Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện trọng tâm câu, ngữ pháp và trật tự từ. Tránh lặp từ (‘prefer’). Dùng thì phù hợp và mệnh đề ngắn gọn. Nên có một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nối với 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: tốc độ, dễ lưu trữ). Sử dụng từ nối thích hợp như “because” và “so”.

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is much faster and more convenient. For example, I can type notes quickly during lectures and save them electronically for easy searching and sharing.

Suggestion: Sửa lỗi phát âm/viết (‘tie’ → ‘type’), loại bỏ lặp từ và rút gọn câu. Trả lời trực tiếp với một câu chủ đề, rồi thêm lý do ngắn gọn. Dùng linking words như “because” hoặc “so” một lần duy nhất và tránh từ thừa như “have to” lặp lại.

Example: I type on my laptop keyboard every day because I use my laptop for work. Therefore, most of my typing is done on the laptop rather than a desktop.

Suggestion: Sửa ngữ pháp (thì và động từ: ‘learned to type’, ‘when I was in high school’), loại bỏ từ thừa và kết thúc ý rõ ràng. Nên có một câu chủ đề xác định thời gian, sau đó nêu chi tiết ngắn gọn (ví dụ: là môn bắt buộc, đã giúp thế nào).

Example: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in high school because it was a compulsory subject. It helped me develop basic typing skills that I still use today.

Suggestion: Loại bỏ ngập ngừng và sửa lỗi từ (ví dụ ‘brew’ không đúng; dùng ‘improve’ or ‘practice’). Trả lời rõ ràng với 1 câu chủ đề và 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (tên phần mềm, tần suất luyện tập, phương pháp). Dùng liên từ như “and” hoặc “for example” hợp lý.

Example: I improve my typing by practising regularly with typing software such as TypingClub for about 20 minutes a day. I also practise by typing essays and notes for my classes, which helps increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer actually I prefer typing more than handwriting because I think typing is quickly and it's easy to record or note whatever you have in the short.

✓ I actually prefer typing to handwriting because I think typing is quick and it's easy to record or note whatever you have in a short time.

The sentence uses incorrect adjective/adverb forms and awkward phrasing. 'is quickly' incorrectly uses an adverb after a linking verb; use the adjective 'quick'. Use the correct structure 'prefer A to B' instead of 'prefer A more than B'. 'in the short' is incomplete; use 'in a short time'. Suggestion: use 'prefer A to B' and place 'actually' before the verb: 'I actually prefer...'.

× Actually I tie on my laptop keyboard everyday now because I have to work on my laptop every day so I have to tie the the laptop keyboard.

✓ Actually I type on my laptop keyboard every day now because I have to work on my laptop, so I use the laptop keyboard.

Multiple spelling and repetition errors: 'tie' should be 'type'. 'everyday' as one word is an adjective; use 'every day' for the adverbial phrase. Repetition 'the the' should be removed. The clause 'so I have to type the laptop keyboard' is awkward; use 'so I use the laptop keyboard' or 'so I type on the laptop keyboard'. Suggestion: check verb spelling and avoid repeated words; use 'every day' as two words for frequency.

× Actually, I learned tied the keyboard when I were high school and this is a mandatory subject in my in my school, so I have to learn how to tie on the keyboard at that time and it's very.

✓ Actually, I learned to type on the keyboard when I was in high school and it was a mandatory subject at my school, so I had to learn how to type on the keyboard at that time.

Errors: 'learned tied' mixes past simple and past participle—use 'learned to type' or 'learned typing'. 'were high school' is wrong number/verb; use 'was in high school'. 'this is' should be past 'it was' to match time frame. 'learn how to tie' uses wrong verb 'tie' instead of 'type'. The sentence ends incomplete 'and it's very.' Remove or complete the thought. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense, use 'learned to type' and 'was in high school'.

× Actually, I I brew, I brew my typing by using using typing software and at home and yes, and I also typing a lot in my school.

✓ Actually, I improve my typing by using typing software at home, and I also type a lot at school.

'brew' is incorrect word choice; use 'improve' or 'practice'. 'using using' is duplicated. 'I also typing' needs the base verb 'type' or 'practice typing'; use 'I also type a lot at school'. Preposition 'in my school' is better as 'at school'. Suggestion: use correct verbs ('improve'/'practice'), avoid duplication, and use 'at school' for location.