Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời đã rõ ràng và tự nhiên nhưng còn lặp từ (ví dụ: “typing” lặp nhiều) và thiếu liên kết logic rõ ràng giữa các ý. Nên mở rộng bằng một câu ví dụ cụ thể và dùng từ nối để làm mạch văn mượt mà hơn. Ngoài ra giới hạn số câu tối đa 4-5 câu và tránh lỗi lặp từ không cần thiết.

Example: I prefer typing because it's faster and makes correcting mistakes simple. Additionally, typing is less tiring for my hands, so I can work for longer periods without discomfort. That said, I still value handwriting since my handwriting is neat and I sometimes use it for personal notes.

Suggestion: Ý chính rõ ràng nhưng câu hơi dài và đôi chỗ ngắt quãng không tự nhiên (“about more than 10 years ago” dư từ). Nên dùng liên từ để nối hai mệnh đề và chỉnh ngữ pháp, cộng thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về khi nào hoặc ở đâu bạn dùng laptop để làm câu hấp dẫn hơn.

Example: I use a laptop every day because it's portable, so I can take it to cafés or the library to study. In contrast, my family used to have a desktop over ten years ago, which I used at home when I was younger.

Suggestion: Nội dung đủ nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và trật tự từ (ví dụ: “started requires”). Cần một câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời “When” rồi dùng mệnh đề bổ nghĩa ngắn gọn. Sửa ngữ pháp và cung cấp một chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: hoạt động hoặc thời lượng học) để làm câu thuyết phục hơn.

Example: I learned to type in third grade when my primary school introduced keyboard lessons. We practiced weekly during computer class, which helped me become comfortable with touch-typing.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời khá ngắn và có lỗi ngôn ngữ (“my my”, “improves net” không rõ nghĩa). Nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích bằng ví dụ cụ thể về cách tập luyện (thời gian, loại công việc, công cụ) và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Tránh từ không chuẩn hoặc cụm từ mơ hồ.

Example: I improve my typing simply by practising every day because my studies and job demand a lot of typing. For instance, I type emails and reports for about two hours daily, which has gradually increased both my speed and accuracy.

× I would choose typing because typing is easier to fix mistakes and my hands don't get tired easily.

✓ I choose typing because typing is easier for fixing mistakes and my hands don't get tired easily.

The speaker uses 'would choose' which implies conditional; present simple 'choose' fits preference questions. Also use 'easier for fixing' or 'easier to use when fixing' for clarity. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual preferences.

× However, handwriting is still my advantage because my handwriting is quite beautiful.

✓ However, handwriting is still my strength because my handwriting is quite beautiful.

'Advantage' is a noun that doesn't collocate naturally to mean a personal skill; 'strength' or 'strong point' is appropriate. Keep sentence structure but replace word for correct collocation.

× Laptop because it is more convenient than desktop as it is mobile so I can bring it to other places to work and study.

✓ I use a laptop because it is more convenient than a desktop: it is portable so I can take it to other places to work and study.

The original is a fragment starting with 'Laptop'. Add subject 'I use' and change 'mobile' to 'portable' or 'portable' collocation. Also add article 'a desktop' and split ideas with punctuation for clarity.

× However, about more than 10 years ago my family had a desktop and I used to type.

✓ About ten years ago my family had a desktop and I used to type on it.

'About more than 10 years ago' is redundant; choose 'about ten years ago' or 'more than ten years ago'. Also add 'on it' to specify where you typed. Maintain past tense 'had' and 'used to' for past habits.

× I still remember it, although it was long ago. It was when I was in the third grade my primary school's curriculum started requires students to learn it.

✓ I still remember it, although it was long ago. It was when I was in the third grade that my primary school's curriculum started to require students to learn it.

Missing 'that' after 'third grade' for the cleft structure. Use 'started to require' or 'started requiring'; original 'started requires' mixes tenses and is ungrammatical. Keep past tense 'started' with infinitive or -ing form.

× I type regularly actually.

✓ I type regularly, actually.

This is minor punctuation: add comma for natural speech. No major grammar error; keep present simple for habitual action.

× I don't have the intention to improve my my typing skills.

✓ I don't intend to improve my typing skills.

Double 'my' is a typo; 'don't have the intention to' is wordy and unnatural—use 'don't intend to'. Remove duplicate pronoun.

× However, my work and study require me to type a lot, so my typing skill just improves net.

✓ However, my work and studies require me to type a lot, so my typing skills just improve naturally.

Use plural 'studies' and 'skills'. 'Just improves net' is ungrammatical—likely meant 'just improves naturally' or 'improves over time'. Use present simple for habitual result. Replace 'skill' with 'skills' and correct adverb.