Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
Actually, I prefer the handwriting because I think it's meaningful, and nowadays many people use typing because it's quickly and convenient.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
Yes, I top on the laptop keyboard every day because I I major in product design. I'm a design student so I use laptop every day and I need to top on the laptop keyboard.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
All I didn't learn any professional class for type on the keyboard. I just practice when I use it, as I use it a lot, I type more faster and quick and more skillful.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
I think the way I can improve my typing skills is just practice. I use it a lot, so I practice a lot so I can type more quickly and more skillful.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 68.0Suggestion: 简洁性与准确性:回答可以更直接且语法更准确。避免冗余表达并修正语法错误(如“it's quickly”应为“it's quick”或“it’s faster”)。内容上可给出更具体的原因或对比,比如提到书写有助于记忆或创意。句子控制在最多5句内,首句直接回答问题,随后用1-2句具体阐述并用连接词衔接。
Example: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember and think more clearly. For example, when I take notes by hand I understand concepts better and develop ideas faster. However, I use typing for quick tasks because it is more convenient.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 62.0Suggestion: 发音与用词准确性:注意拼写/用词错误(“top”应为“type”)。回答应更精练,避免重复(两次“I”)。开头直接回答并给出原因,使用连接词(for example / because)使表达更连贯。可以补充具体用途(如绘图软件、文档撰写)以增加细节。
Example: Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I study product design. I use it for writing reports, running design software, and communicating with classmates, so the laptop is essential for my work.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 语法与连贯性:修正时态和结构错误(如“I didn't learn any professional class”应为“I didn’t take any professional typing class”)。避免重复词汇(more faster / more skillful),用一个清晰的时间或过程说明如何学习(self-taught, through practice)。用连接词如“so”或“by”理顺因果。
Example: I didn't take any formal typing classes; I taught myself. By using the keyboard every day for schoolwork and projects, I gradually became faster and more accurate.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 64.0Suggestion: 具体方法与词汇多样化:不要只说“practice”多次,提供具体练习方法(例如练习打字软件、定期打字测试、正确指法)。修正表达错误(“more skillful”建议用“more skilled”或“more accurate”)。保持句子简短并用连接词如“for example”“by”增强逻辑。
Example: I improve my typing mainly by regular practice. For example, I use online typing tutors to practice accuracy and speed, do short timed tests every week, and focus on correct finger placement to avoid bad habits.
× Actually, I prefer the handwriting because I think it's meaningful, and nowadays many people use typing because it's quickly and convenient.
✓ Actually, I prefer handwriting because I think it's meaningful, and nowadays many people use typing because it's quick and convenient.
句中使用了副词 quickly 修饰形容词 convenient,语法不当。应使用形容词 quick 修饰 convenient 所表达的名词性质,且前半句的定冠词 the 在不可数名词 handwriting 前通常不需要。建议:避免用副词修饰形容词,注意可数/不可数名词和冠词用法。
× Yes, I top on the laptop keyboard every day because I I major in product design.
✓ Yes, I type on the laptop keyboard every day because I major in product design.
原句中动词拼写错误 top 应为 type;此外主语 I 与动词 type 在一般现在时应使用原形。建议:注意动词拼写并核对主语与动词的一致性。
× I'm a design student so I use laptop every day and I need to top on the laptop keyboard.
✓ I'm a design student so I use a laptop every day and I need to type on the laptop keyboard.
句中缺少不定冠词 a 用于单数可数名词 laptop,且 again 动词拼写 top 应为 type。建议:可数单数名词前通常需要冠词(a/an/the),并检查动词拼写。
× All I didn't learn any professional class for type on the keyboard.
✓ I haven't taken any professional classes for typing on the keyboard.
原句时态和结构混乱:使用了过去式 didn't learn 与 not...any 的表达不自然。应使用现在完成时 haven't taken 表示至今未接受过。同时 type 作动词需用动名词形式 typing。建议:使用现在完成时表达至今未做过的经历,并将动词改为动名词。
× I just practice when I use it, as I use it a lot, I type more faster and quick and more skillful.
✓ I just practice when I use it. As I use it a lot, I type faster, more quickly and more skillfully.
错误包括比较级和副词/形容词混用:more faster 是重复比较,fast 的比较级为 faster,不加 more;quick 应用副词 quickly 修饰动词,skillful 为形容词,需用副词 skillfully 修饰动词。建议:记住常见形容词和副词形式及比较级规律,使用副词修饰动词。
× I think the way I can improve my typing skills is just practice.
✓ I think the way I can improve my typing skills is just by practicing.
结构问题:practice 作为名词可以,但更自然的表达是 by practicing(动词+ -ing)表示通过练习的方式。建议:用动名词短语表示手段或方式(by + doing)。
× I use it a lot, so I practice a lot so I can type more quickly and more skillful.
✓ I use it a lot, so I practice a lot and I can type more quickly and more skillfully.
原句中“so... so...”连接重复且 skillful 为形容词,需用副词 skillfully 修饰动词。建议:避免重复连接词,用 and 连接,并用副词形式。