Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
I prefer football umm typing when I'm working and I umm riding when I have diarrhea to make more creative.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
Yes I do because I have a full time child at an office so I tie on my laptop keyboard every day almost. But sometime when I make the plan I use I usually uh, driving in the paper.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
When I was in secondary school, I learned how to use company, and that time I also learned how to use a keyboard to typing.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
Every day I go to office to work, that's the time I improve my typing.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 24.0Suggestion: Your answer is unclear, contains irrelevant and inappropriate words, and lacks coherence. Give a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then briefly explain why with relevant reasons. Avoid hesitations and off-topic or inappropriate phrases. Keep it under 3–4 sentences and use linking words such as 'because' or 'so'.
Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and easier to edit. For example, when I write reports at work I can correct mistakes and reorganize paragraphs quickly, which saves time. This also helps me stay organized because my notes are searchable on a computer.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 28.0Suggestion: Your reply answers the question but has many errors and unclear phrases (e.g., 'full time child', 'tie', 'driving in the paper'). Give a clear topic sentence about which device you use, then add a brief supporting detail about frequency or purpose, using linking words like 'because' or 'but'.
Example: Yes, I type on my laptop every day because my work requires writing emails and documents. However, sometimes I use paper when I plan projects because I prefer sketching ideas by hand.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: Your answer is mostly relevant but contains odd phrasing ('learned how to use company') and grammar mistakes ('to typing'). Start with a clear topic sentence stating when you learned, then add one specific detail about how or where you learned, using correct verb forms and simple linking words like 'and' or 'so'.
Example: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in secondary school. At that time we had a computer class where the teacher showed us proper hand position and basic typing exercises, which helped me improve quickly.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 46.0Suggestion: Your answer is brief and relevant but lacks detail and linking. Give a clear topic sentence about your main method for improving, then add specific strategies (practice tasks, software, goals) and use linking words such as 'for example' or 'so'.
Example: I improve my typing by practicing regularly at work, since I type a lot of emails and reports. For example, I also use online typing exercises for 10 minutes each evening to increase speed and accuracy.
× I prefer football umm typing when I'm working and I umm riding when I have diarrhea to make more creative.
✓ I prefer typing when I'm working, and I prefer handwriting when I want to be more creative.
This sentence has multiple problems: incorrect word choice ('football' and 'diarrhea' are wrong words), unclear coordination, and verb form issues. Replace incorrect words with 'typing' and 'handwriting' to match the question context; repeat the verb 'prefer' for parallel structure; use 'when I want to be more creative' to express purpose. Keep present simple for general preferences. Grammar problem type ID: 26
× Yes I do because I have a full time child at an office so I tie on my laptop keyboard every day almost.
✓ Yes, I do because I have a full-time job at an office, so I type on my laptop keyboard almost every day.
Errors: 'full time child' is incorrect word choice; it should be 'full-time job'. Hyphenate 'full-time' as a compound adjective. 'tie' is a misspelling; use 'type'. Place adverb 'almost' before 'every day' or after; 'almost every day' is natural. Include commas for readability. This fixes sentence structure and verb use. Grammar problem type ID: 1
× But sometime when I make the plan I use I usually uh, driving in the paper.
✓ But sometimes when I make a plan, I usually write it down on paper.
Errors: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' for frequency. 'make the plan' -> 'make a plan'. 'use I usually uh, driving in the paper' is ungrammatical; correct meaning is 'write it down on paper'. Use present simple 'I usually write' for habitual action. Add comma after introductory clause. Grammar problem type ID: 20
× When I was in secondary school, I learned how to use company, and that time I also learned how to use a keyboard to typing.
✓ When I was in secondary school, I learned how to use a computer, and at that time I also learned how to type on a keyboard.
Errors: 'use company' is wrong word choice; should be 'use a computer'. 'that time' -> 'at that time' for correct preposition. 'learned how to use a keyboard to typing' mixes infinitive and -ing; correct is 'learned how to type on a keyboard' or 'learned to type on a keyboard'. Past tense 'learned' is correct; adjust surrounding words for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 5
× Every day I go to office to work, that's the time I improve my typing.
✓ Every day I go to the office to work; that's when I improve my typing.
Errors: 'go to office' needs the definite article 'the' in this context: 'go to the office'. Use 'that's when' to refer to that time more naturally. Present simple 'I improve' is acceptable for habitual action. Use a semicolon or period to separate independent clauses. Grammar problem type ID: 11