Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and small errors (e.g., 'tap writing', 'think', 'soft files'). Use natural vocabulary: 'typing' not 'typewriting' and 'digital files' instead of 'soft files'.

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because digital files are easier to store and search. For example, I can save documents on my computer and in the cloud, so they last longer and are simpler to organize.

Suggestion: Begin with a concise topic sentence (e.g., 'I usually type on a laptop') then add one clear supporting detail. Remove filler words ('uh', 'wise') and correct grammar ('it is not as convenient as' → compare accurately). Use precise comparisons and correct subject-verb agreement.

Example: I usually type on my laptop keyboard every day because I use my laptop for work and study. Although laptop keys can be smaller than desktop keyboards, I find them convenient for mobility.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence stating when you learned to type. Use chronological linking words ('when', 'after that') and correct tense consistency. Avoid mispronounced words ('Tyson' → 'type') and tighten sentences to 2–4 lines with specific details (age, classes).

Example: I learned to type when I was in high school during computer class, where the teacher showed us basic keyboard skills. After that, I took extra typing lessons outside school to improve my speed.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence about your main method for improvement, then give 2 specific techniques using linking words ('for example', 'also'). Avoid fragmented sentences and unclear phrases ('error timer'). Mention practical, realistic methods (online exercises, timed tests, posture).

Example: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice and timed exercises. For example, I use online typing tests to track errors and speed, and I also practice with an external keyboard to build accuracy and proper finger placement.

× 'To be honest I like both handwriting and tap writing.'

✓ 'To be honest, I like both handwriting and typewriting.'

'tap writing' is incorrect word choice; use present simple 'like' is fine but add comma after introductory phrase. Replace 'tap writing' with 'typewriting' or 'typing' for correct vocabulary and clarity.

× 'But if I have to choose one, think typewriting is better because on computer we can save soft files and these letters can live for long life as compared to handwriting.'

✓ 'But if I have to choose one, I think typing is better because on a computer we can save digital files and they can last much longer than handwriting.'

Missing subject 'I' before 'think' (sentence structure). Use 'typing' instead of 'typewriting' for natural English, 'on a computer' needs article 'a', 'soft files' is unnatural — use 'digital files', 'these letters can live for long life' is ungrammatical; use 'they can last much longer than handwriting' for correct comparison and tense.

× 'I have a laptop, so wise you usually type on my, uh, laptop keyboard every day whenever I use my laptop, and although it is not as much as convenient as we type on a keyboard, uh, I think a keyboard is best for the beginners who wants to learn typing.'

✓ 'I have a laptop, so I usually type on my laptop keyboard every day when I use it, and although it is not as convenient as a desktop keyboard, I think a keyboard is best for beginners who want to learn typing.'

Several problems: extraneous word 'wise' and filler 'uh' removed; 'you usually type on my' wrong subject/object — change to 'I usually type on my laptop keyboard'; 'whenever I use my laptop' -> 'when I use it' for conciseness; 'it is not as much as convenient as we type on a keyboard' is ungrammatical — use 'not as convenient as a desktop keyboard' to compare; article errors: 'a keyboard is best for the beginners' -> 'best for beginners'; subject-verb agreement 'who wants' -> 'who want' because 'beginners' plural.

× 'I learned how to Tyson.'

✓ 'I learned how to type.'

'Tyson' is a mispronunciation/wrong word; correct verb is 'type'. Past tense 'learned' is appropriate; replace incorrect word.

× 'I learned it when I was in my school high school and we all students have a computer class in which our teacher teaches how to use the keyboard and how to write on a keyboard.'

✓ 'I learned it when I was in high school; we all had computer classes where our teacher taught us how to use the keyboard and how to type.'

Tense consistency: 'I learned' past, so change 'have' to past 'had' and 'teaches' to 'taught'; word order: 'in my school high school' -> 'in high school'; 'we all students' -> 'we all' or 'we students'; 'write on a keyboard' -> 'type' is natural.

× 'And if that's how I took interest in it.'

✓ 'And that's how I became interested in it.'

Mix of tenses and unnatural phrasing: 'if that's how I took interest' incorrect. Use past simple 'became interested' to match earlier past narrative.

× 'And after that I take extra classes to learn outside the school.'

✓ 'After that, I took extra classes outside of school to learn more.'

Tense should be past 'took' to match previous past events; word order improved and 'outside of school' is natural.

× 'We can improve our typing generally by practicing typing again and again, or we can set.'

✓ 'We can generally improve our typing by practicing repeatedly, or we can set goals.'

'Practicing typing again and again' is wordy; 'practicing repeatedly' is natural. The fragment 'or we can set.' is incomplete — likely 'set goals' or 'set exercises' needed.

× 'For example, we can set an error timer and and decide the sentences to write in a limited time.'

✓ 'For example, we can set an error timer and choose sentences to write within a limited time.'

Double 'and' removed; 'decide the sentences' is awkward — use 'choose sentences'; 'in a limited time' -> 'within a limited time' is more natural.

× 'To learn practice, external keyboard is necessary.'

✓ 'To practice and improve, an external keyboard is necessary.'

Phrase 'To learn practice' is incorrect; use 'To practice and improve' or 'For practice'. Missing article before 'external keyboard' — use 'an external keyboard'.