Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は直接的で理由と例も含まれていますが、文法ミスと語彙の選択、構成の明瞭さを改善する必要があります。具体的には「could lead to」は少し曖昧なので「can cause」に替え、接続詞を使って意見→理由→例の流れをより明確にしてください。また冗長な表現を減らし、文を2〜3文にまとめて自然さと効果を高めましょう。

Example: I prefer handwriting because it is easier on my eyes. For example, typing for long periods makes my eyes feel tired and sore, so I often take breaks when I use a computer.

Suggestion: 答えは意味が通じますが、文法の誤り（冠詞の欠落や不自然な語順）と語彙の選択を直す必要があります。具体的には“bring laptop keyboard”は不自然なので“bring my laptop”に直し、場所の列挙は接続詞（for example, and）で整理してください。さらに一文目で簡潔に答え、その後に理由と具体例を1〜2文で説明しましょう。

Example: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I don't own a desktop PC. For example, I can take my laptop to cafés or on public transport, which makes it very convenient for working on the go.

Suggestion: 内容は伝わりますが、文法ミスが目立ちます（“learned to how”や“adds”や“classroom room”など）。明確な時期を示す表現（e.g. “when I was in elementary school”）を使い、教師の役割を説明する際は自然な表現（“my classroom teacher taught me the basics”）に直してください。回答は短く2文以内でまとめましょう。

Example: I learned to type when I was in elementary school. My classroom teacher showed us the basic finger positions and we practised simple exercises.

Suggestion: 良い習慣を述べていますが、時制と語順の誤り、語彙の選択が改善点です（“Regularly exercises improved”は不自然）。改善方法を具体的に示すと高得点につながります。例えば練習の頻度、使っているツールや練習内容（タイピング練習サイトや速度を意識する等）を付け加えてください。

Example: I practise typing every day, often using online typing exercises to improve my speed and accuracy. For example, I spend 15 minutes on a typing website and then write emails to friends to apply what I learned.

× For example, while I'm typing I have to watch the screen for a long time.

✓ For example, while I type I have to watch the screen for a long time.

Using 'while' with a simple present is more natural to describe a habitual action; 'I'm typing' (present continuous) is acceptable but sounds like a single ongoing action. Change to 'I type' to match the general statement about habit and ensure parallelism with 'I have to'. ID:8

× Also I can bring laptop keyboard and do my task everywhere such as cafes and transportation system.

✓ Also I can bring my laptop and do my tasks everywhere such as cafes and on public transportation.

Missing possessive pronoun 'my' and singular/plural inconsistency 'task' should be 'tasks' for general activities. 'Transportation system' is unnatural; use 'public transportation' and include the preposition 'on'. This fixes pronoun, article, and preposition usage. ID:12

× Also I can bring laptop keyboard and do my task everywhere such as cafes and transportation system.

✓ Also I can bring my laptop and do my tasks everywhere such as cafes and on public transportation.

The noun 'keyboard' is unnecessary and 'task' should be plural 'tasks' when referring to various activities. Use 'my laptop' (possessive) and 'public transportation' for natural phrasing. ID:1

× I learned to how to type on a keyboard when adds at an elementary school.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was at elementary school.

Remove extraneous 'to' after 'learned'; 'adds' is incorrect — likely intended 'I was' or 'I attended'. Use past tense 'was' to indicate time at school and include the subject 'I'. ID:5

× My classroom room teacher taught me with basic skill.

✓ My classroom teacher taught me basic skills.

Redundant 'classroom room' should be 'classroom teacher' or simply 'teacher'. 'With basic skill' is unnatural; use plural 'basic skills' and omit 'with'. ID:13

× I try to type every day.

✓ I try to type every day.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable in present tense to express habit. No change needed. ID:6

× Regularly exercises improved my typing skills.

✓ Regular practice improved my typing skills.

'Regularly exercises' is ungrammatical here: use the noun 'regular practice' or 'regular exercises'; also ensure subject-verb agreement: 'Regular practice improved' or 'Regular exercises improved'. ID:5

× For example, I typed my e-mail to my friend.

✓ For example, I wrote an e-mail to my friend.

'Typed my e-mail' is grammatically possible but 'wrote an e-mail' is more natural for describing sending an email; use past tense 'wrote'. If emphasis is on using keyboard, 'I typed an e-mail to my friend' is also acceptable. Ensure article 'an' before 'e-mail'. ID:5