Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct verb forms (e.g., "I prefer typing" not "I prefer to typing").

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, when I send messages or write notes I can type quickly and easily edit them, which saves time and reduces mistakes.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence and one specific reason; avoid filler words. Use correct articles and pluralization ("on a laptop" not "on laptop"). Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., "because").

Example: I usually type on a laptop every day because I don't own a desktop computer. Since I carry my laptop between home and work, it is more convenient for typing and studying.

Suggestion: Answer with a clear, single time reference and a concise supporting detail. Avoid hesitation and self-correction. Use correct articles and tenses ("I learned to type in elementary school"). Provide one specific detail about the class to make it more informative.

Example: I learned to type in elementary school when we had a computer class. The teacher showed us touch-typing techniques and we practiced using typing exercises on the school computers.

Suggestion: Give a clear method and a specific example of how it helps. Avoid hesitations and vague phrasing. Use linking words (e.g., "for example", "because") and correct verbs ("improve my typing" not "I could improve").

Example: I improve my typing by playing online games where I must chat quickly with friends. For example, typing messages during a game forces me to type faster and more accurately, which has improved my speed over time.

× I used to like to do handwriting when I was a little, but since I became an adult I like to.

✓ I used to like handwriting when I was young, but since I became an adult I like it.

The original mixes past habit 'used to' with present 'like to' awkwardly and uses 'when I was a little' which is unidiomatic. Change 'do handwriting' to 'like handwriting' and 'when I was a little' to 'when I was young'. Replace 'I like to' with 'I like it' for clarity and correct tense sequence.

× I preferred to typing because it is more convenient and also it can more faster to respond to the message.

✓ I prefer typing because it is more convenient and allows me to respond to messages faster.

'Preferred to typing' is incorrect: use 'prefer typing' (verb + -ing) or 'prefer to type'. 'Can more faster' is ungrammatical; use 'allows me to respond ... faster' or 'helps me respond faster'. Also 'message' should be plural 'messages' when speaking generally.

× So that's why I like I prefer to type in right now.

✓ So that's why I prefer to type now.

This sentence contains redundant phrases 'I like I prefer to' and an incorrect placement 'in right now'. Simplify to 'I prefer to type now' or 'I prefer typing now' to be concise and grammatically correct.

× I usually type on laptop in my daily lives because I don't have any desktop computer in my life.

✓ I usually type on a laptop in my daily life because I don't have a desktop computer.

Use the article 'a' before 'laptop'. 'In my daily lives' is incorrect; use singular 'in my daily life' or 'in my day-to-day life'. 'Any' is unnecessary with 'don't have' and 'in my life' is redundant.

× Uh, but I have laptop computer instead, so that's why I usually use laptop.

✓ But I have a laptop computer, so I usually use my laptop.

Missing article 'a' before 'laptop computer'. Repetition 'use laptop' needs possessive 'my laptop' for natural English. 'Instead' is unnecessary here.

× When I was a junior high school student, uh, no, I was a elementary school student, I learned about typing uh, because I had a class for a computer and then the teacher taught us like how to type computer and also on so we could learn about that one and also.

✓ When I was in elementary school, I learned to type because I had a computer class and the teacher taught us how to type.

Use 'in elementary school' rather than 'a elementary'. 'Learned to type' is the correct verb pattern. Remove filler words and repetitions. 'How to type computer' is wrong — it should be 'how to type' or 'how to use a computer'. Simplify and use past tense consistently.

× In my case umm I think through the game, the computer game then I think I could improve my typing skills because in this game in that game I need to chat with my friends.

✓ In my case, I think playing computer games helped me improve my typing skills because in those games I needed to chat with my friends.

Use 'playing' (verb + -ing) to indicate the activity. Maintain past tense 'helped' and 'needed' to match 'improve' context. 'In this game in that game' is repetitive; use 'those games' for generalization.

× So I think then like I could answer the question or like re respond reply to the answer then fast.

✓ So I could answer questions or reply to messages more quickly.

Remove filler words and incorrect word forms 're respond reply'. Use plural 'questions' and 'messages' for general statements. 'More quickly' is the correct adverb phrase; 'fast' is informal and less precise here.