Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
I prefer handwriting because I think handwaiting you can hold the pants and there is more easy to control and typing you need to you need to type the keyboard. I don't think I think this just I not viewed so I don't like this feeling so I prefer handwriting.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
Yes, I I type on the desktop keyboard every day and for example in recently I prefer the IO exam, so I need to type typing every day to prepare my writing session. So yeah.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
Umm, I think is is in my primary school and when I was in my primary school there have a IT lesson so the teachers teach me how to typing and to give me some exercise to typing and there also has some competition so I learn the typing that's time.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
Umm, I think if you want to improve your writing, you just need to type every day or type a long period. So that's your typing skill will improve. Because if you type a, not your, your speed or and other thing, etcetera, etcetera will also improve.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 38.0Suggestion: 在回答中要更直接、有条理并用准确词汇。首先给出主题句,然后用1-2个具体理由支持,避免重复和语法错误。注意使用正确的词汇(例如 handwriting, typing, more control, uncomfortable)并使用连接词(because, so, therefore)。句子不要超过5句。
Example: I prefer handwriting because it gives me more control and feels more personal. For example, when I write notes by hand I can organize ideas freely and draw diagrams. Therefore, I often choose handwriting for study and planning.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答要更清晰并补充具体细节。先直接回答问题(desktop or laptop),然后用1-2句说明频率或原因,避免词汇重复和语法混乱。可以使用连接词(because, for example)并控制句子长度。
Example: Yes, I type on a desktop keyboard every day because I prepare for an important exam. For example, I practice typing essays and complete mock tests to improve my speed and accuracy.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 54.0Suggestion: 回答要更简洁并纠正时态和语法。先给出时间点(e.g. in primary school),然后具体说明学习方式或经历,使用适当的连接词(when, so, and)和正确动词形式(learned, taught)。避免重复词语。
Example: I learned to type in primary school when we had IT lessons. The teacher taught us proper finger placement and gave regular exercises, and there was even a typing competition which motivated me to practice.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 46.0Suggestion: 答案应更具体并纠正混淆(writing vs typing)。先给出方法要点,再提供具体做法或建议,使用连接词(for example, by, so)并避免模糊表达和冗余。列举一到两个具体练习(练习软件、定时练习)。
Example: To improve typing, I practice for at least 20 minutes every day and use online typing tests to track my speed. For example, I do timed drills and accuracy exercises, which help increase both speed and precision over time.
× I prefer handwriting because I think handwaiting you can hold the pants and there is more easy to control and typing you need to you need to type the keyboard.
✓ I prefer handwriting because I think with handwriting you can hold the pen and it is easier to control, while typing you need to use the keyboard.
问题类型:句子结构、动词用法和词汇错误(接近 26:Sentence structure errors,8/9/10 也相关)。解释:原句单词拼写错误(handwaiting → handwriting;pants → pen),句子结构混乱,存在多余和重复的词(you need to you need),以及“there is more easy to control” 不符合英语表达,应为“it is easier to control”。建议:注意单词拼写,用正确名词(pen),去掉重复短语,使用“it is easier to ...” 表达比较。
× I don't think I think this just I not viewed so I don't like this feeling so I prefer handwriting.
✓ I don't like that feeling, so I prefer handwriting.
问题类型:句子结构错误与重复(26)。解释:原句重复“think”且插入了不必要的短语(this just I not viewed),导致意思不明。建议:简化表达,直接说出观点,例如“I don't like that feeling”并接因果关系“so I prefer handwriting”。
× Yes, I I type on the desktop keyboard every day and for example in recently I prefer the IO exam, so I need to type typing every day to prepare my writing session. So yeah.
✓ Yes, I type on the desktop keyboard every day. Recently, because of the IO exam, I need to type every day to prepare for my writing tasks.
问题类型:句子结构问题与冗余(26),以及重复词(错误接近无特殊ID但属结构错误)。解释:原句有重复“I I”,短语“in recently”不正确,应为“recently”;“prefer the IO exam”用词不当,可能想表达“because of the IO exam”;“type typing”重复。建议:删除重复词,使用正确的时间状语“recently”,使用“because of”表达原因,并用“prepare for my writing tasks”更自然。
× Umm, I think is is in my primary school and when I was in my primary school there have a IT lesson so the teachers teach me how to typing and to give me some exercise to typing and there also has some competition so I learn the typing that's time.
✓ I think it was in primary school. When I was in primary school there was an IT lesson, so the teachers taught me how to type and gave me some typing exercises. There were also some competitions, so I learned typing then.
问题类型:过去时错误(5)与存在句使用错误(3)。解释:原句时态混乱(现在时与过去时混用),应将描述过去经历的动词改为过去式(teach → taught;learn → learned);存在句用法错误(there have/has → there was/were);动词不定式/动名词用法错误(how to typing → how to type)。建议:保持过去时一致,使用正确的存在句结构“there was/there were”,并将动词改为不带 -ing 的不定式或使用动词原形在“how to”之后。
× Umm, I think if you want to improve your writing, you just need to type every day or type a long period. So that's your typing skill will improve. Because if you type a, not your, your speed or and other thing, etcetera, etcetera will also improve.
✓ I think if you want to improve your writing, you just need to type every day or for long periods. That way your typing skills will improve, because your speed and other aspects will also improve if you practice regularly.
问题类型:动词 -ing 使用与句子结构(8/26),以及冠词和复数形式问题(22/1)。解释:原句“type a long period”不符合英语习惯,应为“for long periods”;“that's your typing skill will improve” 语法错误,应该用“That way”或“Then”引导结果句;“typing skill”应为复数“typing skills”;句尾“a, not your, your speed or and other thing”表达混乱。建议:使用习惯搭配“for long periods”,用连词或过渡短语连接结果句,注意名词复数形式并避免杂乱重复。