Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
Well, actually I prefer typing a lot because I am studying abroad right now and I need to write my essay and then I need to search some data on the Internet. So I always use typing a lot. Then high writing I think is more convenient than handwriting.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
Well, actually I have on a desktop keyboard every day because I use a desktop a lot and then I need to buy a keyboard and then I like play computer games with my friend and then I need use a desktop keyboard.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
Well actually when I was in primary school I have learned how to type on a keyboard because my father have to work have to work and when he use computer and I always looked looked him and if he have some spare time and he always teach me how to use a keyboard.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
Well, as far as I know, there are a lot of typing application right now and people often use it to improve their typing skills. And I sometimes use these apps to improve my typing. Typing technique I think is very helpful than most of people.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 62.0Suggestion: 用詞和句子結構需要更自然、精簡,避免重複(如“actually”, “a lot”, “then”),並且第一句要直接回答問題。可以把原因具體化並加上連接詞使語流順暢。練習時控制在3-4句內。
Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because I study abroad and often write essays online. Typing is faster and makes it easy to look up information or edit my work. For example, I can quickly search sources and copy references while I write.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答不夠清晰且有多餘重複(例如多次出現“then”),語法錯誤較多。應先直接說明使用的設備,接着給出1-2個具體原因,用連接詞連貫句子並注意動詞時態和單複數一致。
Example: I use a desktop keyboard every day because I mainly work and play games on my desktop. For instance, I often play online games with friends, which is easier with a full-sized keyboard.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 48.0Suggestion: 句子結構混亂且有許多語法錯誤(時態、人稱、重複詞)。應用過去式描述過去的學習經歷,避免冗詞,提供一兩個具體細節如年級或學習方式。
Example: I learned to type when I was in primary school. My father worked on a computer at home, so I watched him and he taught me basic typing skills during his free time.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 58.0Suggestion: 內容重複且表達不清。應直接說明你如何練習(使用哪些應用、練習頻率或具體技巧),用連接詞連接要點並避免比較時的語法錯誤。
Example: I improve my typing by using online typing apps like TypingClub several times a week. I practice drills for accuracy and speed, and I focus on correct finger placement to reduce mistakes.
× Well, actually I prefer typing a lot because I am studying abroad right now and I need to write my essay and then I need to search some data on the Internet.
✓ Well, actually I prefer typing a lot because I am studying abroad right now and I need to write my essays and search for data on the Internet.
句中使用現在進行時“am studying”與一般現在時“prefer”搭配是可以的,但名詞“essay”在此處表示泛指多次或多篇作文,應使用複數“essays”。另外“search some data on the Internet”中動詞搭配更自然為“search for data on the Internet”。建議注意可數名詞單複數及固定搭配動詞短語。
× So I always use typing a lot.
✓ So I always do a lot of typing.
原句“use typing”結構不自然,動詞“use”後接動名詞“typing”可接受但語序不對且冗贅。改為“do a lot of typing”更符合英語習慣。建議學習常見動詞與名詞搭配表達。
× Then high writing I think is more convenient than handwriting.
✓ I think typing is more convenient than handwriting.
原句“Then high writing”不通順且詞不達意,應為“typing”(打字)。刪去多餘連詞“Then”並調整語序,使句子清晰。建議注意詞彙選擇及基礎句子語序。
× Well, actually I have on a desktop keyboard every day because I use a desktop a lot and then I need to buy a keyboard and then I like play computer games with my friend and then I need use a desktop keyboard.
✓ Well, actually I use a desktop keyboard every day because I use a desktop a lot. I need to buy a keyboard, and I like to play computer games with my friend, so I use a desktop keyboard.
句中存在多處動詞形式錯誤和重複:原句“have on a desktop keyboard”不自然,應為“use a desktop keyboard”;“I like play”應為“I like to play”或“I like playing”;“I need use”應為“I need to use”。此外句子冗長應拆分為多個從句以提高可讀性。建議注意不定式(to do)和動名詞(doing)的正確用法,以及動詞前是否需要助動詞或不定式“to”。
× Well, actually when I was in primary school I have learned how to type on a keyboard because my father have to work have to work and when he use computer and I always looked looked him and if he have some spare time and he always teach me how to use a keyboard.
✓ Well, actually when I was in primary school I learned how to type on a keyboard because my father had to work. When he used the computer, I would often watch him, and if he had some spare time he always taught me how to use a keyboard.
敘述發生在過去,應使用一般過去時:將“have learned”改為“learned”,“have to work”表示現在義務不合意,改為過去“I had to work”或句中描述父親必須工作使用過去時;“when he use”改為“when he used”;“looked looked him”應為“watch him”或“looked at him”;“he always teach me”應為“he always taught me”。另外語句重複與連詞問題需整理。建議熟悉一般過去時的規則和常用過去時動詞形式。
× Well, as far as I know, there are a lot of typing application right now and people often use it to improve their typing skills.
✓ Well, as far as I know, there are a lot of typing applications right now and people often use them to improve their typing skills.
名詞“application”應為複數“applications”以配合前文“a lot of”;代詞“it”應指代複數名詞,改為“them”。此外“typing application”作為複合名詞可以接受,但需注意單複數一致。建議注意量詞搭配與代詞一致性。
× And I sometimes use these apps to improve my typing.
✓ I sometimes use these apps to improve my typing.
原句以“And”起首在口語中可接受,但不必要。語法本身主要問題是口語連接詞冗餘,去掉“And”更簡潔。建議在正式口語或書面語中減少不必要的連接詞。
× Typing technique I think is very helpful than most of people.
✓ I think typing techniques are more helpful than for most people.
原句結構與比較級使用錯誤:比較級“more helpful than”需要比較的對象語法正確,“most of people”應為“most people”或“for most people”。名詞“Typing technique”如果指多種技巧應用複數“typing techniques”,並調整語序為“I think typing techniques are more helpful for most people.” 建議學習比較級結構及可數名詞單複數用法。