Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Reduce hesitations and unnecessary repetition; start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answer under five sentences and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Example: I prefer handwriting because I find it more personal and easier to remember. For example, my secondary school teacher once praised my clear handwriting, which encouraged me to practice regularly. Therefore, I still choose pen and paper for notes and planning.

Suggestion: Make a direct statement then give concise reasons with better grammar and linking words. Correct repetition and vague phrases; be specific about how you use the laptop.

Example: Yes, I type on my laptop every day because my job involves writing emails and reports. In addition, I often use the laptop in my free time to stream films and search for information online.

Suggestion: Provide a clear timeframe and improve grammar and word choice. Use a topic sentence then a specific supporting detail and linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'to get mark'.

Example: I learned to type when I was about ten years old. My father taught me basic typing skills because he wanted me to use the computer for schoolwork and improve my grades.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear statement about your main method, then give specific examples and use linking words. Avoid fragmented sentences and repetition. Mention concrete practices or websites if relevant.

Example: I improve my typing mainly by practising every day. For instance, I use online typing lessons to work on speed and accuracy, and I also practice at work and at home by typing emails and notes regularly.

× He said, Uh, you have an amazing and uh, easy to read handwriting.

✓ He said, 'You have amazing, easy-to-read handwriting.'

The noun 'handwriting' is uncountable here, so 'an' is incorrect; remove 'an'. Also hyphenate 'easy-to-read' as a compound adjective before a noun and remove extra filler words for clarity.

× Yes I do type on my PC laptop every day because my job requires that and even if if I am in my free time when I want to watch much or films you need to type to do that.

✓ 'Yes, I type on my laptop every day because my job requires it, and even in my free time when I want to watch movies I need to type to do that.'

Avoid redundant auxiliary 'do' with simple present for affirmative statement; use 'requires it' instead of 'requires that'. Replace 'if if' with 'in', use 'movies' instead of 'much or films', and keep pronoun consistent ('I' not 'you').

× I learned to type in a keyboard in very young age.

✓ 'I learned to type on a keyboard at a very young age.'

Use preposition 'on' with 'keyboard' (preposition error) and article and expression 'at a very young age' rather than 'in very young age'. This corrects preposition and article usage and fixes idiomatic phrasing.

× When I was 10 years, my father taught me how to write, how to type in keyboard because he told me to use the PC to study and to get mark.

✓ 'When I was 10, my father taught me how to write and how to type on the keyboard because he told me to use the PC to study and to get good marks.'

Use 'When I was 10' (omit 'years'), use 'on the keyboard' not 'in keyboard', combine 'write and type' with 'and', and pluralize 'marks' or say 'a good grade' to be natural. Also add 'good' to clarify meaning.

× When there is a specific site that can help anyone to type good and fast.

✓ 'There is a specific site that can help anyone type well and quickly.'

Original is a fragment without a main clause for the conversation; make it a complete sentence. Use 'type well and quickly' (adverb forms) instead of 'type good and fast' (adjective and informal adverb). Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'help'.

× But personally I'm improving my type by typing every day and my work or in my home.

✓ 'But personally I'm improving my typing by practicing every day at work and at home.'

Use noun 'typing' not 'type'; 'practicing' is clearer; use parallel prepositional phrases 'at work and at home' for clarity. Maintain present continuous for ongoing improvement.

× So the everyday everyday typing is helping.

✓ 'So the everyday typing is helping.'

Remove duplicate word 'everyday'. 'Everyday' as adjective is fine; sentence is acceptable though 'is helping' could be 'helps' depending on emphasis. Keep present continuous if ongoing improvement is intended.

× He said, Uh, you have an amazing and uh, easy to read handwriting.

✓ 'He said, you have amazing, easy-to-read handwriting.'

Also avoid shifting register and unnecessary direct fillers; keep pronoun 'you' as in reported speech if quoting teacher. This mirrors earlier correction removing article and hyphenating compound adjective.