Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
Uh, I like, uh, handwriting because, uh, handwriting is can convenient for me, uh, and uh, and I can, uh, writing everywhere every time with a paper and a pen, a pencil, umm.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
Yes, every day I type on my laptop because I now I'm a student in university and I have A and it helps solve my deadline, my task and laptop and laptop is so convenient because they have apps.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
MMM, uh, I remember this is so when I was young, about 7 or 8 years old, yes, my mother teach me uh type, type on keyboard and uh sees umm, sees uh shared experience for me.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
I'm improve my typing uh, buying umm, typing every day everywhere yes and uh, so umm, because I'm, uh, because I'm uh serve my task, my job in uh laptop every day yes, it's uh progress.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: Be concise, fluent and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers, correct grammar (e.g. "handwriting is convenient for me"), and give one or two specific reasons with linking words (e.g. "because", "so"). Limit to 2–3 sentences.
Example: I prefer handwriting because it is convenient and portable. For example, I can quickly jot down notes with a pen and paper anywhere, which helps me remember ideas better.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer, reduce repetition, and use correct grammar and linking words. State which device you use, why, and one specific example of how it helps you. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.
Example: Yes, I type on my laptop every day because I am a university student and use it for assignments and deadlines. For instance, I use apps like Word and Google Docs to write essays and manage my schedule.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: Answer directly with clear time reference and correct grammar. Use one linking phrase to add a brief detail about who taught you and why it was memorable. Avoid hesitations and unclear phrases.
Example: I learned to type when I was about seven or eight years old. My mother taught me, and I remember it as a shared activity because she practiced with me every day.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: Provide a structured answer: state one main method you use to improve typing and give a specific example of practice or resource. Use linking words like "by" or "so" and avoid repetition.
Example: I improve my typing by practicing every day using online typing exercises. For example, I spend 20 minutes daily on a typing website to increase my speed and accuracy because I use a laptop for my coursework.
× Uh, I like, uh, handwriting because, uh, handwriting is can convenient for me, uh, and uh, and I can, uh, writing everywhere every time with a paper and a pen, a pencil, umm.
✓ I prefer handwriting because it is more convenient for me, and I can write anywhere at any time with paper and a pen or a pencil.
The sentence contains several adjective/adverb and verb form errors. 'is can convenient' is ungrammatical; use 'is more convenient' to compare handwriting with typing. 'I can writing' should be 'I can write' because after 'can' the base verb is required. Also use 'anywhere at any time' instead of 'everywhere every time' for natural adverbial expression. Combine 'a pen, a pencil' into 'a pen or a pencil' for clarity.
× Yes, every day I type on my laptop because I now I'm a student in university and I have A and it helps solve my deadline, my task and laptop and laptop is so convenient because they have apps.
✓ Yes, every day I type on my laptop because I am now a university student and it helps me meet deadlines and complete tasks. The laptop is very convenient because it has useful apps.
Errors include tense and agreement: use 'I am' not 'I now I'm'. 'Student in university' is more naturally 'university student'. 'It helps solve my deadline, my task' is ungrammatical; use 'it helps me meet deadlines and complete tasks'. 'Laptop is so convenient because they have apps' mixes singular and plural; use 'The laptop... it has apps' or 'laptops... they have apps'. Also adjust articles and word order for clarity.
× MMM, uh, I remember this is so when I was young, about 7 or 8 years old, yes, my mother teach me uh type, type on keyboard and uh sees umm, sees uh shared experience for me.
✓ I remember this from when I was young, about seven or eight years old. My mother taught me how to type on a keyboard, and it was an important shared experience for me.
Use past tense 'taught' (teach -> taught) because the action happened in the past. 'Teach me uh type' should be 'taught me how to type' to use the correct verb form and include 'how'. 'Keyboard' needs the article 'a keyboard'. 'Sees shared experience' is unclear; replace with 'it was an important shared experience' to convey meaning.
× I'm improve my typing uh, buying umm, typing every day everywhere yes and uh, so umm, because I'm, uh, because I'm uh serve my task, my job in uh laptop every day yes, it's uh progress.
✓ I'm improving my typing by practicing every day, everywhere. I use my laptop daily for tasks and work, so my typing is improving.
Use present continuous 'I'm improving' instead of 'I'm improve'. 'Buying typing' is incorrect; likely meant 'practicing' or 'typing practice'. Use 'by practicing' to show method. 'Because I'm serve my task' should be 'because I use my laptop for tasks' or 'I do my work on my laptop'. Ensure consistent verb forms and clearer word choice.