Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
I prefer typing these days because lots of information we obtained are from the Internet and the we communicate with the AI agent. Typing is the best way for us to get information and improve our understanding of the.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
I type on the laptop keyboard every day because laptop is convenient for me. I can take it everywhere, for example when I travel abroad, but I need to deal some informations or emails, so I take the laptop with me. I use the laptop keyboard because it's more convenient.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
Ireland to type on the keyboard. When I was in primary school, I remembered that we have a lesson called computer courses. Everyone need to learn how to type through the keyboard. For example, we type not only just English but Chinese. So I learned from that.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
Usually I did not improve my typing intentionally. I always deal with the emails and some documents of Internet what I need to use computer. So with the development the use of computer I am improve my typing.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 54.0Suggestion: 回答要更简洁且语法正确。首先给出直接的主题句,然后用一到两句具体又有逻辑的支持细节,避免重复表达。注意时态和冠词(例如“the we”应改为“we”或删去),以及单词形式(obtain -> obtain/obtained, communicate -> communicating)。可用连接词如“because”或“so”来衔接原因。
Example: I prefer typing nowadays because most information is accessed online and interacting with AI is easier by typing. For example, I can quickly search facts and copy useful text into my notes, which helps me learn faster.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 58.0Suggestion: 回答要避免重复并更准确表达原因。先直接回答,然后用一到两句说明具体场景支持你的选择。注意名词单复数(information 不可数,no ‘s’),以及动词短语(deal with)。句子不要重复同一意思。
Example: I use a laptop keyboard every day because it's portable and convenient. For instance, when I travel I can still check emails and finish documents on the go, which makes the laptop more practical than a desktop.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 46.0Suggestion: 句子要更连贯并纠正不相关或错误单词(“Ireland”显然错误)。先直接回答时间点,然后用1–2句具体说明学习场景或内容。注意语法:过去时态(learned/learnt),主谓一致(we had, everyone needed),并用连接词如“when”或“for example”。
Example: I learned to type when I was in primary school. We had computer lessons where everyone practiced typing in both English and Chinese, which helped me become familiar with the keyboard early on.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 52.0Suggestion: 回答要更自然并给出具体改进方法。先回答是否有刻意练习,然后说明通过什么方式无意或有意提高(比如练习软件、触摸打字练习、设置目标速度)。注意语法(I did not -> I don't usually, deal with, improve -> improved/ improve)和句子流畅度。
Example: I don't usually practice typing intentionally; instead, I improve gradually by doing everyday tasks like writing emails and editing documents. Lately I've also been using an online typing tutor a few times a week to increase my speed and accuracy.
× I prefer typing these days because lots of information we obtained are from the Internet and the we communicate with the AI agent.
✓ I prefer typing these days because a lot of the information we obtain is from the Internet and we communicate with AI agents.
本句存在主谓一致和冠词/数词使用问题(归为主谓一致类27)。原句“lots of information we obtained are”中,information 是不可数名词,谓语应使用单数动词“is”;且时态应与“these days”一致,用一般现在时“obtain”。此外“the we communicate”多余冠词“the”;“the AI agent”改为复数或泛指“AI agents”更自然。建议:不可数名词用单数动词,使用一般现在时描述习惯性事实,删除多余冠词或改为合适形式。
× Typing is the best way for us to get information and improve our understanding of the.
✓ Typing is the best way for us to get information and improve our understanding.
本句属于时态/句子结构问题(6)。句末多出不完整的定冠词“the”,导致句子不完整。删除多余的“the”并保持一般现在时描述习惯事实。建议:写作时检查句子末尾是否有残留的词并确认句子完整。
× I type on the laptop keyboard every day because laptop is convenient for me.
✓ I type on my laptop keyboard every day because the laptop is convenient for me.
本句时态与冠词/代词使用问题(6)。应使用所有格“my laptop keyboard”来表明所有关系;在“the laptop is convenient”前需加定冠词“the”或改为“it is convenient”。建议使用“my”或用代词“it”替代重复名词。
× I can take it everywhere, for example when I travel abroad, but I need to deal some informations or emails, so I take the laptop with me.
✓ I can take it everywhere; for example, when I travel abroad and need to deal with some information or emails, I take the laptop with me.
本句包含介词使用和名词数/可数性问题(11)。动词短语应为“deal with”,而不是“deal some”;“information”是不可数名词,不能用复数“informations”。另外句子连接处标点与衔接可改进以更顺畅。建议:学习常见搭配(deal with),注意不可数名词不能加复数词尾。
× I use the laptop keyboard because it's more convenient.
✓ I use the laptop keyboard because it's more convenient.
该句本身语法正确,仅为前后句衔接重复信息。这里确认时态为一般现在时,表达习惯性事实正确。建议:可合并前句以避免重复。
× Ireland to type on the keyboard.
✓ I learned to type on the keyboard in Ireland.
原句结构不完整(句子结构错误26)。“Ireland to type on the keyboard.”缺少主语和谓语,语序错误。改为“I learned to type on the keyboard in Ireland.”以完整表达地点与动作。建议:确保句子包含主语和谓语并按英语正常语序排列(主—谓—宾)。
× When I was in primary school, I remembered that we have a lesson called computer courses.
✓ When I was in primary school, I remember that we had a lesson called computer class.
句子时态使用不当(6)。描述过去经历时应使用过去时,故“remembered”与“have”时态不一致。建议统一使用过去时:“I remember”可改为“I remember”若仍感受在脑海中,但更合逻辑的叙述过去事实为“I remember”或“I recall”可用现在时表记忆;若要直接叙述过去事实应用“I had a lesson called computer class.”另外“computer courses”复数与“a lesson”搭配不当,改为“computer class”。
× Everyone need to learn how to type through the keyboard.
✓ Everyone needs to learn how to type on the keyboard.
主谓一致错误(27)。主语“Everyone”视为单数,谓语应加第三人称单数“needs”。另外搭配应为“type on the keyboard”而不是“through”。建议:注意不定代词作主语时动词使用单数形式,熟悉常用动词搭配。
× For example, we type not only just English but Chinese.
✓ For example, we type not only English but also Chinese.
副词/连词使用问题(13)。短语“not only just”重复且不自然,应使用固定搭配“not only ... but also ...”。建议记住并使用正确的并列连接结构以表达“不仅……而且……”。
× So I learned from that.
✓ So I learned how to type from that.
过去时使用上部分缺少宾语信息(过去时问题5)。原句“learned from that”含义模糊,补全为“learned how to type from that”更清晰,时态过去时使用正确。建议在表达学习内容时明确补充学到的具体内容。
× Usually I did not improve my typing intentionally.
✓ Usually I do not improve my typing intentionally.
时态使用错误(6)。使用副词“Usually”描述经常性情况时应用一般现在时,而不是过去时“did not”。建议将动词改为一般现在时以表示习惯性行为。
× I always deal with the emails and some documents of Internet what I need to use computer.
✓ I always deal with emails and some documents on the Internet that require me to use a computer.
句子结构混乱(26)并涉及介词使用(on the Internet)及定语从句位置。“of Internet what I need to use computer”语序和引导词错误,应改为“documents on the Internet that require me to use a computer.”建议重构句子,正确使用介词短语和定语从句。
× So with the development the use of computer I am improve my typing.
✓ So with the development of computer use, my typing has improved.
时态与结构错误(6)。原句“I am improve my typing”语法错误;应使用现在完成时“has improved”表示随着发展已取得的改变,或一般现在完成时“my typing has improved”。建议:学习现在完成时用法和被动/完成结构,整理短语顺序“development of computer use”。