Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be careful with repetition and give a clearer reason with one supporting detail. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add a specific example and a linking word. Also correct small grammar issues (remove duplicate "to").

Example: I prefer typing rather than handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can email documents or save them in the cloud, which makes sharing and editing much easier.

Suggestion: Make your response more concise and use linking words to connect ideas. Add specific details (what you type and why) and correct grammar (use "a desktop keyboard" and "every day" as two words).

Example: I use a desktop keyboard at the hospital every day because my job requires updating patient records. As a result, I routinely type notes and medical charts during each shift.

Suggestion: Provide a full, grammatically correct sentence and add a brief detail about how or why you learned then. Use linking words if needed and avoid capitalizing words incorrectly ("college").

Example: I learned to type during my first year at college when I took a basic computer skills course, which helped me develop faster and more accurate typing.

Suggestion: Use present simple for ongoing habits and give a specific practice method or routine. Include linking words to make it coherent and correct "every day" spacing.

Example: I improve my typing by practising regularly; for instance, I spend 20 minutes each evening on typing exercises and by transcribing patient notes, which helps increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing just because it is very easy to to send anything or write.

✓ I prefer typing just because it is very easy to send anything or to write.

The sentence has a repeated word 'to' and an inconsistent parallel structure. After 'easy' with a verb, use the infinitive 'to' before each verb for parallelism ('to send' and 'to write') or use gerunds consistently ('sending' and 'writing'). Also remove the duplicated 'to'. Suggestion: use 'easy to send or to write' or 'easy for sending or writing'.

× I type on desktop keyboard everyday in my hospital just because it's my profession and I type every day of patient record.

✓ I type on a desktop keyboard every day in my hospital because it's my profession and I type patient records every day.

Multiple issues: missing article before 'desktop keyboard' (use 'a desktop keyboard'), 'everyday' was used incorrectly (adjective 'everyday' vs adverb phrase 'every day'), and 'patient record' needs plural 'patient records' to match context. Also remove redundant 'just because' and correct word order for clarity. Suggestions: use 'a desktop keyboard', 'every day' as two words for frequency, and pluralize countable nouns appropriately.

× I learned in my College in first years.

✓ I learned in college during my first year.

Capitalization: 'College' should be lowercase unless it's part of a proper name. The time expression is awkward: use 'during my first year' or 'in my first year' to indicate when. Also prefer singular 'first year' or 'the first years' with a range. Suggestion: 'I learned in college during my first year' or 'I learned at college in my first year.'

× I improved by practicing. I type day every day.

✓ I improve by practicing. I type every day.

The response to 'How do you improve your typing?' should use present tense to describe a habitual method: 'I improve by practicing' (not past 'improved'). Also 'I type day every day' is ungrammatical: remove extraneous 'day' and use 'every day' to indicate frequency. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions and 'every day' as a time expression.

× I type on desktop keyboard everyday in my hospital just because it's my profession and I type every day of patient record.

✓ I type on a desktop keyboard every day in my hospital because it's my profession and I type patient records every day.

This repeats issues already corrected: missing article before 'desktop keyboard' and misuse of 'everyday' vs 'every day', plus 'patient record' should be plural. Use articles appropriately ('a desktop keyboard'), correct frequency phrase ('every day'), and pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally ('patient records').

× I type every day of patient record.

✓ I type patient records every day.

'Patient record' is a countable noun that in general context should be plural: 'patient records'. The phrase 'every day of patient record' is ungrammatical; express frequency as 'every day' placed after the verb or after the object: 'I type patient records every day.' Suggestion: pluralize countable nouns when referring to multiple instances and position 'every day' correctly.

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? Student: I learned in my College in first years.

✓ When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? Student: I learned in college during my first year.

Related to previous corrections: use 'learned' (past tense) which is correct for the question, but adjust time expression. Also ensure 'college' is not capitalized and use 'during my first year' for clarity. Suggestion: 'I learned in college during my first year.'