Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence stating your preference and follow with one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid vague phrasing and redundant words.

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit text quickly and store documents in the cloud, so I rarely lose my work.

Suggestion: Start with a clear direct answer (desktop or laptop), then give a concise reason with correct grammar and specific details. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly and avoid awkward phrasing.

Example: Yes, I type on a laptop every day because I play online games and do schoolwork on it. As a result, I spend several hours a day at my desk using the laptop keyboard.

Suggestion: Provide a clear time reference and combine the statements into a fluent short narrative. Use linking words such as 'when' or 'after' and be specific about how long it took or when it started.

Example: I learned to type by myself a few years ago. After practising for several hours every day, I gradually improved my keyboard skills and became much faster.

Suggestion: Describe a realistic, clear method for improving typing with correct vocabulary and grammar. Avoid repetitions and unrealistic claims like 'famous.' Use sequencing words (first, then, finally) and give measurable details if possible.

Example: I improved my typing by practicing regularly: first I learned proper finger placement, then I used online typing exercises for 20 minutes a day. Over a few months my speed increased from about 30 to 60 words per minute.

× I prefer typing, but because it's useful and easy.

✓ I prefer typing because it is useful and easy.

The original sentence has an unnecessary conjunction 'but' before 'because', causing a sentence structure error. Remove 'but' to connect the preference to the reason properly. Also expand the contraction to 'it is' if formality is desired, but contraction is acceptable in speech.

× Yes, because of I am addicted in online games and I spent my hours on being on the desk with my laptop.

✓ Yes, because I am addicted to online games and I spend my hours sitting at the desk with my laptop.

Multiple errors: 'because of I am' is incorrect; use 'because I am' (conjunction plus clause) or 'because of' followed by a noun. 'Addicted in' should be 'addicted to' (correct preposition). 'I spent my hours on being on the desk' mixes tenses and unnatural phrasing: use present habit 'I spend my hours sitting at the desk'. Ensure verb tense matches the habitual meaning.

× I learned it by myself. After I spent several hours on desks, I improved my skill to type on a keyboard.

✓ I learned it by myself. After I spent several hours at a desk, I improved my typing skill.

Use 'at a desk' (correct preposition and singular) not 'on desks'. 'Improved my skill to type on a keyboard' is awkward: use 'improved my typing skill' or 'improved my ability to type'. Keep past tense consistent: 'spent' and 'improved' are correct here, but simplify phrase for naturalness.

× I started to tipping random keys by 1 by 1. Then I improved my hands and became famous became became typing faster.

✓ I started by tapping random keys one by one. Then my hands improved and I became faster at typing.

'Started to tipping' mixes infinitive and -ing incorrectly: use 'started tapping' or 'started to tap'. 'By 1 by 1' is unidiomatic; use 'one by one'. 'Improved my hands' is awkward—say 'my hands improved' or 'my dexterity improved'. Remove repeated 'became' and correct the phrase to 'became faster at typing' to express the result.