Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and fix mistakes (e.g. "more fast" → "faster", "technology is takes" → "technology takes").

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and clearer. For example, when I write essays or emails I can edit quickly and others can easily read my work. Also, technology makes typing more convenient nowadays, so I use it most of the time.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence and one clear supporting detail using linking words; reduce fillers (uh, like). Correct small grammar issues (e.g. "more practical" is fine).

Example: I usually type on a laptop because it's more practical. For instance, I can work in different places such as cafés or my bedroom, whereas a desktop stays fixed on a desk and can't be moved.

Suggestion: Give a clear time reference and use correct verb forms. Reduce hesitations and add a specific detail about how you learned (which site, how long you practiced).

Example: I learned to type when I was about 13 after I bought my first laptop with my own savings. I practiced daily on a typing website for several months, which helped me increase both speed and accuracy.

Suggestion: Start with a clear statement and give specific, organized methods with linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "some random website" and correct repetition. Mention measurable progress if possible.

Example: I improve my typing by practicing every day on a structured typing site and by doing exercises that force me to keep my eyes on the screen. As a result, my speed and accuracy have increased; for example, I went from 30 to 50 words per minute in three months.

× I prefer typing because it's more fast and it doesn't depend on my handwriting.

✓ I prefer typing because it's faster and it doesn't depend on my handwriting.

Use the comparative form of the adjective 'fast' (faster) rather than 'more fast'. 'More' + adjective is used for multisyllabic adjectives; 'fast' is a short adjective and forms the comparative by adding -er. Suggestion: use 'faster' for clear, natural comparative expressions.

× My handwriting is so bad like no one would understand that.

✓ My handwriting is so bad that no one would understand it.

The conjunction 'like' is informal and incorrect here; use 'that' to introduce the result clause. Also use the pronoun 'it' to refer to 'handwriting' rather than repeating 'that'. Suggestion: use 'so... that' to show cause and effect and use appropriate pronouns.

× So typing is very good and very practical and easy and fast in these days.

✓ So typing is very good, practical, easy, and fast these days.

The phrase 'in these days' is nonstandard; use 'these days'. Also streamline adjectives and punctuation for natural English. Maintain simple present to describe general preference. Suggestion: use 'these days' and combine adjectives with commas.

× So technology is takes most part of our life these days.

✓ So technology takes up most of our lives these days.

There is an extra auxiliary 'is' before 'takes' which makes the verb form incorrect. Use simple present 'takes up' to mean occupies. Also use 'most of our lives' (plural) to match 'our'. Suggestion: avoid unnecessary 'is' and use the phrasal verb 'takes up'.

× I use a laptop because it's more practical like I can uh use it whenever I want wherever I want because desktop is just on the on the desk.

✓ I use a laptop because it's more practical; I can use it whenever and wherever I want, while a desktop stays on the desk.

Run-on sentence with filler words and repetition. 'More practical' is fine, but the clause is repetitive and 'desktop is just on the on the desk' is awkward. Use a semicolon or separate clauses, remove fillers ('uh') and redundant words, and use 'while' to contrast a laptop with a desktop. Suggestion: speak concise clauses and avoid fillers.

× I can't move it the uh, but the laptop is opposite.

✓ I can't move it, but the laptop is the opposite.

Missing article 'the' before 'opposite' and awkward phrasing. Better: 'the laptop is the opposite' or 'the laptop is portable.' Use commas to separate clauses and remove filler. Suggestion: use 'the opposite' or a clearer adjective like 'portable'.

× So yeah I.

✓ So yeah, I do.

Sentence fragment lacking a verb. Adding 'do' completes the clause ('I do' implies 'prefer typing'). Suggestion: avoid trailing fragments; finish the sentence with an auxiliary or verb.

× I purchased my first laptop when I was young.

✓ I purchased my first laptop when I was young.

Sentence is grammatically correct. No correction needed. Explanation: use of past tense 'purchased' correctly indicates a completed action in the past.

× I bought it with my own money, so I start practicing and typing on uh, this website where you can uh, type fast, uh, different words.

✓ I bought it with my own money, so I started practicing and typing on a website where you can type different words quickly.

Mix of past and present tenses: 'bought' is past, so follow with 'started' (past). Remove fillers ('uh') and use 'a website' (article) and place adverb 'quickly' after verb for natural order. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and reduce fillers.

× I try to type every day on some random website on on Chrome like it's just so useful and I try to practice and type without looking to the keyboard.

✓ I try to type every day on a random website on Chrome because it's very useful, and I practice typing without looking at the keyboard.

Use 'a random website' (article) and 'on Chrome' is fine. Use 'because' rather than 'like' to explain reason in more formal speech. Use 'without looking at the keyboard' (preposition 'at' not 'to'). Also combine clauses and remove repetition. Suggestion: use 'without looking at' and avoid 'like' for formal explanations.

× Just memorize every spot.

✓ I just memorize the key positions.

Fragment imperative not matching context; student describing habit, so use full clause 'I just memorize...'. 'Every spot' is vague; 'the key positions' is clearer. Suggestion: use complete sentences and precise nouns.