Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Сократите и упростите ответ, используйте правильную грамматику и связки. Начните с прямого топик‑предложения, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных причины с примерами. Избегайте повторов и исправьте ошибки порядка слов и формы глаголов (например, "take notes", "searching for a pen or paper").

Example: I prefer typing on my phone because it's very convenient when I'm out. For example, I can quickly take notes and search information without needing a pen or paper. Also, typed notes are easy to save and organize, so I rarely use handwriting.

Suggestion: Сформулируйте предложение чётко, избегайте тавтологии и исправьте лексические ошибки (например, "I type on a laptop" и "I don't have a desktop"). Используйте связки для логики (например, "so", "because").

Example: I type on a laptop every day because I don't have a desktop computer. I usually use my laptop or phone for tasks like writing essays and researching, so the laptop is my main device for work.

Suggestion: Сделайте ответ более последовательным: укажите время, где и как вы учились, избегайте неверных слов ("price" вместо "present"), и исключите повторения. Используйте прошедшее время корректно и добавьте одну‑две детали.

Example: I learned to type on a keyboard at school during a short typing class when I was a child. Later my dad gave me a phone as a present, and using it to chat with friends helped me practice and improve my typing skills.

Suggestion: Дайте чёткую структуру: начните с главной идеи, затем поясните методы улучшения. Избегайте лишних пауз и некорректных форм ("write faster", "my typing improved"). Приведите конкретные действия и частоту практики.

Example: I improve my typing by practising every day on my phone and laptop. For example, I write messages, do short essays and use typing apps to increase speed and accuracy. Regular daily practice has helped my typing improve over time.

× Well I prefer typing on the phone because it's very convenient in when I am out.

✓ Well, I prefer typing on the phone because it's very convenient when I am out.

The extra article 'in' before 'when I am out' is incorrect and redundant. Remove 'in' to form the correct temporal clause 'when I am out'. Also add a comma after 'Well' for natural speech rhythm.

× For example, I can easily take a notes on my phone instead of sorting, searching a pen or kind, searching paper for writing.

✓ For example, I can easily take notes on my phone instead of searching for a pen or paper for writing.

'A notes' is incorrect because 'notes' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. 'Sorting, searching a pen or kind, searching paper' is ungrammatical; use 'searching for a pen or paper'. Remove redundant words and order correctly.

× Additionally, it's very easy make it is on phone.

✓ Additionally, it's very easy to do on the phone.

The phrase 'easy make it is' is ungrammatical. Use the infinitive 'to do' after 'easy' and include the article 'the' before 'phone'.

× That's why I.

✓ That's why I prefer it.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb/complement. Add 'prefer it' to complete the idea and connect to previous statements.

× Well I am type on a laptop because I don't have a disk.

✓ Well, I type on a laptop because I don't have a desktop computer.

'I am type' mixes progressive auxiliary with base verb incorrectly; use simple present 'I type'. 'disk' likely intended 'desktop' or 'desktop computer'; replace for clarity.

× That's why I usually use my laptop or phone for my work like writing essays or doing some searches.

✓ That's why I usually use my laptop or phone for work, like writing essays or doing research.

'for my work' is acceptable but 'for work' is more natural. 'doing some searches' is awkward; 'doing research' or 'searching online' is better.

× That's why I everyday I use a laptop every day.

✓ That's why I use a laptop every day.

The sentence is redundant ('everyday' and 'every day' both used) and has misplaced 'I'. Use a single 'every day' and correct word order.

× I learned how to keyboard when I was studying studying short class at school.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was taking a short class at school.

Use 'learned' with infinitive 'to type' and 'on the keyboard'. 'studying short class' is incorrect; use 'taking a short class'. Remove repeated 'studying'.

× My dad gave me a price and that price was my phone and I learned how to write and I use my phone everyday with chatting with my friends.

✓ My dad gave me a present, which was my phone, and I learned to write and use my phone every day to chat with my friends.

'price' is incorrect; 'present' or 'prize' depending on meaning. Use a relative clause 'which was my phone'. Use infinitives 'learned to write' and 'use', and 'every day' (two words) and 'to chat' for purpose.

× By this way I learned how to write.

✓ In this way, I learned how to write.

Use the correct phrase 'In this way' and add a comma for clarity.

× That was very easy.

✓ It was very easy.

'That was very easy' is acceptable but 'It was very easy' is more natural referring to the activity previously mentioned.

× For example, I use my phone every day for uh, writing essays or umm, chatting with my friends.

✓ For example, I use my phone every day for writing essays or chatting with my friends.

Remove filler sounds 'uh' and 'umm' in written form. The gerund phrases 'writing' and 'chatting' are correct after 'for'.

× And this exercise was regularly.

✓ And I did this exercise regularly.

'was regularly' is incorrect adverb placement and tense. Use active past simple 'did' and place 'regularly' after the verb.

× That's why I learned have to write accurately and have to write very faster.

✓ That's why I learned I have to write accurately and to write much faster.

Insert 'I' after 'learned' to form reported perception. 'have to write' needs 'I' and 'very faster' is incorrect; use 'much faster' or 'much more quickly'.

× And day by day my keyboard was improving by this way.

✓ And day by day my typing improved in this way.

'my keyboard was improving' is incorrect meaning; the person improved, not the keyboard. Use 'typing improved' and simple past 'improved'. Use 'in this way' not 'by this way'.