Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
I prefer handwriting because have a physical book and I can read it clearly and it has details and tapping is to like digital. I can. I don't like to watch the iPad or the phones every time.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
No, I only type typing on a laptop. When I was need to have uh, prepare a presentations or prepare some digital files, I I would need to I would use this com use a computer to do that, but usually I don't really use it.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
I'm not really it's learning it, but when I was in when I was in elementary school, I, I will, I have some computer class to attend. So we need to use a computer and I learning it during that time.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
I usually just type in some letters or playing some games and it helps me to type umm type in more faster.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 56.0Suggestion: 答题时要直接开门见山给出主题句,然后用一到两句具体、连贯的支持细节说明原因。注意语法和句子完整性,避免重复或含糊的短句。可使用连词如 because / whereas / so 来提高逻辑性。
Example: I prefer handwriting because it helps me focus and remember information better. For example, when I take notes in a notebook I can easily review detailed points and avoid screen distractions, whereas typing on a tablet often makes me lose concentration.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答应先给出明确的主题句,然后用一到两句具体说明频率和用途,避免语音填充词和重复。使用连接词如 however / when / so 来组织句子,使表达更流畅。
Example: No, I don't type every day; I only use a laptop occasionally. When I need to prepare presentations or edit digital documents, I use the laptop, but for most daily tasks I prefer writing by hand.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 58.0Suggestion: 回答要用正确时态和完整句子,先给出时间点(topic sentence),再用一两句具体说明学习场景。避免重复和语法错误,可用 past tense 描述过去经历。
Example: I learned to type when I was in elementary school. We had computer classes where we practiced basic typing skills, so I became familiar with the keyboard during that period.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 54.0Suggestion: 回答应更具体,说明具体做法(例如练习软件、打字练习或特定游戏),并用连词如 by / so that 来解释效果。避免断断续续和重复词。
Example: I improve my typing by practising with online typing tutors and playing typing games. By doing short daily exercises and timed tests, I gradually increase my speed and accuracy.
× I prefer handwriting because have a physical book and I can read it clearly and it has details and tapping is to like digital. I can. I don't like to watch the iPad or the phones every time.
✓ I prefer handwriting because I have a physical book and I can read it clearly; it has more detail, and tapping is more like using a digital device. I don't like to look at an iPad or a phone all the time.
句中缺少主语“I”,且代词与名词搭配不当(如“the iPad or the phones”改为“an iPad or a phone”更通顺)。另外原句中“tapping is to like digital”语序和表达不正确,改为“tapping is more like using a digital device”更清晰。建议练习完整主语+动词结构,注意可数名词冠词使用,并用更自然的短语表达对比。
× No, I only type typing on a laptop. When I was need to have uh, prepare a presentations or prepare some digital files, I I would need to I would use this com use a computer to do that, but usually I don't really use it.
✓ No, I only type on a laptop. When I need to prepare presentations or digital files, I use a computer to do that, but usually I don't really use it.
原句中存在冗余和代词/短语错误(如“only type typing”应为“only type”;“When I was need to have”应为“When I need to”)。“prepare a presentations”冠词与复数不一致,应为“prepare presentations”。删除重复词并使用正确时态。建议练习简洁句子,注意动词形式和冠词与名词数的一致。
× I'm not really it's learning it, but when I was in when I was in elementary school, I, I will, I have some computer class to attend. So we need to use a computer and I learning it during that time.
✓ I didn't really learn it well, but when I was in elementary school, I had some computer classes to attend. So we needed to use a computer, and I learned it during that time.
原句时态混乱且句子结构不正确(如“I'm not really it's learning it”无意义)。由于谈论过去的经历,应使用过去时:“was in elementary school”后用“had”或“attended computer classes”。“I learning it”应为过去式“I learned it”。建议理清时间点,统一使用过去时态描述过去经验,注意主谓一致和动词形式。
× I usually just type in some letters or playing some games and it helps me to type umm type in more faster.
✓ I usually just type some letters or play some games, and they help me to type faster.
并列动词应保持一致的形式,不能把“type”与“playing”并列。应改为“type ... or play ...”。“more faster”是冗余错误,应为“faster”。建议注意并列结构中动词形式一致,避免双重比较级。