Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammatical errors, avoid redundancy, and give one specific reason with a brief example. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., because, so, therefore).

Example: I prefer handwriting. I find it easier to organise my thoughts on paper because I can jot down ideas quickly and draw arrows or diagrams. For example, when I plan essays I write outlines by hand, which helps me think more clearly.

Suggestion: Answer directly which device you use and give one concise reason and a short supporting detail. Fix grammar (e.g., 'I don't have a laptop' not 'this job or laptop') and avoid repeating earlier points. Use a linking word like 'so' or 'because'.

Example: I don't use a desktop or laptop every day; I mainly use my phone, but not for long periods because it strains my eyes. Therefore, I prefer writing in a notebook for most tasks, as it feels more comfortable and less tiring.

Suggestion: Provide a clear, grammatically correct answer with a specific time and a brief explanation of how you learned. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear endings. Use linking words like 'when' and 'because' to make the sequence clear.

Example: I learned to type when I was 13 after my parents bought me a laptop. At first I practised with simple school assignments, and over time I improved by typing essays and emails regularly.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer about methods you use to improve typing or explain you don't need improvement. Be precise, avoid fillers ('uh', 'you know'), and correct grammar (‘have pain’ → ‘my fingers hurt’). If you claim to be fast, give a brief example or method (practice, online exercises).

Example: I don't actively work on my typing because I'm already fairly fast and accurate, but I maintain it by typing emails and essays regularly. If I wanted to improve further, I would use online typing exercises for 10 minutes a day to increase speed and accuracy.

× I usually prefer handwriting because I think it is the most easiest way to express my thoughts into action and.

✓ I usually prefer handwriting because I think it is the easiest way to put my thoughts into action.

'Most easiest' is incorrect because easiest is already a superlative; adding 'most' is redundant. Use 'the easiest'. Also 'express my thoughts into action' is unidiomatic; use 'put my thoughts into action'. Remove the trailing 'and'.

× It is easy rather than typing on phone because it strings.

✓ It is easier than typing on a phone because it strains my eyes less.

Use comparative 'easier than' to compare two things. Include an article 'a phone'. 'Strings' is incorrect; intended verb is 'strains'. Clarify what is strained (my eyes) and add 'less' if meaning less straining.

× I don't have this job or laptop, I have my phone and I don't use it much because it really strains my eyes.

✓ I don't have a desktop or laptop; I only have my phone, which I don't use much because it strains my eyes.

'This job or laptop' is unclear and likely wrong word choice; use 'desktop or laptop'. Use semicolon or separate clauses to avoid comma splice. Replace 'it really strains my eyes' with a relative clause 'which...'.

× As I've mentioned before that I like to write in a copy because it is much easier than typing in a screen.

✓ As I've mentioned before, I like to write in a notebook because it is much easier than typing on a screen.

'Write in a copy' is nonstandard; use 'notebook'. 'Typing in a screen' should be 'typing on a screen'. Remove unnecessary 'that' after the introductory clause and add a comma.

× When I was 13 years old, I had a laptop.

✓ When I was 13 years old, I got a laptop.

'Had' is grammatically correct but 'got' better expresses acquisition at that age. Use past simple 'got' to indicate the event of receiving or obtaining the laptop.

× Then I used to type on keyboard and sometime later it was the reason for my.

✓ Then I used to type on the keyboard, and some time later it caused pain in my fingers.

Add definite article 'the keyboard'. 'Sometime' should be two words 'some time later' or 'sometime later'; here 'some time later' or 'sometime later' both work. The original sentence is incomplete 'reason for my'—clarify 'caused pain in my fingers'. Use past tense 'caused'.

× Honestly, I type really well also in a fast pace.

✓ Honestly, I type really well, and I can type at a fast pace.

'Also in a fast pace' is awkward; use 'and I can type at a fast pace' or 'and I type at a fast pace'. Add a conjunction to join ideas and preposition 'at' with 'pace'.

× Uh, I don't really have problem in typing.

✓ Uh, I don't really have a problem with typing.

Use the article 'a problem' and the preposition 'with' after 'problem' (problem with something).

× The only thing I struggle in is writing because it really, you know, have pain in my finger.

✓ The only thing I struggle with is writing because I often have pain in my fingers.

Use the preposition 'struggle with'. 'It really, you know, have pain' is ungrammatical: use 'I often have pain' or 'it causes pain' and 'my fingers' (plural) is more natural. Ensure subject 'I' matches verb 'have'.