Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, avoid filler words (uh, so) and vague phrases (very fruitful for them). Add one specific reason and one brief contrast sentence. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient on digital devices. However, I still write by hand sometimes for notes or when I want to remember things better.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer first, then provide a concise reason. Avoid repetition (typing, only, source). Use a clearer structure and one supporting detail about frequency or context.

Example: I type on a desktop every day because I don't own a laptop. I use it mainly for work and studying, so I spend several hours a day at that keyboard.

Suggestion: State the time clearly and avoid fillers. Use one or two sentences: mention when you started and how your skill progressed with specific steps or milestones. Finish sentences completely—avoid trailing off.

Example: I learned to type when I was in sixth grade, around eleven years old. At first I practised simple words, then progressed to full sentences and eventually increased my speed with regular practice.

Suggestion: Use present tense when describing ongoing habits and be specific about methods. Say briefly what you do and give one concrete example (tools, exercises, frequency). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I improve my typing by practising on the keyboard every day and doing timed typing tests online. For example, I use a typing website three times a week to track my speed and accuracy.

× I always prefer typing instead of handwriting as in this modern era everything is very technical and gadget friendly, so the typing will be, uh, very fruitful for them.

✓ I always prefer typing to handwriting because in this modern era everything is very technical and gadget-friendly, so typing is very useful for people.

Use 'prefer X to Y' not 'prefer X instead of Y' for standard preference structure (preposition error). 'As' is better replaced by 'because' for clear cause. 'Gadget friendly' should be hyphenated when used as a compound adjective. 'The typing' is unnecessary; use 'typing' and 'very useful for people' is clearer than 'fruitful for them'.

× However, I also like to write manually with my hands.

✓ However, I also like to write by hand.

'Write manually with my hands' is wordy and awkward; 'by hand' is the correct idiomatic expression. This corrects incorrect pronoun/phrase usage and makes sentence natural.

× Honestly, I do type on desktop in my regular routine as I don't have a laptop and the desktop is only way of a typing only source of typing for me.

✓ Honestly, I do type on a desktop in my daily routine because I don't have a laptop and the desktop is my only typing device.

Use the definite/indefinite article 'a' with 'desktop' (article error). 'Regular routine' is redundant; 'daily routine' is better. 'Only way of a typing only source of typing' is ungrammatical and repetitive; simplify to 'my only typing device.'

× Honestly, I learned about keyboard and typing when I was kid.

✓ Honestly, I learned about the keyboard and typing when I was a kid.

Missing article before 'keyboard' ('the keyboard') and before 'kid' ('a kid'). Use simple past 'learned' is correct but needs articles to be grammatical.

× Approximately I was in my class 6th when I started to type.

✓ I was approximately in class 6 when I started to type.

Word order and preposition use: 'in my class 6th' is incorrect. Use 'in class 6' or 'in sixth grade.' Place 'approximately' appropriately. Don't use ordinal after class number here.

× Initially I started typing simple words, after then I started typing whole sentences and furthermore I started.

✓ Initially I started by typing simple words; later I began typing whole sentences and then progressed further.

Original is repetitive and incomplete ('and furthermore I started' is a sentence fragment). Fix sentence structure: use 'started by typing', 'later' and 'began', and complete the progression with 'progressed further.'

× I improved my typing with a regular activity on my keyboard and by challenging myself and time testing my typing speed.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing regularly on the keyboard, challenging myself, and timing my typing speed.

Tense should match habitual action: use present simple 'I improve' for ongoing habits. 'a regular activity on my keyboard' is awkward; use 'practicing regularly on the keyboard.' 'time testing' is incorrect; use 'timing my typing speed.' Conjunctions adjusted for parallel structure.