Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with correct tense and vocabulary. Avoid repetitions and filler words.

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because I can type much faster, which saves me a lot of time. Also, modern computers have autocorrect features that reduce typos and make my writing cleaner.

Suggestion: Provide a clear structured answer: state your usual habit, then explain exceptions. Reduce hesitations and fix grammar (tense, pronouns). Use linking words like 'however' or 'if'.

Example: It depends on what I'm doing. At home I usually type on my laptop, although I sometimes use a Bluetooth keyboard for comfort. However, when I'm at work I use the desktop keyboard provided there.

Suggestion: Give a direct time reference and one or two specific details; correct grammar and avoid double negatives. Use connectors like 'because' to explain feelings or reasons.

Example: I learned to type when I was quite young, at primary school. We had computer classes and typing homework that required us to practice individual letters, which I found tedious at the time.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give concrete methods to improve typing. Mention specific activities, tools or routines and use clear verb forms. Avoid vague phrases like 'naturally'.

Example: I improve my typing mainly by practicing regularly. For example, I use online typing tutors for 15 minutes a day and also type a lot in chat and emails, which has increased my speed over time.

× And also nowadays computer always have auto correction, it saved me from making stupid mistake like typo and may maybe make makes people.

✓ And also nowadays computers always have auto-correction; it saves me from making stupid mistakes like typos and maybe makes fewer mistakes for people.

Errors: subject-verb agreement (computer -> computers with 'have' or change verb to singular), third person singular verb form ('saved' should be present 'saves' to match general truth), plural forms for countable nouns ('mistake' -> 'mistakes', 'typo' -> 'typos'), and redundant/incorrect words ('may maybe make makes people' unclear). Suggestion: use plural 'computers' to match 'have', use present simple 'saves' for habitual fact, pluralize countable nouns, and simplify last clause to 'maybe makes fewer mistakes for people'.

× It depends what I'm doing for that day uh, if I sit out stay at home, I will type on my laptop uh, although I matched a Bluetooth uh keyboard for my laptop and if I was working umm, I am working, then I will.

✓ It depends on what I'm doing that day. If I stay at home, I type on my laptop; I have paired a Bluetooth keyboard with my laptop. If I am working away from home, I use a desktop.

Errors: incorrect verb forms and sentence structure. 'It depends what' should be 'It depends on what'; 'for that day' -> 'that day'; 'sit out stay at home' is ungrammatical; 'I matched a Bluetooth keyboard' uses wrong verb ('matched' is incorrect past choice), better 'paired' or 'connected'; inconsistent tense and unclear conditional. Suggestion: use present continuous/simple appropriately and 'depend on' structure; use 'paired/connected' for device setup; split into clear sentences or clauses.

× I learned how to type when I was really, really young. I remember back then we have computer class in the house in the school and we have homework as, uh, typing for several letters on the computer.

✓ I learned how to type when I was really, really young. I remember back then we had computer classes at school and we had homework to practice typing several letters on the computer.

Errors: inconsistent tense: 'I learned' (past) requires past 'we had' not present 'we have'; article/preposition issues: 'in the house in the school' unclear, likely 'at school'; 'homework as, uh, typing for several letters' should be 'homework to practice typing several letters'. Suggestion: keep past tense for memories, use 'had', 'at school', and clearer infinitive purpose 'homework to practice'.

× I remember I don't didn't like that very much because it's tedious.

✓ I remember I didn't like that very much because it was tedious.

Errors: double/mixed negation 'don't didn't' is incorrect; tense inconsistency: remember (present) referencing past preference should use past 'didn't'; 'it's tedious' should be past 'it was tedious' to match past context. Suggestion: use single past negative 'didn't' and past 'was' for consistency.

× I don't remember, I have a practice it like seriously, it just, I spend a lot of time on chatting apps so it's naturally getting speedy and uh yeah, it's just natural.

✓ I don't remember practicing seriously; I just spend a lot of time on chatting apps, so my typing speed improved naturally.

Errors: awkward phrasing and incorrect verb forms 'I have a practice it', mixed tenses 'don't remember' with unclear time reference, 'it's naturally getting speedy' ungrammatical. Suggestion: rephrase to concise statements: 'I don't remember practicing seriously' and use clear result clause 'so my typing speed improved naturally'.