Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 문장이 자연스럽고 문법적으로 정확하도록 구성 연습이 필요합니다. 주어-동사 일치와 관사/전치사 사용을 고치고, 불필요한 반복을 줄이며 이유를 간결하게 제시하세요. 예를 들어 ‘I prefer typing because it’s more comfortable and convenient; I often use my phone or laptop’처럼 한두 문장으로 명확히 표현하는 연습을 하세요.

Example: I prefer typing because it’s more comfortable and convenient; I often use my phone or laptop, so I type most of the time.

Suggestion: 문장 연결과 문법(진행형, 비교 표현)을 바로잡아야 합니다. 짧은 문장으로 명확히 답한 후 비교를 덧붙이세요. 예: ‘Yes, I always use a laptop. I’m better at typing on it than on my phone.’처럼 주어와 동사의 형태를 정확히 쓰세요.

Example: Yes, I always use a laptop keyboard. I’m better at typing on my laptop than on my phone.

Suggestion: 시간 표현과 문장 연결을 자연스럽게 만들 필요가 있습니다. ‘When’ 질문에는 직접적으로 연도를/나이를 말하고, 그 이유나 배경을 한두 문장으로 덧붙이세요. 문장 사이의 논리적 연결도 링크단어로 개선하세요. 예: ‘I started when I was eight because I played PC games with friends, which required keyboard use.’

Example: I started when I was about eight years old because I played PC games with my friends, and those games required a keyboard.

Suggestion: 방법을 묻는 질문에는 구체적인 활동과 효과를 연결해서 말하세요. 문장 구조를 단순화하고 연결어를 사용해 효과를 설명하세요. 예: ‘I practice with online typing games regularly because they help me increase speed and accuracy.’처럼 말하세요.

Example: I usually practice with online typing games regularly because they help me improve both my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because there is very comfortable and convenient where I use always phone or laptop, so I always typing.

✓ I prefer typing because it is very comfortable and convenient since I always use my phone or laptop, so I always type.

Pronoun 'there' is incorrect for referring to typing; use 'it'. Word order and articles are wrong: 'very comfortable and convenient' needs 'it is'. 'use always' should be 'always use'. 'I always typing' lacks correct verb form; use simple present 'I always type'. Also add possessive 'my' for 'phone or laptop'. Suggestions: replace 'there' with 'it', move 'always' before verb, add 'my', and use base verb 'type' for habitual action.

× Yes, I always using laptop keyboard. But. I better than phone typing.

✓ Yes, I always use a laptop keyboard. But I am better at typing on a phone.

Present participle 'using' is incorrect after auxiliary; for habitual action use simple present 'use'. Missing article before 'laptop keyboard' requires 'a'. Second sentence: 'I better than phone typing' is ungrammatical; use 'I am better at typing on a phone' to compare ability. Suggestions: use simple present, include article, and use 'be better at' + gerund.

× Maybe when I was 8 years old I started. PC game with my friends. In PC game there are have many.

✓ Maybe when I was 8 years old I started playing PC games with my friends. There were many games on the PC.

Fragmented sentences and incorrect verb forms: 'I started. PC game' should be a single clause 'I started playing PC games'. Use plural 'games' for general. 'There are have many' mixes present and have; to describe past use 'There were many'. Suggestions: combine clauses, use 'started playing', pluralize 'games', and use correct tense 'were' for past.

× I usually use typing practical games or online game in online game effect very well.

✓ I usually use typing practice games or online games; online games are very effective.

Incorrect noun forms: 'typing practical games' should be 'typing practice games'. 'Use' followed by noun is fine; avoid using 'in online game effect'; instead say 'online games are very effective' to express result. Pluralize 'games'. Suggestions: replace 'practical' with 'practice', pluralize, and rephrase to 'are very effective'.