Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Clarify and correct grammar, make answer more concise and natural. Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, give one clear reason with a specific example, and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to connect ideas.

Example: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me concentrate better. For example, when I take notes by hand in class I remember information more easily and avoid distractions from my phone.

Suggestion: Answer directly and concisely. Begin with a clear topic sentence (No, I don't type every day), then give one or two supporting details and a brief example. Correct common errors (e.g., 'I don't type much', 'I carry a notebook everywhere').

Example: No, I don't type every day because I prefer handwriting. I always carry a small notebook with me, so I usually write notes by hand when I’m commuting or in meetings.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer with a clear time reference and simpler grammar. Use one linking phrase (e.g., 'I learned to type when...') and add a short supporting detail about how you learned. Avoid vague or unclear phrases.

Example: I learned to type when I was in primary school during computer classes. We practiced basic typing exercises, which helped me learn the keyboard quickly.

Suggestion: State one or two clear methods with specific examples and use correct tense and word choice. Start with a topic sentence (I improve my typing by...), then add supporting details (practice frequency, types of exercises) and a brief result. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also'.

Example: I improve my typing by practicing on the computer regularly. For example, I spend 30 minutes every evening typing essays to practice both my typing speed and my English, and I also use online typing tests to track my progress.

× Personally, I believe that I prefer handwriting because each help me to be more concentrated and I think that nowadays people are addicted to the mobile to to the mobile device.

✓ Personally, I prefer handwriting because it helps me concentrate, and I think that nowadays people are addicted to mobile devices.

The sentence uses incorrect pronouns and noun forms: 'each' is wrong for referring to handwriting (use 'it'), and 'help me to be more concentrated' is awkward; use 'helps me concentrate'. Also 'the mobile to to the mobile device' is repetitive and ungrammatical; use 'mobile devices'. Suggest using clear subjects and correct pronouns and plural forms.

× So I think use more handwriting will help people to be more focused and.

✓ So I think using handwriting more will help people become more focused.

Missing subject and incorrect verb form: 'use more handwriting' should be a gerund phrase 'using handwriting more' to act as the subject. 'will help people to be more focused and.' ends with an incomplete 'and'—remove it and use 'become' or 'be' for clarity.

× To be honest I'm not quite typing on anything.

✓ To be honest, I don't really type on anything regularly.

Incorrect present continuous 'I'm not quite typing' is unnatural; the intended meaning is habitual/negative simple present. Use 'I don't really type' to express frequency. Add 'regularly' for clarity.

× It is there because as I said that I prefer handwriting.

✓ It is that way because, as I said, I prefer handwriting.

Awkward structure and extra conjunction 'that'. Rephrase to 'It is that way because' and add commas around the parenthetical 'as I said' for clarity.

× So I I have a one note notebook that I carry along when I go to everywhere to write something and taking a note.

✓ So I have a OneNote notebook that I carry with me everywhere to write notes.

Redundant words and incorrect quantifier/order: 'a one note notebook' should be 'a OneNote notebook' (brand name) or 'a notebook'; 'carry along when I go to everywhere' is incorrect—use 'carry with me everywhere'. 'to write something and taking a note' mixes infinitive and -ing; use 'to write notes'.

× To be honest, I'm quite with not can remember when I turned time on the keyboard, but I think that it is around when I in the primary school that teach me at the computer subject to know how to type and.

✓ To be honest, I can't really remember when I started using a keyboard, but I think it was around primary school when the computer class taught me how to type.

Multiple tense and structure errors: 'I'm quite with not can remember' is ungrammatical—use 'I can't really remember'. 'when I turned time on the keyboard' is unclear; use 'when I started using a keyboard'. Use past tense 'it was' and 'taught me how to type' for past events. Remove trailing 'and'.

× Personally, I think that I improve my typing by typing on the computer regularly and in my free time I obtain writing my essay to practice my English and I think that this activity asked me to be have a good skill on time.

✓ Personally, I improve my typing by practicing on the computer regularly; in my free time I write essays to practice my English, and I think this activity helps me become better at typing quickly.

Tense and verb choice errors: 'I improve my typing by typing on the computer' is repetitive—use 'practicing'. 'I obtain writing my essay' is wrong; use 'I write essays'. 'this activity asked me to be have a good skill on time' is ungrammatical—use 'helps me become better at typing quickly' or 'improves my speed'. Use consistent verb forms and clear collocations.