Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (preference), then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'developed world' without explanation and correct grammar (e.g., 'write letters', 'my parents').

Example: I prefer typing because it’s faster and more convenient for everyday tasks. For example, I can edit documents quickly and send messages instantly. However, I sometimes write letters to my parents to make my messages feel more personal.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer first, then add two specific activities you do on the desktop. Remove filler words (uh, umm) and use correct grammar (e.g., 'a desktop', 'sometimes learn English' → 'sometimes practice English'). Use linking words like 'for example' or 'usually'.

Example: I type on a desktop every day because that’s the only computer I have. I usually chat with friends and join video calls with my family. I also use it to practice English online.

Suggestion: Be accurate and clear about the time and process. Use correct verbs and grammar (learn how to type, one year ago, taught me). Provide a brief supporting detail about how you learned, using linking words like 'because' or 'when'.

Example: I learned how to type about a year ago when my father taught me. He showed me the main keys and how to use Enter and Backspace to correct mistakes.

Suggestion: Give a clear routine and specific methods. Use correct tense and vocabulary (improve my typing speed/accuracy, practice regularly). Explain frequency and a concrete activity (typing exercises, online lessons) with linking words 'for example' or 'usually'.

Example: I improve my typing by practicing every day for about an hour. For example, I use online typing tests and exercises to increase my speed and accuracy, and I review common errors weekly to reduce mistakes.

× To be honest, I prefer typing because it is very convenient and useful, especially in developed world.

✓ To be honest, I prefer typing because it is very convenient and useful, especially in the developed world.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'developed world'. Use 'the' because we refer to a specific, known concept (the developed world). Use: 'the developed world.'

× But sometimes I also write letter for my mother and my dad to express my love for them.

✓ But sometimes I also write letters to my mother and my father to express my love for them.

Countable noun 'letter' needs plural or an article. Also use 'to' for recipient and 'my father' is more natural than 'my dad' in this context. Change to 'write letters to my mother and my father.'

× Well, actually I have only one, uh, desktop. So every day I type on desktop.

✓ Well, actually I have only one desktop, so every day I type on my desktop.

Omit unnecessary comma and add possessive 'my' before 'desktop'. 'On desktop' is ungrammatical; use 'on my desktop.'

× Now for example, I usually umm, chat with my friend or make a call with my family sometime learn English.

✓ For example, I usually chat with my friends, call my family, or sometimes learn English.

Original sentence has incorrect coordination and missing articles/plurals. Use parallel structure: verbs in same form and plural 'friends'. 'Make a call with my family' is awkward; 'call my family' is correct. Place adverb 'sometimes' before 'learn'.

× I think I learned how to tie a keyboard one years ago for my father.

✓ I think I learned how to type on a keyboard one year ago for my father.

Wrong verb 'tie' should be 'type'; 'on a keyboard' is correct prepositional phrase; 'one years' should be 'one year' (singular).

× He told me how to button or Click to enter or delete something on my laptop.

✓ He showed me how to press buttons and how to click to enter or delete something on my laptop.

Use 'showed' or 'told' with appropriate object; 'button' is a noun—use 'press buttons'. 'Click' should be lowercase and paired with an appropriate verb. Use parallel forms: 'press' and 'click.'

× Will I improve my timing by time, weekly and currently and also frequently.

✓ I have improved my typing speed over time; I practice weekly and frequently.

Original begins with 'Will I' which incorrectly forms a question. Context asks how they improve typing; answer should be a statement in present/present perfect. 'Timing' is incorrect; 'typing speed' or 'typing accuracy' is better. Clarify adverb usage: 'over time', 'weekly', 'frequently.'

× For example, I usually spend one hour a day to learn how to type being weekly and currently for difficult.

✓ For example, I usually spend one hour a day learning how to type; I practice weekly, especially when I find something difficult.

Use gerund 'learning' after 'spend one hour a day'. Phrase 'being weekly and currently for difficult' is ungrammatical; replace with 'practice weekly' and specify 'when I find something difficult.'