Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
I prefer the handwriting because typing is not benefit for me.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
I tap on desktop because the desktop is more confident for me.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
About in my Senior High School, I remember in my Senior High School we have the commuter Peter lessons that we need to learn. We need to learn the keyboard.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
I usually use typing to communicate with my friends.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 48.0Suggestion: 回答需更自然并直接回应问题,同时说明原因并给出具体细节。注意语法(例如:"handwriting"前加定冠词通常不必要;"not benefit for me"应改为"not beneficial for me"或更口语的表达)。保持一到三句话,避免含糊。
Example: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember things better. For example, when I take notes by hand, I can recall the information more easily because the act of writing reinforces memory.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答要用正确词汇并解释原因。"tap on desktop"和"more confident"是不自然的表达,建议改为"use a desktop"并说明具体原因(例如舒适、屏幕大小、键盘手感)。控制在一到三句内。
Example: I use a desktop keyboard every day because the larger screen and full-size keyboard are more comfortable for long typing sessions. This setup reduces strain and helps me work more efficiently.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 35.0Suggestion: 回答要简洁并提供清晰时间点和细节。纠正发音或拼写错误的写法(如"Senior High School"可以说"high school";不明词汇"commuter Peter"可能是误听或误说,应改为"computer class")。避免重复。
Example: I learned to type when I was in high school during a computer class. We had regular lessons where we practiced typing accuracy and speed using typing software.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答应直接说明具体练习方法和提高手段,而不仅是用途。给出具体例子和频率,如练习软件、在线课程、定期练习时间和目标(速度或准确率)。保持一到三句并使用连接词。
Example: I improve my typing by practicing on online typing platforms for 15–20 minutes a day, focusing on accuracy first and then speed. For instance, I use typing.com exercises and track my progress each week.
× I prefer the handwriting because typing is not benefit for me.
✓ I prefer handwriting because typing is not beneficial for me.
句中使用的名词/形容词不当:原句中的“the handwriting”与上下文不搭配,通常说法是“prefer handwriting”而不是加定冠词。另外“not benefit”用词错误,需用形容词“beneficial”或副词“useful”。建议:把“the handwriting”改为“handwriting”,把“not benefit”改为“not beneficial”或“not useful”。这样表意更自然。
× I tap on desktop because the desktop is more confident for me.
✓ I type on a desktop because the desktop is more comfortable for me.
多个问题:1) 动词用错,“tap on”通常指轻拍,打字应使用“type”。2) “on desktop”需加不定冠词“a desktop”。3) “confident”是形容人的词,描述物品应使用“comfortable”或“convenient”。建议:将“tap on desktop”改为“type on a desktop”,并把“confident”改为“comfortable”或“convenient”。
× About in my Senior High School, I remember in my Senior High School we have the commuter Peter lessons that we need to learn. We need to learn the keyboard.
✓ When I was in senior high school, I remember we had computer lessons where we learned to use the keyboard.
时态与用词混乱:1) 表示过去的经历应使用过去时,故“we have”应改为“we had”。2) “About in my Senior High School”表述不自然,应改为“When I was in senior high school”。3) “commuter Peter lessons”显然是拼写/词序错误,应为“computer lessons”。4) “we need to learn the keyboard”应改为过去式“we learned to use the keyboard”。建议:把整句调整为过去时的自然表达。
× I usually use typing to communicate with my friends.
✓ I usually use typing to communicate with my friends. → I usually type to communicate with my friends.
动词形式不当:原句中“use typing”不自然,习惯用法是直接用动词“type”表示“打字”。时态方面,用现在时描述经常性动作是正确的,但动词搭配需改为“usually type”。建议:将“use typing”改为“type”。