Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
To be honest, I prefer typing on the computer because I often work in a lab and I need to record experimental data. Typing is faster and make it easy to edit, save and share my result to my tutorial.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
I prefer typing on a laptop because it's portable and boots up quickly. For example, when I do experiments in the lab I often don't have time and set up desktop, so laptop saves me time and lets me work anywhere.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
To be honest I can't remember exactly when I first learned to chat, but I think it was during primaries school computer lessons. Later practice a lot using my phone and laptop which helps me become faster, but I'm not be a good type until now.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
I didn't worry about my typing skills before, but now I improved them by practicing everyday. For example, I use the online typing exercising and learn touch typing technology from my students which has me type faster.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 72.0Suggestion: 总体表达清楚但有语法与用词错误,句子有些冗长且信息可更具体。注意主谓一致(make → makes),复数与单数(result → results),以及介词用法(to my tutorial 说法不自然)。可以把句子分成两到三句,提供更具体的例子或比较来增强内容连贯性。
Example: I prefer typing on a computer because I work in a lab and need to record experimental data. Typing is faster and makes it easy to edit, save and share my results with my supervisor. For example, I can quickly export data files and email them after each experiment.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 78.0Suggestion: 回答结构合理并给出例子,但有一些小的语法和表达问题(don't have time and set up desktop → don't have time to set up a desktop)。可以用连接词使句子更流畅,并补充更多具体场景或频率词以增加细节。
Example: I usually type on a laptop because it is portable and starts up quickly. For instance, during lab experiments I rarely have time to set up a desktop computer, so my laptop saves time and allows me to work right at the bench.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 内容有逻辑但表达混乱且多处语法错误(learned to chat → learned to type; primaries school → primary school; Later practice a lot → I practiced a lot; I'm not be a good type → I'm still not a good typist)。需要简洁直接的主题句,使用过去时描述学习时间,并用现在完成或现在时描述现在的水平。
Example: I can't remember the exact year, but I first learned to type during primary school computer lessons. Later I practised a lot on my phone and laptop, which has made me faster, although I'm still not a very accurate typist.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答能传达大意但时态与词汇使用不当(didn't worry → didn't worry about; now I improved → now I improve or I have improved; everyday → every day; online typing exercising → online typing exercises; learn touch typing technology from my students → learned touch-typing techniques from my students)。建议使用现在完成时表述持续的改进,并给出具体练习方法与频率。
Example: I hadn't worried about my typing skills before, but recently I have been improving them by practising every day. For example, I use online typing exercises and learned touch-typing techniques from my students, which have significantly increased my speed.
× Typing is faster and make it easy to edit, save and share my result to my tutorial.
✓ Typing is faster and makes it easy to edit, save, and share my results with my tutor.
主谓不一致(Subject-verb agreement)。原句中主语"Typing"是单数,谓语应使用第三人称单数形式"makes",而不是"make"。另外,"result"应为复数"results"以匹配上下文,且介词短语应为"share ... with my tutor"而不是"to my tutorial"。建议牢记主语为单数时动词要加-s,并注意常用搭配。
× I prefer typing on a laptop because it's portable and boots up quickly.
✓ I prefer typing on a laptop because it's portable and boots up quickly.
该句语法本身正确,无需修改。此处保留以表明第三人称单数动词"boots"正确使用(主语为it)。
× For example, when I do experiments in the lab I often don't have time and set up desktop, so laptop saves me time and lets me work anywhere.
✓ For example, when I do experiments in the lab I often don't have time to set up a desktop, so a laptop saves me time and lets me work anywhere.
句子结构和短语使用错误(Sentence structure errors / Incorrect use of articles)。原句缺少不定式"to"来连接动词短语,且名词前缺少冠词,应为"set up a desktop"和"a laptop"。建议注意不定式用法(have time to do sth)和可数名词前冠词的使用。
× To be honest I can't remember exactly when I first learned to chat, but I think it was during primaries school computer lessons.
✓ To be honest I can't remember exactly when I first learned to chat, but I think it was during primary school computer lessons.
时态使用基本正确,但名词短语错误(Incorrect use of adjectives or nouns / Article errors)。"primaries school"应为"primary school"(单数形容词性用法),并且不需要冠词。建议记住固定短语"primary school"。
× Later practice a lot using my phone and laptop which helps me become faster, but I'm not be a good type until now.
✓ Later I practiced a lot using my phone and laptop, which helped me become faster, but I'm still not a good typist yet.
动词形式和时态问题(Verb + -ing form / Past tense issue / Incorrect word choice)。原句缺少主语"I"和正确的过去时"practiced","which helps"应与前句时态一致改为"which helped"。短语"I'm not be a good type"完全错误,应改为"I'm still not a good typist yet"或"I wasn't a good typist until recently"。建议复习主语缺失、动词过去式以及名词/职业名词(typist)的正确使用。
× To be honest, I prefer typing on the computer because I often work in a lab and I need to record experimental data.
✓ To be honest, I prefer typing on the computer because I often work in a lab and need to record experimental data.
现在时使用总体正确,但句中有冗余的主语重复(Present tense issue)。在并列谓语中可以省略重复的主语"I",使句子更自然:"...I often work... and need..."。此外这句话语法上并无严重错误,调整仅为流畅性。
× I use the online typing exercising and learn touch typing technology from my students which has me type faster.
✓ I use online typing exercises and learned touch typing techniques from my teachers, which helped me type faster.
冠词与名词形式错误(Article errors / Incorrect use of nouns)及时态问题。"the online typing exercising"应为"online typing exercises"(复数名词),"learn"在叙述过去经历时应使用过去式"learned"或"have learned","touch typing technology"搭配不自然,应为"touch typing techniques"或"touch-typing method";"from my students"语义错误,假设应为"from my teachers"。此外关系从句时态应与主句一致,故改为"which helped me"。建议注意可数名词复数形式、正确搭配词以及时态一致性。
× I didn't worry about my typing skills before, but now I improved them by practicing everyday.
✓ I didn't worry about my typing skills before, but now I have improved them by practicing every day.
时态错误(Past tense issue)。原句中主句使用过去式"didn't worry"描述过去情况,而后半句"now I improved"应该用现在完成时"have improved"表示从过去到现在的变化。另注意"everyday"与"every day"的区别:此处需用副词短语"every day"(每天)。建议学习现在完成时的用法以及副词短语的正确写法。