Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve pronunciation and grammar, and make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct 'BI' to 'I', and avoid incomplete clauses like 'makes editing.' Add a brief specific reason with a linking word.

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because I find it faster and more convenient. For example, when I type I can edit mistakes quickly and use spell-check, so my work looks neater and I can finish tasks faster.

Suggestion: Make sentences grammatically correct and avoid redundancy. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give two specific contexts with a linking word. Fix errors like 'it's a portable' and 'carry laptop everywhere.'

Example: I usually type on a laptop every day. For instance, I use it at the office to prepare reports and at home to study because it is portable and easy to carry around.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and combine sentences for coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct awkward phrasing like 'From my school I have learned.' Provide one concise supporting detail.

Example: I learned to type in fourth grade during a computer class. The teacher showed us proper finger placement and basic exercises, which gave me a solid foundation for later practice.

Suggestion: Work on grammar, verb forms and clarity. Correct 'Hi' to 'I', use consistent tense, and avoid vague or unclear program names. Provide specific routine and measurable progress using linking words.

Example: I improve my typing by practising with online typing programs every day. For example, in 12th grade I used a structured typing course that taught touch-typing drills; as a result, my speed increased from about 30 to 60 words per minute.

× BI prefer typing to handwriting because I'm comfortable with technology.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because I'm comfortable with technology.

The pronoun 'BI' is a typographical error and should be the subject pronoun 'I'. Use 'I' as the subject for first-person statements. Suggestion: proofread for capitalization and typos; ensure subject pronoun 'I' is used correctly.

× For example, typing is faster for me and makes editing.

✓ For example, typing is faster for me and makes editing easier.

The sentence lacks an object or complement after 'makes editing'. It needs an adjective like 'easier' to complete the idea. Suggestion: include a clear complement when using 'make' + object (make editing easier).

× I usually type on a laptop every day.

✓ I usually type on a laptop every day.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. Included to show no error of the types listed.

× For instance, I use it at the office for reports and at home for studying because it's a portable and I can carry laptop everywhere.

✓ For instance, I use it at the office for reports and at home for studying because it's portable and I can carry the laptop everywhere.

Errors: unnecessary article 'a' before 'portable' and missing definite article 'the' before 'laptop'. 'Portable' is an adjective that does not need 'a'. When referring to a specific laptop already mentioned as 'it', use 'the laptop' or keep 'it'. Suggestion: remove wrong articles and maintain consistent reference ('it' or 'the laptop').

× I learned to type at school when I was in 4th grade.

✓ I learned to type at school when I was in fourth grade.

Main sentence is correct in past tense. Change '4th' to the written form 'fourth' for formality in spoken/written answers. Suggestion: write ordinal numbers in words in formal responses.

× At the time we had a computer lesson so the teacher taught us basic typing skills.

✓ At the time, we had a computer lesson, so the teacher taught us basic typing skills.

Comma placement improves clarity for the coordinating conjunction 'so' joining two clauses. Suggestion: use commas to separate introductory phrases and clauses for readability.

× From my school I have learned how to use keyboard and how to type.

✓ At school I learned how to use a keyboard and how to type.

'From my school' is awkward; 'at school' is idiomatic. Use simple past 'learned' (not present perfect) because a past time is specified. Also include the indefinite article 'a' before 'keyboard'. Suggestion: use 'at school' and include articles where needed.

× Hi improve my typing by using online typing software in daily practice.

✓ I improve my typing by using online typing software in daily practice.

'Hi' is a typo and should be the pronoun 'I'. Suggestion: proofread to catch typographical errors replacing 'Hi' with 'I'.

× For example in class 12 grade I used to the UH typing program where it teaches me how to increase your writing skill from basic to expert and now I can type in expert base.

✓ For example, in 12th grade I used the UH typing program, which taught me how to improve my typing skills from basic to advanced, and now I can type at an advanced level.

Multiple errors: 'in class 12 grade' should be 'in 12th grade' (ordinal number and word order); 'used to the UH typing program' is incorrect – use 'used' or 'used the' but here 'used the UH typing program' or 'used' alone; 'where it teaches me' is wrong tense and pronoun — use 'which taught me'; 'increase your writing skill' mixes pronouns and uses 'writing skill' instead of 'typing skills'; 'expert base' is incorrect phrase — use 'advanced level'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (past for past learning), match pronouns (my), and use standard collocations ('typing skills', 'advanced level').