: Time expression 'Since I was a child' requires present perfect 'have tried'. 'it great it greatly improved' is ungrammatical; refer to 'skills' (plural) and say 'they have greatly improved' using present perfect for ongoing improvement.

× When I was in high school student in my school there was a class which learns about computer and how to use computer.

✓ When I was a high school student, there was a class at my school that taught about computers and how to use them.

Error type 26 and 5: Word order and choice: 'in high school student' should be 'a high school student'. 'which learns' should be past 'that taught' because referring to a past class. Use plural 'computers' and pronoun 'them' to avoid repetition.

× At the at the class I would I had to practice typing so that that that course really improve me, improve my typing.

✓ In that class I had to practice typing, so that course really improved my typing.

Error type 12 and 5: Remove duplicated words 'At the at the' and 'would I had'. Use past tense 'had to' and 'improved' because the events are in the past. Use 'improved my typing' instead of 'improve me'.

× I used online typing software for practice which was free when I was in high school student.

✓ I used online typing software for practice that was free when I was a high school student.

Error type 8 and 1: 'when I was in high school student' is ungrammatical; use 'a high school student'. 'which' can be replaced with 'that' for defining clause; verb forms are fine otherwise.

× I did I did. I played this software every day they.

✓ I did. I used this software every day.

Error type 26: Remove repetition 'I did I did'. 'played this software' is awkward; use 'used this software'. Delete stray 'they'.

× But I didn't think it is boring because because the content of what you what I typed was interesting and.

✓ But I didn't think it was boring because the content of what I typed was interesting.

Error type 16 and 6: Use past tense 'was' to match 'didn't think'. Remove duplicate 'because' and redundant words 'what you what'. Remove trailing 'and' and finish the sentence cleanly.