Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
Definitely typing. I mean after graduating from high school I really ride by hands because I have poor handwritten and typing is convenient and effective ways.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
Not really, but when I have to attend some classes or go to library I will bring my laptop and typing on this, but usually I just type on my mobile phone.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
I learned typed on keyboard when I was a kid in primary school. Our teacher taught me how to type correctly on the keyboard. It was really funny and practical lessons.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
Just by practice, you know, practice makes perfect. So initially I taped very slowly and don't know, I didn't know how to type. But after practicing, I am used to typing, yeah.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 58.0Suggestion: 句子不够清晰,存在语法和用词错误,且信息重复。回答应先给出主题句,然后用一到两句具体理由支持,避免冗长。注意时态与词形(例如:"I used to write by hand" 而非 "I really ride by hands";"handwriting" 不是可数)。
Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit and organize notes easily on my laptop, which saves me a lot of time compared with writing by hand.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答结构较好但句子有语法错误和不自然的表达。应直接回答频率,然后具体说明场合并用连接词使逻辑清晰。注意动词形式("type on it" 而不是 "typing on this")和冠词的使用("the library")。
Example: I don't use a desktop every day. Usually I type on my mobile phone for quick messages, but I bring my laptop to classes and the library when I need to take longer notes or write essays.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 72.0Suggestion: 整体表达较好,信息完整但有小错误和冗余。注意动词形式("learned to type")和单复数一致("lessons were" 或 "a lesson was")。可以用一两句补充具体细节让回答更生动。
Example: I learned to type when I was in primary school. Our teacher gave us practical lessons that made typing fun, and by practicing regularly I became much faster and more accurate.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答内容重复且有语法错误,句子不够简洁。应先给出方法(e.g. regular practice, online courses),然后用一到两句具体说明练习方式和效果。避免口语填充词("you know", "yeah")。
Example: I improve my typing mainly through daily practice, using online typing exercises and timed tests. At first I was very slow, but regular practice helped me increase both my speed and accuracy.
× I mean after graduating from high school I really ride by hands because I have poor handwritten and typing is convenient and effective ways.
✓ I mean after graduating from high school I really write by hand because my handwriting is poor and typing is a convenient and effective way.
主谓一致和词汇使用有误。“ride by hands”不是英语表达,应为“write by hand”。“I have poor handwritten”中“handwritten”是形容词/过去分词,需名词“handwriting”。此外“typing is convenient and effective ways”中“ways”应与单数主语“typing”一致,用单数“way”。改正后句子在语法和搭配上正确。
× Not really, but when I have to attend some classes or go to library I will bring my laptop and typing on this, but usually I just type on my mobile phone.
✓ Not really, but when I have to attend some classes or go to the library I bring my laptop and type on it; usually I just type on my mobile phone.
时态与动词形式问题:句子中不需要将一般现在的习惯行为用将来式“will”。因此使用一般现在时“bring”。“go to library”缺少定冠词,应为“go to the library”。“typing on this”中应使用动词原形“type”并用代词“it”指代笔记本。连接句子时可用分号或连词更通顺。
× I learned typed on keyboard when I was a kid in primary school.
✓ I learned to type on the keyboard when I was a kid in primary school.
过去时使用错误及动词形式问题。“learned typed”是错误搭配,应为“learned to type”(learn + to-infinitive 表示学会做某事)。另外“on keyboard”需要定冠词“the keyboard”。句子保持过去时态,符合时间状语“when I was a kid”。
× It was really funny and practical lessons.
✓ They were really funny and practical lessons.
代词与数的一致性错误(形容词/代词使用)。原句“It was ... lessons”主语和谓语不一致。“lessons”为复数,应使用复数代词和复数动词,所以改为“They were ...”。此外保持形容词“funny and practical”不变。
× So initially I taped very slowly and don't know, I didn't know how to type.
✓ So initially I typed very slowly and didn't know how to type.
动词形式错误:"taped"拼写错误,正确应为"typed"(动词过去式);句子时间一致性问题,原句夹用了现在时"don't know"和过去时"didn't know",应统一为过去时“didn't know”,因为在描述过去的情况。
× But after practicing, I am used to typing, yeah.
✓ But after practicing, I got used to typing.
时态问题:“am used to typing”一般用于现在习惯,但句子前有“after practicing”(指过去经过练习之后),应使用过去时“got used to typing”表示变得习惯于。此外“used to”后加动名词“typing”形式正确。